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Moon_Willow [Contact] Better be Ravenclaw!
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About me:

Seventeen, and undergoing a huge phase in getting readdicted to Harry Potter.

Books are larger than life. :P

Can't finish a story even if my life depended on it.

Undergoing schizophrenia in the form of furious, non-stop reading.

Goes about shouting Lumos at lights.

Enough said. :)

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"Wit beyond measure is man's greatest treasure." ~Albus Dumbledore

"Git beyond measure is my greatest feature." ~Severus Snape 

 

"Sometimes even to live is an act of courage" ~Seneca

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What's Owed by JAWorley starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 37]
Harry Potter and Mark Evans hung onto each other for dear life in Little Whinging. For three years Harry worried about leaving Mark behind when he left for Hogwarts, and when Mark discovers he’s a wizard, and that Harry’s one too, he finally gets the chance to repay Harry for all the kindness showed him.

Takes Place: 5th summer, 5th Year - Snape flavour: Snape is Angry, Canon Snape, Snape Comforts, Snape is Kind, Snape is Loving, Snape is Mean, Snape is Stern
Tags: Adoption, Alternate Universe, Injured!Harry, Sibling Addition
Categories: Healer Snape, Snape Equal Status to Harry > Foes Snape and Harry, Teacher Snape > Professor Snape, Parental Snape > Guardian Snape
Rated: T - Warnings: Abusive Dursleys, Neglect, Physical Punishment Non-Spanking, Violence
Chapters: 4 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 20 Feb 2011 / 20 Feb 2011
Series: None - Challenges: Mark's Debt to Repay
Title: Chapter 4: What's Owed 20 Feb 2011
Reviewer: Moon_Willow (Signed)
    Another piece of wonderful work. It's nice, loved it. It's not rushed at all. It's a kinda nice epilogue. ^^ Good work!

Past Featured Story Digging for the Bones by Paganaidd starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1254]
Rather than allowing Harry to stay at Diagon Alley after he blew up Aunt Marge, the Ministry sends Harry back to the Dursleys. Harry returns to school after a terrible summer, to find that he's not the only one with this kind of secret. A student has been killed by his family. New screening measures are put into place by the Ministry: Every student must be given a medical exam and interview to look for child abuse. With Dumbledore facing an inquiry, Snape is entrusted with the task of making sure EVERYONE receives one.

Takes Place: 3rd Year - Snape flavour: None
Tags: Alternate Universe, Snape-meets-Dursleys
Categories: Healer Snape, Parental Snape > Biological Father Snape, Parental Snape > Guardian Snape
Rated: 16+ - Warnings: Abusive Dursleys, Character Death, Neglect, Self-harm, Suicide Themes, Violence
Chapters: 62 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 27 Nov 2014 / 24 Feb 2011
Series: None - Challenges: New Measures for Screening Abuse
Title: Chapter 15: Halloween, 1979 08 Apr 2011
Reviewer: Moon_Willow (Signed)
    "You're my best friend..."

    Lily stopped pacing, to look at him with a little smile on her lips, "Still?"

    Severus sighed, with a small, sad, fond smile of his own, "Still."

    Awww...Sweet!

    The chapter was somehow, awkward, but judging from the subject it dwelled on, it'll be strange if it wasn't.

    But the last part was infinitely sweet... Couldn't keep my huge sheepish grin away.. :P

    Oh, I loved the way you used the lyrics, although, if I could point out, I think Kate Bush was English, not Irish. :)

    Update soon!

    Author's Response:

    Oh gosh, you're quite right!  Thank you.  I'm not sure why I didn't check that...I'll fix it.

    I tried to do this chapter without making it buckets-of-awkward, but there was no way to avoid *some* awkwardness :-)

    I'm glad you enjoyed the sweetness. 


Title: Chapter 2: Aftermath 27 Feb 2011
Reviewer: Moon_Willow (Signed)
    OH my god! Brilliant! I can hardly wait for Snape to start the investigation! What's gonna happen then? Update soon! The suspense is killing me, literally!

Title: Chapter 4: The Seeker In Hiding 03 Mar 2011
Reviewer: Moon_Willow (Signed)
    Uh oh. I can hardly wait for the next chapter. It's gonna be fun fun fun!!! Update soon!!! Please! It's killing me!

Title: Chapter 5: Exam 07 Mar 2011
Reviewer: Moon_Willow (Signed)
    Hmm. I think the Dursleys are gonna be expecting a surprise visit sometime soon.

    Well, I was actually expecting more resistance from Harry. I mean, he went to such lengths to avoid the appointment. And Snape's awfully emotionless and detached, which I do somehow understand that it's what healers do. But well, I expected a more violent reaction.

    Anyhow, brilliant work, and update soon!

    Author's Response:

    Harry had pretty much figured he'd gotten away with it--at least for the day.  Severus has found that a surprised student is a more compliant student.

    I think Severus is dealing with an awful lot and tends to retreat behind that mask.

    The blow-up is still ahead. 


Title: Chapter 7: Secrets 12 Mar 2011
Reviewer: Moon_Willow (Signed)
    And the bomb strikes. BOOM! I didn't see that coming. Great job!! Please please please update soon! I want to see Harry's reaction, and that particular cliffie is kinda grating on my nerves!

Title: Chapter 16: Appointment in Hogsmeade 16 Apr 2011
Reviewer: Moon_Willow (Signed)
    Aw. It's a refreshing experience reading about how Snape can be both indifferent and yet painfully aware of the pain that Lily's death cause him, though he's getting more and more aware of the pain. The mask is falling. But also, a quite new experience reading about a Snape who's not nasty to Harry. :)

    I do hope Snape realises Harry's ruminations on dying soon. I don't really want him to die. (Harry being near death doesn't really bother me, though. Snape's always there. :) )

    A very wonderful job on depicting both Harry's and Snape's minds and thoughts, and only through the small gestures they make! I can totally relate to them. Good job!! Update soon, i can't wait. :)

Title: Chapter 18: Lunch with Snape 25 Apr 2011
Reviewer: Moon_Willow (Signed)
    Oh great! Lily's coming in! You're making me hyperventilate! update soon, okay?

Title: Chapter 26: My Child 17 Jun 2011
Reviewer: Moon_Willow (Signed)
    Awesome chapter! I simply ADORE the last part. A lot. VERY much. :D "my child" indeed.

    A question though. I thought Snuffles IS Sirius? Or is this a fluke? Hmm...

    update soon!! I look forward to it!

Title: Chapter 27: Panic 25 Jun 2011
Reviewer: Moon_Willow (Signed)
    Oh my! Interesting chapter! I bet Harry's got a ton of questions now! Imagine watching Snape converse with Petunia about his own grandparents! Now I can't wait for the next chapter~ Update soon, yeah?


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