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Title: Chapter 2: Burying The Hatchet
| 25 Jan 2012
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Reviewer: Vanime (Signed)
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Poor Harry! If Ron abandoned Harry last year - how is going to react to Snape being Harry's guardian??? Ouch!
I also am wondering what made Ron abandon Harry? Will there be a prequel (sp) to this story?
Looking forward to the next chapter, and I am sure that the Snapes will have their work cut out for them when Harry has nightmares and Ivy displays accidental magic again.
Hugs and Love, Vanime
Author's Response: You know we haven't actually thought of a prequel, maybe the reasons might be revealed in this story itself. However, thank you for the idea and we definitely might consider it. Thank you for the review!
Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13
| 19 Feb 2012
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Reviewer: Vanime (Signed)
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This was great! Looking forward to the next chapter. :)
Hugs and Love, Vanime
Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13
| 19 Feb 2012
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Reviewer: Vanime (Signed)
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This was great! Looking forward to the next chapter. :)
Hugs and Love, Vanime
Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14
| 22 Feb 2012
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Reviewer: Vanime (Signed)
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Ron is such an idiot, I really like that Miss Johnson told him off and loved how Snape gave him the detention and loss of points that Miss Johnson wished she could do.
Great chapter and enjoying this story so much!
Hugs and Love, Vanime
Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16
| 27 Feb 2012
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Reviewer: Vanime (Signed)
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LOL!! I loved how Severus and Minerva coded their letters to Remus!! Priceless!
I wonder how Remus will react to Harry being the way he is...hope he won't be mean or nasty to him, but then, I don't think he will be. When you are as different as he is, he would be hard pressed to treat others cruelly because of their differences.
I really loved how Harry "saw" Draco being jealous...he really does perceive better with his ears more than most people do with their eyes; I love that portrayal of him. Great job!
Looking forward to the next chapter! Hugs and Love, Vanime
Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17
| 28 Feb 2012
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Reviewer: Vanime (Signed)
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Great chapter! I wonder who it was that broke the wards in Snapes office. I bet they'll get into BIG trouble too!
Hugs and Love, Vanime
Title: Chapter 1: Pancake Day (Shrove Tuesday)
| 22 Feb 2012
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Reviewer: Vanime (Signed)
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Oh my!! What an interesting start to this story...I laughed at Snape asking Harry for if Harry had any ideas for a project...LOL too funny, as I would have thought that the Professor would have come up with something right away.
Maybe Harry could suggest that they do potions together, so that Harry could show his father that he had had an interest in it, before the first day of his first year at Hogwarts? A way of healing and building a relationship at the same time? Just a thought.
Hugs and Love, Vanime
Title: Chapter 6: Lent Day Five
| 27 Feb 2012
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Reviewer: Vanime (Signed)
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That could be the project! Learning chess with his father, and learning about life at the same time - because you know life is a game of chess...at least, metamorphically speaking... :)
Great chapter, and no you are not crazy for a chapter a day - it keeps the Dementors away! LOL
Hugs and Love, Vanime
Author's Response: A chapter a day keeps the Dementors away, lol, I like it! And since this is a third year story, quite fitting really. Thanks for reviewing.
Title: Chapter 7: Lent Day Six
| 28 Feb 2012
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Reviewer: Vanime (Signed)
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Oh Lord! This isn't going anywhere! Poor Harry and Snape, having to endure Lent in this fashion - I almost feel sorry for them - but you know, this might be the catalyst for a screaming match where they get it all out of their system, maybe the next night?
Hugs and Love, Vanime
Title: Chapter 11: Lent Day Ten
| 03 Mar 2012
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Reviewer: Vanime (Signed)
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oh no...it's going from bad to worse - when will it get better? What is the project that they are working on? I am surprised that the Headmaster hasn't asked them what it is by now!
Hugs and Love, Vanime
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