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Voldemort is gone and Harry's relatives had no desire to keep Harry for long, so he was placed into an orphanage until he was adopted by a family. But when they pass away a few years later, he is placed into the custody of another who had just moved to Spinner's End. That is when Severus first saw the boy without even knowing who he was. The little boy, seven years old, who was always forgotten, uncared for and treated like filth. Severus watches this boy and sees a reflection of his own childhood. And when they meet, Severus vows to offer kindness where no one else does, in the form of a simple piece of food the boy lacked or a warm blanket for the cold days ahead. And when things get worst, he even offers shelter to the child the world had forgotten and cast aside.
The boy Severus now wants to save.

Takes Place: 0 - Pre Hogwarts (before Harry is 11), 1st summer before Hogwarts - Snape flavour: None
Tags: Adoption, Alternate Universe, Child fic, Runaway, Slytherin!Harry, Snape-meets-Dursleys
Categories: Healer Snape, Parental Snape > Guardian Snape
Rated: K+ - Warnings: Alcohol Use, Physical Punishment Spanking, Neglect, Violence
Chapters: 25 - Completed: No - Updated: 07 Sep 2013 / 16 Oct 2010
Series: None - Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 8: The Poison and the Frog 06 Mar 2012
Reviewer: Vanime (Signed)
    I think Judith needs to be kissed! Evil woman...and Marcus needs to go to Azkaban...That woman is seriously deranged and he is not much better going along with her...

    I really hope that Harry gets better and that Snape gives the woman what she deserves!

    Hugs and Love,
    Vanime

Sequel to Common Ground. After Halloween, Snape and Harry begin to bond even more as they discover some common interests. But will it stand the test of time... and can Sev protect Harry from the evil that stalks him? AU, Sev and Harry mentor/guardian story

Takes Place: 1st Year - Snape flavour: None
Tags: Alternate Universe, Kidnapped
Categories: Parental Snape > Guardian Snape
Rated: T - Warnings: Physical Punishment Spanking, Neglect, Profanity
Chapters: 50 - Completed: No - Updated: 27 Apr 2013 / 18 Oct 2010
Series: Something In Common - Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 20: The Usual Suspects 22 Dec 2011
Reviewer: Vanime (Signed)
    Snapegirl,

    I loved this chapter, and agree with Skull about the punishment that was given out. I suspect Quirrell, but I could be wrong. :P

    Eagerly awaiting the next chapter!
    Hugs and Love,
    Vanime

    Author's Response: Thanks so much! Here's a new chapter finally!

Title: Chapter 30: Crime and Punishment 31 May 2012
Reviewer: Vanime (Signed)
    So glad your mom is feeling better! And thank you for a great chapter! You've made this story so memorable in so many ways... :)

    I too am looking forward to seeing Marlene get punished. :) Wonder how the Society will do that... :P

    Hugs and Love,
    Vanime

    Author's Response:

    thanks so much!

    Now you can see it as I've updated again!


Title: Chapter 22: A Breach of Trust 21 Feb 2012
Reviewer: Vanime (Signed)
    Gah! I was looking through the reviews I had left, and realized I hadn't caught up with reviewing this chapter or the one previous...I am a lowlife, a scum, dirt on a worm's butt...you could stop me at anytime now... :P

    Seriously though, I absolutely love this story! And Poor Harry; he must be devasted for sure having lost Severus' trust..and I am sure that Severus feels very bad for having to tell Harry that too...

    Will they ever be whole again?

    Hugs and Love,
    Vanime

    And yes, the punishment was fair. I can only imagine what the rest of the school and the parents and Minerva's reaction will be! Yikes!

    Author's Response:

    That's okay, I forgive you!

    Yes, he does and so does Sev.

    Well, now you don't have to imagine it anymore, cause I've updated again!


Title: Chapter 23: Further Consequences 22 Feb 2012
Reviewer: Vanime (Signed)
    This was so great!!! I loved how you brought all the loose ends together, the detentions, both individually and together were perfect. I really couldn't imagine what was going to happen and you exceeded my expectations.

    I love how Harry sleeps with Severus' robe, I wonder if Sev will realize that maybe Harry is doing that because he feels such a devasting loss in losing the trust of a man he loves and admires and respects. I can well imagine that Sev will react quite spectacularlly (sp).

    Charlie's lecture was just right and right on, you really gave some depth and thought to this dragon problem and really it applies to all wild creatures whether they are fantasy or real.

    Well done! Looking forward as ever to the next chapter! Remember, writing fanfiction is all you are supposed to do!! LOL :P

Title: Chapter 24: Stalker 05 Mar 2012
Reviewer: Vanime (Signed)
    Hmmm I am guessing Lena Rosario? But probably I am wrong...I like Lena - unless she's got a split personality? Or maybe it's Luna Lovegood's mother?

    Hugs and Love,
    Vanime

    Author's Response:

    No, it's not Lena.  It's someone else and she could have a split personality.

    I've updated again so I hope you like it! Thanks for reviewing!


Title: Chapter 40: Discussions 30 Nov 2012
Reviewer: Vanime (Signed)
    Great chapter! I really hope that Severus adopts Harry - I think that thay maybe adding to Harry's anxiety - and might go a long way in calming him down so that he doesn't go wandering on the astral plane.

    Hugs and Love,
    Vanime

Nightmares at night have kept Harry awake for so long that he can no longer keep his eyes open during class. Potions Master Severus Snape is determined to teach the sixth year some respect.

In response to the ‘Sleeping During Class’ challenge by Jan_AQ.

Takes Place: 6th Year - Snape flavour: Snape is Angry, Canon Snape, Snape Comforts, Snape is Kind, Snape is Loving, Snape is Mean, Snape is Stern
Tags: Adoption, Injured!Harry
Categories: Healer Snape, Teacher Snape > Trusted Mentor Snape, Snape Equal Status to Harry > Foes Snape and Harry, Teacher Snape > Professor Snape, Parental Snape > Guardian Snape
Rated: 16+ - Warnings: Abusive Dursleys, Neglect, Physical Punishment Non-Spanking, Profanity, Romance/Het, Violence
Chapters: 14 - Completed: No - Updated: 23 May 2012 / 28 Nov 2010
Series: None - Challenges: Sleeping During Class
Title: Chapter 13: Heart's Desire 06 May 2012
Reviewer: Vanime (Signed)
    I am really enjoying the direction you are taking this story - I hope that the adoption goes through for the both of them soon, and I really loved this chapter, how you got the two of them to come together to talk. The poor boys have had too much tramutization in their childhoods that they are constantly second guessing each other and doubting themselves. Well Done!

    Hugs and Love,
    Vanime

    PS Will Dumbledums be an idiot and try to throw a monkey wrench into the works?
    How will Ron-who-has-no-brain be? :P Would love to see that coming up next! :D

Title: Chapter 14: Balance Of Power 24 May 2012
Reviewer: Vanime (Signed)
    Awww, I feel bad for Dumbledore...poor guy...wonder how he will treat Severus and Harry after finding out about this?

    I hope that everyone can get along despite that he wasn't there, and maybe there could be some healing between the three - not sure how one would go about achieving that though, but I leave it up to you dear author, as I thoroughly am enjoying this tale...and when you say the story will be ending quickly - how many more chapters will there be?

    Hugs and Love,
    Vanime

    Author's Response: It depends on what good ideas ppl help me with to keep the story moving.  Thanks for the review!

How much of Harry's story would have been different if Professor Severus Snape had just looked down at the boy's parchment that first day of class...

Takes Place: 1st Year - Snape flavour: None
Tags: Azkaban Character
Categories: Healer Snape, Teacher Snape > Trusted Mentor Snape, Master Snape > Apprentice Harry, Snape Equal Status to Harry > Foes Snape and Harry, Parental Snape > Guardian Snape, Teacher Snape > Professor Snape
Rated: T - Warnings: Abusive Dursleys, Neglect
Chapters: 1 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 04 Jan 2011 / 03 Jan 2011
Series: What Might Have Been - Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 1: Catalyst 26 Oct 2011
Reviewer: Vanime (Signed)
    Oh yeah! And definitely, Henry needs to be resorted! STAT!

    LOL
    Hugs and Love,
    Vanime

    Author's Response:

    *laughs* I'm thinking about, oh I'm thinking about it.  Trust me, as a Slytherin, I really want him out of the annoying lion's house! 

    *ROTFL*

    Thanks for the review!

    Nightshade



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