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Title: Chapter 32: Lent Day Thirty One
| 18 Jun 2012
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Reviewer: Vanime (Signed)
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I am really enjoying the interaction between Harry and Snape, and look forward to when they get the rooms done at the school and at the house.
Do the other two of the trio know about this situation? I somehow think that they don't, unless I've forgotten something - which wouldn't surprise me as I have so many favorite stories on here - yours being one of them - that I am bound to forget little details. :)
Hugs and Love, Vanime
Title: Chapter 5: The Man
| 28 Feb 2012
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Reviewer: Vanime (Signed)
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I really enjoyed Harry's POV - it made for some interesting illuminations on his persona in this story. I wonder if they will figure out that Harry's lost voice is because of that golden glow that occured when he was wishing to not make a sound...wonder how that will be fixed, and is that considered Wishing Magic?
I am sure that Snape will be the boy's champion to not go back to the Dursley's, and I hope he wins the battle against Dumbledore about it too!
Hugs and Love, Vanime
After helping Draco Malfoy escape the custody of Sirius Black, Harry endures the wrath of his Godfather. When Snape comes looking for Draco, Harry tells him that Draco has run away, and that he won’t tell him where Draco is unless Snape takes Harry with him. **Note** I'm aware that some of you don't like bad!Sirius stories. Don't worry, Sirius isn't actually in the story much, however there is redemption in the end. It's not so much that he's just bad, more that he's fallen. This story is about how people fall, and how they can make it back out in the end, getting a second chance. It is NOT a character bashing story.
Takes Place: 6th summer, 6th Year
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Snape flavour: Snape is Angry, Canon Snape, Snape Comforts, Snape is Kind, Snape is Loving, Snape is Mean, Snape is Stern
Tags: Addicted!Harry, Animagus!Harry, Azkaban Character, Hospitalization, Injured!Harry, Physical Impairment, Runaway
Categories: Healer Snape, Parental Snape > Biological Father Snape, Teacher Snape > Trusted Mentor Snape, Teacher Snape > Professor Snape, Parental Snape > Guardian Snape
Title: Chapter 4: Souvenirs
| 05 Mar 2012
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Reviewer: Vanime (Signed)
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This is a great story - but I do think that Severus needs to get his head out his arse! :) He really needs to talk to Draco about what happened - maybe even use Legilmens on him too, to corraborate (sp) the story of Harry's.
And then, they need to address Harry's fears and rejection(s) from Dumbledore not letting him stay at the castle over the summers. Poor Harry!
Really hope things look up for him once the situation gets addressed and soon!
Hugs and Love, Vanime
PS I would love to see Harry do the Owl potions business. I am sure he would be better than average. But where would he do the potions? The Room of Requirement?
Title: Chapter 5: Made To Be Broken
| 18 Mar 2012
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Reviewer: Vanime (Signed)
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Great chapter!! I wonder how Severus will find out that Harry is his...a potion? A spell? :) Really enjoying this one JA!
Hugs and Love, Vanime
Title: Chapter 8: The Reason
| 02 Apr 2012
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Reviewer: Vanime (Signed)
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JA,
I am loving this story! Poor Harry, how much more is going to have to take in and handle?
And I really hope he talks to Severus about the Potions - I bet Severus would be pleased to know how good Harry is, and maybe even get him loving potions even more, by asking Harry to help him make potions for other customers of his(Severus' that is).
I would love to see how Ron is going to take this bit of news. How much do you want to bet the redhead isn't going to like one iota? :P Hermione will be alright with it, I've no doubt. :)
I also wonder how Albus will make this faux pas to Harry?
Hugs and Love, Vanime
An accident leads to a discovery, a discovery that neither Harry Potter nor Professor Severus Snape can abide. Now they have to live in the same castle knowing what they know. Each of them has friends who think they should give their relationship a chance. Friends really should mind their own business. Note: The warnings seem ominous but this is not a dark story, quite the contrary. The instances that include the warned of moments will simply be briefly referred to and not minutely examined.
Takes Place: 4th summer
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Snape flavour: None
Tags: Snape-meets-Dursleys
Categories: Parental Snape > Biological Father Snape
Title: Chapter 1: The Accident
| 03 Mar 2012
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Reviewer: Vanime (Signed)
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I am so glad that you are back with this story! At first, I thought I was crazy - I was wondering why there was only one chapter when I seem to remember being more. Then I read your author notes - so glad that I did! I have resaved this to my favorites on the left side of the screen there
Author's Response: Thank you so much! We are working on chapter 2 as we speak. My daughter says I haven't been descriptive enough so we're working on giving a little more detail. I think it's going well. I'm glad you're back with us. Thanks for not giving up on us! Kim and TabbyBri
Title: Chapter 2: The First Reaction
| 05 Mar 2012
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Reviewer: Vanime (Signed)
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Ut oh...someone's not too happy about this...But it is going to get better right? :P
Hugs and Love, Vanime
Author's Response: No, he isn't very happy. And yes, we're hoping for Harry's sake that it does get better. Thanks for the review! Kim and TabbyBri
Title: Chapter 2: The Kit
| 14 Mar 2012
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Reviewer: Vanime (Signed)
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This was great! I really enjoyed this very much, and hope for a sequel. It's going into my favorites area! :)
Hugs and Love, Vanime
Author's Response: Thank you, and thanks for adding me to your favorites :)!
Harry's new life at Snapes starts. Third year may lead to many surprises for Harry and his father. All characters are the intellectual property of JK Rowling and no copywrite infringement is meant through the writing of this fanfiction.
Takes Place: 3rd summer
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Snape flavour: None
Tags: None
Categories: Parental Snape > Guardian Snape
Title: Chapter 4: A day in the garden
| 06 May 2012
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Reviewer: Vanime (Signed)
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Wow...I thought that Severus was a little harsh with the punishment (but understandable) and that speech about the trust issue was a bit much - they are still getting to know each other after all, especially where the trust is concerned. It almost made me feel like the trust is never ever going to be there at all ever again. No hope of being redeemed.
Just my opinion - but I do like the story and looking foward to the next chapter!
Hugs and Love, Vanime
Author's Response: Yeah I felt it was a little harsh too but I have always seen Snape as a bit of a strict disciplinarian. But he is also quite a loving man.
Title: Chapter 21: Dreamful Mesencephalon
| 26 Nov 2012
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Reviewer: Vanime (Signed)
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Oh Dear! I hope Harry's memories come back and soon! This doesn't sound too good for our boys. :(
Great chapter and looking as ever to the next one!
Hugs and Love, Vanime
Author's Response: Thank you Vanime, people don't realise just how encouragement through a nice review can affect an author to write :) Thank you for your lovely review and expect to hear more soon :)
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