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Penname:
| Bil [Contact]
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| Member since: 07 Dec 2005
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| OK, not sure what to say. Love HP, like Snape and Harry gen fic, occasionally write some. Don't post much fic because am terrible at editing, so they just sit around in folders looking pretty (or not so pretty). Also draw a bit, but am no da Vinci. Am apparently not fond of pronouns today... [Report This]
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Title: Chapter 1: Rebirth
| 12 May 2012
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Reviewer: Bil (Signed)
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Well done. I like how Severus turns Harry around. Also, "Icarus" is the perfect nickname for him!
Title: Chapter 1: Ripples of Light
| 14 May 2012
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Reviewer: Bil (Signed)
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Nice. I like that Snape can teach him a lesson just by sitting next to him (great line!).
A happy-ever-after for Snape and Harry. Starts first day of term in Harry's second year, although he has spent all summer at Privet Drive and had no problems getting on the train to Hogwarts. Entry in the 2012 Prompt Fest. Prompts: slippery when wet, a surprised squawk
Takes Place: 2nd summer
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Snape flavour: None
Tags: Alternate Universe
Categories: Teacher Snape > Trusted Mentor Snape
Rated: K
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Warnings: None
Chapters: 1
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Completed: Yes
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Updated: 14 May 2012 / 14 May 2012
Series: None
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Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 1: A Little Bird
| 15 May 2012
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Reviewer: Bil (Signed)
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Nice! I like how you get Snape to start wondering about what Harry's really like (and Harry trying to use him as a post owl is hilarious!). I also really liked Harry's reaction to Snape trying to step back once Sirius came into the picture. Good fic :)
Author's Response: Thanks for the compliments.
Christmas break is a lonely time for an eleven-year-old with no friends to spend it with; however, on a walk, he manages to find one in the strangest way. Add to that a Potions Master unaccustomed to silence and it seems three very different beings are in the perfect place at the perfect time to help each other when they need it most, bringing everything together. Entrant into the 2012 prompt fest. Prompts: Bumblebee, Broken teacup.
Takes Place: 1st Year
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Snape flavour: None
Tags: None
Categories: Teacher Snape > Professor Snape, Fic Fests > #14 Prompt Fest 2012
Rated: K
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Warnings: None
Chapters: 1
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Completed: Yes
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Updated: 16 May 2012 / 16 May 2012
Series: None
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Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 1: Bumbled
| 19 May 2012
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Reviewer: Bil (Signed)
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I liked the bit from the bee's pov - unusual! Snape's careful investigation of what Harry would do was fun. I liked also how careful and gentle Harry was with the bee.
Author's Response: Thanks!! It was difficult navigating the bees pov too, I kept humanising it :) And dont you just adore a careful, gentle, cute little Harry? ^^ Thanks again!
Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2
| 17 May 2012
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Reviewer: Bil (Signed)
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I really like the set up of this story and how as you go along you're answering questions (I wondered why Draco was using a razor in the first chapter, for eg, and now you've explained they can't use magic) yet leaving mystery still in the story.
Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3
| 17 May 2012
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Reviewer: Bil (Signed)
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What a fantastic twist! I am so glad poor Harry's got some people to rally around him and help him. Poor Draco and Severus! It's hard enough dealing with a real toddler without one in the body of an adult.
Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5
| 17 May 2012
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Reviewer: Bil (Signed)
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Fantastic story! I really enjoyed reading it. The characters were well drawn (especially toddler!Harry) and the plot moved at just the right speed up to a very natural-feeling conclusion that built on everything that had gone before. Very well done! Thanks for writing :)
Author's Response: Thank you for the reveiews! I'm so glad that you liked it.
Title: Chapter 1: The War
| 19 May 2012
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Reviewer: Bil (Signed)
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Wow. This is a powerful piece of work. And darn it, someone really should have done this to Harry in the books! Snape was very in character, doing what was necessary without being nice about it. The ending is shiver-inducing. Very very well done!
Title: Chapter 7: Nights of the Darkest Kind
| 11 Jun 2012
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Reviewer: Bil (Signed)
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I love the idea of Snape haunting the castle in his wolf form. Cool fic!
Author's Response: Thanks Bil!
Title: Chapter 1: The Dark One's Apprentice
| 08 Jun 2012
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Reviewer: Bil (Signed)
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This a fun universe.
Author's Response: Thanks! And thanks for reviewing!
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