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After arriving back at school a week early, Harry's new school year is set to be filled with mystery and adventure. Who is the Whispering Man and what does his presence at Hogwarts mean? Is the Wizarding World safe now that He Who Must Not Be Named is returning to power? Join the adventure as Harry, Ron and Hermione navigate their Fourth Year at Hogwarts School of Witchcraft and Wizardry.

Takes Place: 4th summer, 4th Year - Snape flavour: Canon Snape, Snape is Secretive
Tags: Azkaban Character, Elves, Kidnapped, Snape-meets-Dursleys
Categories: Snape Equal Status to Harry > Foes Snape and Harry, Misc > Strictly Canon Universe, Teacher Snape > Professor Snape
Rated: K - Warnings: Torture, Violence
Chapters: 2 - Completed: No - Updated: 30 Jul 2014 / 29 Jul 2011
Series: None - Challenges: None
Title: Harry Potter and the Whispering Man 11 Aug 2011
Reviewer: misundersnape (Signed)
    *reviews merely to avoid nasty anti fic reading hex*

    I reckon it's Snape, not realising it's Harry. But wtf? Why did Sirius bolt and abandon him? Not very Gryffindor of him, is it?

    Eyelids closing... if you hadn't mentioned it I would never have thought it. But now that you have, I assume you have some plot reason for needing Harry's eyes shut... I shall ponder as I await an update.

    Keep the chaps coming - loving it!
    misundersnape...

    Author's Response: Oh my God, you reviewed every chapter - I could never hex you now!!! Damn, shouldn't have mentioned the eyes - you're on to me! Thank you thank you thank you for reviewing, you're awesome!!

Title: Harry Potter and the Whispering Man 12 Aug 2011
Reviewer: misundersnape (Signed)
    Aww, indeed! Great chapter - I knew it was Snape, but forgot he couldn't even see Harry - duh me! So, yes, Snape didn't just accidentally mistake Harry for someone else - he hit him by complete coincidence.
    As for a Defence instructor - well, most fics feature a female love interest for Snape (so cliche), but how about doing something different, how about go for a male, slightly older than Snape, Slytherin, but instead of someone Snape detests, how about someone that remembers him from school and they actually get along - that's different. (I'm definitely NOT suggesting slash - I'm not a fan of that at all!) A 'Lucius' contemporary, if you will, but not on the side of the Dark. Someone who didn't stick out too much at school, but came into his own as he matured - a good role model for Severus. Sort of a Slytherin Arthur Weasley, but not necessarily with as many of the kiddies.
    I haven't thought what you could 'do' with him yet, but I'm sure you could figure something out.
    I've never read anything like this so consider it unique - what you think?

    Anyway - great job, looking forward to more.
    misundersnape...

    Author's Response: Ohhh, really liking these ideas!! Eww, no love interest, haha!! Like the idea of a whole 'Slytherin Arthur' thing - could be really interesting. Thanks for the ideas - I shall put them to good use!! And thanks for the great review!!

Title: Harry Potter and the Whispering Man 17 Aug 2011
Reviewer: misundersnape (Signed)
    Hagrid was perfect, never fear.
    Oh dear, I'm really concerned about that stray egg ending up in the purple potion - that can't be good. Silly Harry for not admitting the gaffe, that could potentially be fatal for someone!
    Nice for Harry to finally see his friends - I'm eager to see their reactions.
    Great chap!
    misundersnape...

    Author's Response: Yesss, a perfect Hagrid! You could be right about the egg, silly Harry... Great review - thank you so much!!

Title: Harry Potter and the Whispering Man 17 Aug 2011
Reviewer: misundersnape (Signed)
    wow - very exciting!
    Great choice for a DADA teacher - I'm looking forward to getting to know him better and what you have planned for his character.
    Poor Harry, that might nave been a tad terrifying - but Professor Ferro is quite correct - no-one even raised their wands to defend him - tut, tut! Let's hope he can whip these lazy warriors into shape.
    More, asap... thanks.
    misundersnape...

    Author's Response: Oh phew, wanted to make a good first impression of his character, glad I pulled it off! Haha, more is on the way - promise! A great big thank you for reviewing (yet again) you really are amazing!

Title: Harry Potter and the Whispering Man 22 Aug 2011
Reviewer: misundersnape (Signed)
    I've not yet got my pottermore welcome email either - so let's share commiserations together...
    Great chapter!
    Ah, that bloody egg did come in to play - I'm so pleased to see it hasn't been a fatal issue... well, so far. No doubt Snape might not be done with Harry, even though he's been reduced to unconsciouness, and it might still end up fatal for Harry ;)
    Draco - hiding on the desk - funny. And sucking up to Ferro - I have a feeling that Ferro does know Lucius even though he said he didn't; good on him, damping down the brat's audacious need to brag and swagger about over his name. and now he's been brought to shame accidentally by Snape in class too - whoo hoo! No wonder he took to Harry with his fists - let's say frustration, shall we? *snigger*
    Looking forward to more... bring it, baby!
    *holds hand out for Choccy frog*
    misundersnape...

    Author's Response: Commiserations, my friend, commiserations... Yes, you cought on about the egg, but I did enjoy doing all those things to Draco - I think I have a strange yearning to just be really mean to him, he'll just have to deal with it! I shouldn't think Snape knows what to do with himslef - a fight and a passed out student, all in one day!! Well, here you go, a Chocolate Frog, just as promised!! Hope it helps you forget about Pottermore, and keeps you reviewing!! *wink wink*

Title: Harry Potter and the Whispering Man 22 Aug 2011
Reviewer: misundersnape (Signed)
    Oh, nearly forgot - where is Sirius, and why could Hedwig not deliver the letter? That sounds ominous...
    If we didn't already know Padfoot's animagus I might have suspected Ferro's involvement somehow - but now I've got nothing.
    misundersnape...

    Author's Response: Oh, hello again! Hmmmm, yes, best look out for Sirius, what exactly is going on there? Now I'm in a muddle - do I give you another Chocolate Frog? Seeing as you reviewed again? Gah! Oh here, take another one, they're deliciously virtual, not at all like those real ones that hop about all over the place - I mean, who knows where they've been?

Title: Harry Potter and the Whispering Man 01 Sep 2011
Reviewer: misundersnape (Signed)
    Another fantastic chapter!

    Hmm, Severus was on edge? Wonder what that means?

    And Sirius is safe, thank goodness. Your mystery character is very intiguing.

    Nice to see signs of Severus' past and present friendship. It'll do him (and probably everyone else) good, I imagine. Good intentions, Ferro reckons, hey? Most of the time. Heh, heh... yeah, sure. *snort*

    Looking forward to more!
    misundersnape...

    Author's Response: Gah! I'm so sorry! Thank you so much for reviewing!! Glad you liked the chapter, and love all your questions! Everything will be revealed soon...

Albus Dumbledore left Harry Potter on his Aunt's doorstep one Halloween night, in the sorrowful knowledge that he was condemning the boy to nine dark and difficult years. However, Fate intervened, sending Harry into the arms of a loving family whose very identity is intertwined with magic.

The only problem is, it's the wrong sort of magic and Harry, proud of his adoptive family and loyal as any Gryffindor, is determined not to compromise. Severus Snape would have found this hilarious... except the boy somehow ended up in his House!

Takes Place: 0 - Pre Hogwarts (before Harry is 11) - Snape flavour: None
Tags: Alternate Universe
Categories: Teacher Snape > Professor Snape
Rated: K+ - Warnings: Profanity
Chapters: 2 - Completed: No - Updated: 07 Oct 2011 / 01 Aug 2011
Series: None - Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 1: Second Sight 01 Aug 2011
Reviewer: misundersnape (Signed)
    Awesome start - I'm definitely interested in seeing more...
    misundersnape...

The Death Eaters have Dumbledore cornered, and Snape is about to kill him. Harry won't let that slide.

Takes Place: 7th summer - Snape flavour: None
Tags: None
Categories: Snape Equal Status to Harry > Comrades Snape and Harry, Snape Equal Status to Harry > Foes Snape and Harry, Healer Snape
Rated: K+ - Warnings: Character Death
Chapters: 9 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 29 Aug 2011 / 06 Aug 2011
Series: None - Challenges: Avada Kedavra Challenge
Title: Chapter 1: The Problem 13 May 2012
Reviewer: misundersnape (Signed)
    *hides eyes* Did he really just get Harry instead of DD... oh what a disaster if so!
    Great start to this... on to more...
    misundersnape...

Title: Chapter 2: The Solution 13 May 2012
Reviewer: misundersnape (Signed)
    Yes, did he really just do that? And I'm astonished that he could 'fix' this bungle at all... amazing, I hope you're going to explain it all in time...
    misundersnape...


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