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Severus Snape, high ranking Death Eater and Headmaster of Hogwarts, finds out that his son is not his own when the boy's glamour begins to break. Entry in the 2009 Challenge Fest. In Response to the Cruel Reversal Challenge by FoolishWishmaker.

Takes Place: 6th Year - Snape flavour: None
Tags: Alternate Universe
Categories: Parental Snape > Guardian Snape
Rated: K - Warnings: Profanity, Violence
Chapters: 1 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 07 May 2009 / 07 May 2009
Series: Good People and Death Eaters - Challenges: Cruel Reversal
Title: Chapter 1: Blurring 24 Aug 2011
Reviewer: Morgana (Signed)
    Oooh spooktacularly dark! One of the best compliments I've been paid was that my story was like a car crash- the threads leading slowly but inevitably up to the disaster- and I can happily say that that compliment applies to this story; upon rereading, you can clearly trace the route from past to present.

    Brilliantly written and believable; all the characters were in character (but suitably evolved) and their motivations felt believable

    Author's Response: Thank you!  I'm actually in the process of writitng several sequels.  It's on of my personal favorite AUs.

Sequel to Broken Wings! Harry & Severus quest for the remaining Horcruxes. Can they fulfill the prophecy of Two Hawks Hunting and destroy Voldemort forever? AU, pre-HBP, HBP/DH noncompliant! No slash, mentor/guardian fic!

Takes Place: 6th summer - Snape flavour: None
Tags: Adoption, Alternate Universe, Azkaban Character, Creature!fic, Kidnapped
Categories: Parental Snape > Guardian Snape, Teacher Snape > Trusted Mentor Snape
Rated: T - Warnings: Character Death, Profanity, Romance/Het, Torture, Violence
Chapters: 63 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 03 May 2010 / 22 May 2009
Series: Broken Wings - Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 49: Bearding the Minister 16 Mar 2010
Reviewer: Morgana (Signed)
    Another great chapter.

Harry is a runner of drugs, but becomes addicted to alcohol along the way. Severus finds out, and tries to help him.

Takes Place: 6th summer - Snape flavour: None
Tags: Snape-meets-Dursleys
Categories: Parental Snape > Guardian Snape
Rated: 16+ - Warnings: Abusive Dursleys, Alcohol Use, Drug use, Neglect, Profanity, Rape, Self-harm, Violence
Chapters: 29 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 22 Aug 2011 / 25 Jun 2009
Series: Runner - Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 16: New Route 22 Apr 2010
Reviewer: Morgana (Signed)
    Good chapter. I really enjoyed the interaction between the characters and the insight into their thoughts and motivations.

    Author's Response: Heh, I'm glad you liked. I felt I had to flesh out Harry being a Runner bit a little more. TftR.

Dudley and Harry flee Vernon - to Severus. A different Tom Riddle, Petunia is good. Lucius and Draco are helpful. Albus is a bit misguided. The twins are only a year older than Harry, so I can make them non-Gryffindor.

Takes Place: 1st summer before Hogwarts, 1st Year - Snape flavour: None
Tags: Alternate Universe, Slytherin!Harry
Categories: Parental Snape > Guardian Snape
Rated: T - Warnings: Abusive Dursleys, Profanity
Chapters: 137 - Completed: No - Updated: 28 Sep 2014 / 28 Jun 2009
Series: None - Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 70: Arrival at Quiberon 15 Mar 2010
Reviewer: Morgana (Signed)
    Another great chapter. I've been reading this fic for quite a while now and I really admire your characterisation; while remaining close to canon, your characters evolve with the circumstances in a very natural manner. I think it's an inspired idea that Tom's character devolved with his creation of horcruxes.

Title: Chapter 81: Tryouts 14 Jul 2010
Reviewer: Morgana (Signed)
    Uh oh... Do I sense a rival for poor Dora?

    A wonderfully written chapter, as always. I really enjoyed the part written from Voldemorts pov.

Title: Chapter 75: Sorting Hat Madness 14 Jul 2010
Reviewer: Morgana (Signed)
    I loved your choices for the sorting; I thought they were all very appropriate, especially Tom and Neville.

Title: Chapter 76: Dorm Doings 14 Jul 2010
Reviewer: Morgana (Signed)
    I'm really enjoying your evolution of Tom's character and the part written from Voldemort's pov was really interesting; you portrayed his mindset vividly and believably

Title: Chapter 77: First Day First Year 14 Jul 2010
Reviewer: Morgana (Signed)
    I'm enjoying your portrayal of Dumbledore- and his machinations- and the scene in which Tom persuaded the prefects to help the first years get to class was funny and very well written. Poor old Gryffindorks didn't know what hit them ^^

Title: Chapter 78: Remembering Billy 14 Jul 2010
Reviewer: Morgana (Signed)
    A very interesting and emotive chapter, I loved the Harry and Severus interaction at the end

Title: Chapter 79: Memories of the Cave 14 Jul 2010
Reviewer: Morgana (Signed)
    Interesting Tom/Voldemort interaction and I loved the dynamic between Dudley, Dean, Seamus and Ron (who I expect will be getting better grades than the canon!) I found Amy's story heartbreaking


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