Hufflepuff!
Albus Dumbledore admits he often asks too much, but this time he has decided to ask something altogether different. With the shadows of war encircling them all, it will take incredible wit and strength to see his soldiers through to the end. What he needs, more than anything, is for them to work together - and Albus is nothing if not full of ideas on how to make the impossible happen.
Takes Place: 6th summer
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Snape flavour: None
Tags: Adoption, Alternate Universe, Snape-meets-Dursleys
Categories: Parental Snape > Guardian Snape
Membership status: Member
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Reviews by misundersnape
Rated: 16+
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Warnings: Abusive Dursleys, Character Death, Neglect, Profanity, Violence
Chapters: 6 - Completed: No - Updated: 14 Jun 2011 / 17 May 2011
Series: None - Challenges: None
Chapters: 6 - Completed: No - Updated: 14 Jun 2011 / 17 May 2011
Series: None - Challenges: None
| Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Too Much | 31 May 2011 |
| Reviewer: misundersnape (Signed) |
- Poingnant beginning - a great taster of things to come I hope...
misundersnape...
Harry Potter is not a happy child. He carries a danger inside him that manifests itself soon after he arrives at Hogwarts, and it falls to his new Head of House, Severus Snape, to protect Harry, even from himself…
Takes Place: 1st Year - Snape flavour: None
Tags: Slytherin!Harry
Categories: Parental Snape > Guardian Snape, Teacher Snape > Professor Snape
Takes Place: 1st Year - Snape flavour: None
Tags: Slytherin!Harry
Categories: Parental Snape > Guardian Snape, Teacher Snape > Professor Snape
Rated: T
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Warnings: Abusive Dursleys, Neglect, Profanity, Violence
Chapters: 21 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 19 Jul 2011 / 28 May 2011
Series: None - Challenges: None
Chapters: 21 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 19 Jul 2011 / 28 May 2011
Series: None - Challenges: None
| Title: Chapter 1: The Sorting | 29 May 2011 |
| Reviewer: misundersnape (Signed) |
- Great start - farely rare to have a Slytherin!Harry sorting begin from Severus' pov. It was very well done and seems perfectly in character.
Looking forward to more.
misundersnape...
Author's Response: I'm glad you liked Snape's POV; he'll be our eyes and ears for most of this story. Thank you for reviewing!
AU / Death Eaters besiege Hogwarts. A spell from Dumbledore is going astray. A cauldron explodes during potions class. And the old castle enfolds its own magic. Can some students survive the next twenty-one days?
Takes Place: 5th Year - Snape flavour: None
Tags: Adoption
Categories: Teacher Snape > Trusted Mentor Snape, Parental Snape > Guardian Snape
Takes Place: 5th Year - Snape flavour: None
Tags: Adoption
Categories: Teacher Snape > Trusted Mentor Snape, Parental Snape > Guardian Snape
Rated: 16+
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Warnings: Abusive Dursleys
Chapters: 15 - Completed: No - Updated: 20 Dec 2011 / 03 Jun 2011
Series: None - Challenges: None
Chapters: 15 - Completed: No - Updated: 20 Dec 2011 / 03 Jun 2011
Series: None - Challenges: None
| Title: Chapter 1: Chapter one - prologue - how all of this began | 03 Jun 2011 |
| Reviewer: misundersnape (Signed) |
- Despite your not so perfect English this is a good story. I'm enjoying it so far.
Perhaps the only thing I might have done differently at this stage is actually had the cauldron explode and hurt someone (a student or even Snape, or perhaps even both), even just a minor injury - so Snape had a (better) reason to send another student to the door to try to get out, however without knowing your plans for the direction of this I suppose this is a premature judgement. I imagine you have lots of incidents planned for the next 21 days.
Looking forward to more.
misundersnape...
What will Harry do when he watches Voldemort's snake attack Snape? How will this change the view that both men have for each other
Takes Place: 8 - Pre Epilogue (adult Harry) - Snape flavour: None
Tags: None
Categories: Snape Equal Status to Harry > Comrades Snape and Harry, Teacher Snape > Trusted Mentor Snape, Teacher Snape > Professor Snape
Takes Place: 8 - Pre Epilogue (adult Harry) - Snape flavour: None
Tags: None
Categories: Snape Equal Status to Harry > Comrades Snape and Harry, Teacher Snape > Trusted Mentor Snape, Teacher Snape > Professor Snape
Rated: K
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Warnings: Character Death
Chapters: 1 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 18 Jun 2011 / 18 Jun 2011
Series: None - Challenges: None
Chapters: 1 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 18 Jun 2011 / 18 Jun 2011
Series: None - Challenges: None
| Title: Chapter 1: Look at me | 18 Jun 2011 |
| Reviewer: misundersnape (Signed) |
- *sob* We got a redemption, but still a dead Snape.
I am happy for that redemption, but I'd much rather a live Snape.
Good effort for your first fic! :D
misundersnape...
Author's Response:
Thank you for your review.
No one else would pack up Snape's belongings, so Harry volunteered. Post DH, pre-Epilogue
Takes Place: 8 - Pre Epilogue (adult Harry) - Snape flavour: None
Tags: None
Categories: Teacher Snape > Professor Snape
Takes Place: 8 - Pre Epilogue (adult Harry) - Snape flavour: None
Tags: None
Categories: Teacher Snape > Professor Snape
Rated: K+
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Warnings: None
Chapters: 1 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 12 Jul 2011 / 12 Jul 2011
Series: None - Challenges: None
Chapters: 1 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 12 Jul 2011 / 12 Jul 2011
Series: None - Challenges: None
| Title: Chapter 1: What-Might-Have-Beens | 17 Apr 2012 |
| Reviewer: misundersnape (Signed) |
- *is crying*
You have managed to capture these sentiments so beautifully. Yes, there must have been a time when Harry allowed these revelations to truly sink in to cause him to name one of his children after the man... there was no deep comprehension in JK's words of 17 year old Harry's understanding, so it had to have come later. This was a fabulous idea - WEll done - fantastic!
Thanks for this little piece of closure.
misundersnape...
This is a tribute poem for Severus, told in his voice, or how I think his voice would be. It's a what-might-have-been, if DH had a different ending.
Takes Place: 8 - Pre Epilogue (adult Harry) - Snape flavour: None
Tags: None
Categories: Snape Equal Status to Harry > Comrades Snape and Harry, Teacher Snape > Professor Snape
Takes Place: 8 - Pre Epilogue (adult Harry) - Snape flavour: None
Tags: None
Categories: Snape Equal Status to Harry > Comrades Snape and Harry, Teacher Snape > Professor Snape
Rated: T
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Warnings: None
Chapters: 1 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 14 Jul 2011 / 14 Jul 2011
Series: None - Challenges: None
Chapters: 1 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 14 Jul 2011 / 14 Jul 2011
Series: None - Challenges: None
| Title: Chapter 1: Behind the Mask | 14 Jul 2011 |
| Reviewer: misundersnape (Signed) |
- Wow - great job. I don't write poems, so my opinion only comes as 'reader', but I hope that my enjoyment counts for something.
Reading this has also come on the back of seeing the final film, and I want you to know that it made me feel a bit better. Especially to know that although the book and now films are finished that I can always enjoy Severus in the fanfiction world! Thank you so much for sharing!
:D
misundersnape...
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After the war, harry wants to give Snape a proper burial. He finds the potions master clinging to life, he takes it upon himself to help Sev live in a world he never expected to see.
Takes Place: 8 - Pre Epilogue (adult Harry) - Snape flavour: None
Tags: Alternate Universe, Kidnapped, Physical Impairment
Categories: Reverse Roles > Healer Harry, Reverse Roles > Parental Harry
Takes Place: 8 - Pre Epilogue (adult Harry) - Snape flavour: None
Tags: Alternate Universe, Kidnapped, Physical Impairment
Categories: Reverse Roles > Healer Harry, Reverse Roles > Parental Harry
Rated: T
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Warnings: Romance/Het
Chapters: 1 - Completed: No - Updated: 28 Jul 2011 / 26 Jul 2011
Series: None - Challenges: None
Chapters: 1 - Completed: No - Updated: 28 Jul 2011 / 26 Jul 2011
Series: None - Challenges: None
| Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 | 29 Jul 2011 |
| Reviewer: misundersnape (Signed) |
- Hee, hee - probably not!
This is a pretty cliche plot idea so far, but heh, what better thing to read so soon after watching the poor man's demise in the latest film. Thanks for the ray of hope!
A few mistakes with sentence structure, capitilisation, etc, so a read over to catch them would be beneficial.
I'm looking forward to seeing how Severus will take the proposal of Harry looking after him.
misundersnape...
After arriving back at school a week early, Harry's new school year is set to be filled with mystery and adventure. Who is the Whispering Man and what does his presence at Hogwarts mean? Is the Wizarding World safe now that He Who Must Not Be Named is returning to power? Join the adventure as Harry, Ron and Hermione navigate their Fourth Year at Hogwarts School of Witchcraft and Wizardry.
Takes Place: 4th summer, 4th Year - Snape flavour: Canon Snape, Snape is Secretive
Tags: Azkaban Character, Elves, Kidnapped, Snape-meets-Dursleys
Categories: Snape Equal Status to Harry > Foes Snape and Harry, Misc > Strictly Canon Universe, Teacher Snape > Professor Snape
Takes Place: 4th summer, 4th Year - Snape flavour: Canon Snape, Snape is Secretive
Tags: Azkaban Character, Elves, Kidnapped, Snape-meets-Dursleys
Categories: Snape Equal Status to Harry > Foes Snape and Harry, Misc > Strictly Canon Universe, Teacher Snape > Professor Snape
| Title: Chapter 1: An Unexpected Visitor | 11 Aug 2011 |
| Reviewer: misundersnape (Signed) |
- OMG - this is a brilliant and facinating start. So rich with description and detail.
I can already tell this is going to be a fabulous read and am eagerly looking forward to more.
Well Done!
misundersnape...
Author's Response: That is an amazing review... Thank you soooooo much!! So glad you're enjoying it! Thank you!
| Title: Chapter 2: Strangers In The Park | 11 Aug 2011 |
| Reviewer: misundersnape (Signed) |
- My only whine - no Dursley/Snape confrontation - I have a feeling you would have done that REALLY well!
Otherwise - truely excellent chapter. Though I do have to wonder why Snape 'waited' for Harry to awaken, and didn't force the issue/help, or take Harry to help. Usually people don't faint for benign reasons - especially healthy, young, teenaged boys.
I wonder what Severus thought of Harry's statement about the Dursleys leaving him lying unconscious - I hope we'll see next chap or so...
Great job - I am enjoying very much!
misundersnape...
Author's Response: Hmmm, there may be more to come with the Dursleys... lets just leave it at that...! But did Harry 'faint' or is there something strange going on? I guess Snape had his reasons for waiting... Really glad you still like it! Thanks so much for reviewing!
| Title: Harry Potter and the Whispering Man | 11 Aug 2011 |
| Reviewer: misundersnape (Signed) |
- Another good chapter!
Ooh, those dreams are an ominous sign... dreams in a fic never hint at something good coming along... lol ;)
Snape found Harry's wand and was returning it via Dobby - Harry always underestimates that man. Hey, but he has been quite harsh here at times. I'm still wondering why he let Harry's bout of unconciousness go on for so long, and then made him walk (i.e. run) behind him up to the classroom.
Bloody Peeves - that poltergiest is a nuciance! Thank goodness for Nick and the threat of the Baron.
Alrighty - I'm ready for more.
misundersnape...
Author's Response: Another great review! I did think about maybe not having dreams, but I got an idea and just had to fit one in there! While I was writing, Peeves was really starting to annoy me, but I took that as a good sign!! Thanks for yet another fab review - they're really lovely!!