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Title: Chapter 1: Blurring
| 24 Aug 2011
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Reviewer: Morgana (Signed)
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Oooh spooktacularly dark! One of the best compliments I've been paid was that my story was like a car crash- the threads leading slowly but inevitably up to the disaster- and I can happily say that that compliment applies to this story; upon rereading, you can clearly trace the route from past to present.
Brilliantly written and believable; all the characters were in character (but suitably evolved) and their motivations felt believable
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm actually in the process of writitng several sequels. It's on of my personal favorite AUs.
Title: Chapter 49: Bearding the Minister
| 16 Mar 2010
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Reviewer: Morgana (Signed)
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Title: Chapter 16: New Route
| 22 Apr 2010
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Reviewer: Morgana (Signed)
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Good chapter. I really enjoyed the interaction between the characters and the insight into their thoughts and motivations.
Author's Response: Heh, I'm glad you liked. I felt I had to flesh out Harry being a Runner bit a little more. TftR.
Title: Chapter 70: Arrival at Quiberon
| 15 Mar 2010
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Reviewer: Morgana (Signed)
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Another great chapter. I've been reading this fic for quite a while now and I really admire your characterisation; while remaining close to canon, your characters evolve with the circumstances in a very natural manner. I think it's an inspired idea that Tom's character devolved with his creation of horcruxes.
Title: Chapter 81: Tryouts
| 14 Jul 2010
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Reviewer: Morgana (Signed)
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Uh oh... Do I sense a rival for poor Dora?
A wonderfully written chapter, as always. I really enjoyed the part written from Voldemorts pov.
Title: Chapter 75: Sorting Hat Madness
| 14 Jul 2010
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Reviewer: Morgana (Signed)
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I loved your choices for the sorting; I thought they were all very appropriate, especially Tom and Neville.
Title: Chapter 76: Dorm Doings
| 14 Jul 2010
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Reviewer: Morgana (Signed)
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I'm really enjoying your evolution of Tom's character and the part written from Voldemort's pov was really interesting; you portrayed his mindset vividly and believably
Title: Chapter 77: First Day First Year
| 14 Jul 2010
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Reviewer: Morgana (Signed)
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I'm enjoying your portrayal of Dumbledore- and his machinations- and the scene in which Tom persuaded the prefects to help the first years get to class was funny and very well written. Poor old Gryffindorks didn't know what hit them ^^
Title: Chapter 78: Remembering Billy
| 14 Jul 2010
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Reviewer: Morgana (Signed)
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A very interesting and emotive chapter, I loved the Harry and Severus interaction at the end
Title: Chapter 79: Memories of the Cave
| 14 Jul 2010
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Reviewer: Morgana (Signed)
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Interesting Tom/Voldemort interaction and I loved the dynamic between Dudley, Dean, Seamus and Ron (who I expect will be getting better grades than the canon!) I found Amy's story heartbreaking
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