the Calico Cat
Slytherin!
Harry Potter is not a happy child. He carries a danger inside him that manifests itself soon after he arrives at Hogwarts, and it falls to his new Head of House, Severus Snape, to protect Harry, even from himself…
Takes Place: 1st Year
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Snape flavour: None
Tags: Slytherin!Harry
Categories: Parental Snape > Guardian Snape, Teacher Snape > Professor Snape
Membership status: Member
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Reviews by LegolasAnimeLuver
Rated: T
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Warnings: Abusive Dursleys, Neglect, Profanity, Violence
Chapters: 21 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 19 Jul 2011 / 28 May 2011
Series: None - Challenges: None
Chapters: 21 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 19 Jul 2011 / 28 May 2011
Series: None - Challenges: None
| Title: Chapter 8: Enemy | 15 Jun 2011 |
| Reviewer: LegolasAnimeLuver (Signed) |
- WONDERFUL! However, the story would do well without the "Snots", it is just too disgusting to read. It would be great if you could take them out.
Author's Response: Sorry about that! Kids *can* be disgusting though; I've worked with young children, and let's just say that snot was not the worst of it ;). Anyway, thanks for reviewing!
| Title: Chapter 9: Echoes | 16 Jun 2011 |
| Reviewer: LegolasAnimeLuver (Signed) |
- Ohhh this is getting good.
Author's Response: I'm glad you're enjoying the story!
| Title: Chapter 12: Hogsmeade | 24 Jun 2011 |
| Reviewer: LegolasAnimeLuver (Signed) |
- AWWWW!!! ADORABLE!!! Harry is soooo coool, and cuuute, and adorable -even with his Yami Voldemort inside of him-you know, it would be awesome if you also had another spirit inside him-for fun-something that you could say he made to protect him from Voldemort as a child-which is what has kept him sane...just an idea. Or his dragon (only his) could actually be (if you know Yu-Gi-OH! you would know what I mean by this) a cursed item but with a protective spirit that was waiting for him-and once he touched it-obtain a good, ancient spirit that shares his mind and body. (Like Yami Yugi does with Yugi), and for fun it has its own knowledge and powers-but becasue Harry is the hikari (the light side, Yami means the Dark Side yin/yang kind of thing), Harry would naturally be able to control and have more power than his Yami. Still together you could have them give Snape loads of mischevious actions that he would have to deal with....lol.
Author's Response: Thank you! I don't really know Yu-Gi-Oh, but the dark/light distinction sounds very interesting... thank you for letting me know what you think!
| Title: Chapter 13: The Thief | 28 Jun 2011 |
| Reviewer: LegolasAnimeLuver (Signed) |
- CUUUUTE!!!
Author's Response: Thank you :)!
| Title: Chapter 14: Harvest | 01 Jul 2011 |
| Reviewer: LegolasAnimeLuver (Signed) |
- OH! This is getting good! By the way doesn't Fang still need to be healed?
Author's Response: I think it was just a scratch. Still, Snape could have healed him, but he was probably too distracted by Peaseblossom and Harry's reaction. Poor Fang! But there's always Hagrid's umbrella when he gets back home :). Thank you for reviewing!
| Title: Chapter 16: Through the Trapdoor | 06 Jul 2011 |
| Reviewer: LegolasAnimeLuver (Signed) |
- Keep. Harry. ALIVE.
Author's Response: I'm afraid Harry's dead... and yet he may surprise everyone again... thank you for reviewing!
In response to a challenge: During breakfast Hedwig delivers mail to Snape, much to Harry's confusion. Why is his owl delivering mail to Snape of all people? Challenge by: Jan AQ – “Morning Post”
Takes Place: 6th summer, 6th Year - Snape flavour: None
Tags: Alternate Universe
Categories: Parental Snape > Biological Father Snape
Takes Place: 6th summer, 6th Year - Snape flavour: None
Tags: Alternate Universe
Categories: Parental Snape > Biological Father Snape
Rated: K
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Warnings: None
Chapters: 7 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 14 Apr 2012 / 28 May 2011
Series: None - Challenges: Morning Post
Chapters: 7 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 14 Apr 2012 / 28 May 2011
Series: None - Challenges: Morning Post
| Title: Chapter 1: Deliver My Letter Please, Hedwig? | 01 Jun 2011 |
| Reviewer: LegolasAnimeLuver (Signed) |
- Please continue this story! I must know what happens next!
| Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 - You Knew, Hedwig? | 24 Jun 2011 |
| Reviewer: LegolasAnimeLuver (Signed) |
- Weird...a kinship potion? I'm sorry but with Snape I would to think (after he raged a bit) that he would immeidately think of a paternity potion, instead of just a kinship. Still I am very happy that you continued on with this story! I hope you update really soon!
Author's Response:
Oh yes he thought of the 'paternity potion', as did DD mention it (obliquely), but the thing with that potion, as is hinted at, is that it is rather traumatic and a long process to make it, both for the brewer and both subjects, so it's a last resort option. 'Kinship' is a quick, practically immediate method to determine if further investigation is even needed, such as the 'parternity potion' down the track. So I think he's being a top rate Potions Master here and methodically working out the problem. He just got a little caught up in the results and the shock for a moment, that's all. He's only human after all. ;)
Thanks for your review! I'm working on the next, it's coming together...
misundersnape...
| Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 - Would You Tell Me If I Asked, Hedwig? | 06 Oct 2011 |
| Reviewer: LegolasAnimeLuver (Signed) |
- Oh wow! This is getting really good.
Author's Response:
thanks so much for your review - much appreciated!
I shall quickly respond here for everyone; I am sad to say that I now have a 'job' - awful disgusting 'thing' that it is - and therefore my time is much more limited. I am still working on this fic and the next chapter is about three quarters written, but it may take some time to finish. I'm so sorry, I really only have the weekends now to work on it, and even that is limited with the kids and all. My job was supposed to be casual, but it's turned out to be nearly 30 hours per week and with five kiddies on my own (as hubby works away) that doesn't leave much time for playing Potter. Believe me, even Pottermore hasn't had much of a look in. But rest assured, it's not abandoned, and I'm working to a conclusion. I will NEVER quit any of my fics, so hang in there. Thanks so much for all interest and reviews - I love you all soo much for your efforts.
misundersnape...
AU / Death Eaters besiege Hogwarts. A spell from Dumbledore is going astray. A cauldron explodes during potions class. And the old castle enfolds its own magic. Can some students survive the next twenty-one days?
Takes Place: 5th Year - Snape flavour: None
Tags: Adoption
Categories: Teacher Snape > Trusted Mentor Snape, Parental Snape > Guardian Snape
Takes Place: 5th Year - Snape flavour: None
Tags: Adoption
Categories: Teacher Snape > Trusted Mentor Snape, Parental Snape > Guardian Snape
Rated: 16+
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Warnings: Abusive Dursleys
Chapters: 15 - Completed: No - Updated: 20 Dec 2011 / 03 Jun 2011
Series: None - Challenges: None
Chapters: 15 - Completed: No - Updated: 20 Dec 2011 / 03 Jun 2011
Series: None - Challenges: None
| Title: Chapter 4: Day two - Tuesday, third of September - part two | 13 Jul 2011 |
| Reviewer: LegolasAnimeLuver (Signed) |
- It is getting good! Oh for suggestion: since Harry always seems to wake up no matter receiving a Dreamless Sleep (like in CoS after Lockhart removed his arm) you ought to have him need a stronger dose!