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Hello! I am a twenty-eight year old Canadian. I have been reading and writing Harry Potter fanfiction. So far, I haven't finished one yet. But I am on my way.

My favoite charactors to write about or read about are Harry Potter, Severus Snape, Lucius Malfoy, Lord Voldemort and also Petunia Evans(Dursley). [Report This]
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Reviews by Ashlin_Raine

Always by The Velvet Ghost starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 27]
A practice piece, done in two hours. After the fourth peculiar dream in a row, Harry decides to confront his Potions teacher. Now continued!

Takes Place: 6th summer - Snape flavour: None
Tags: None
Categories: Parental Snape > Guardian Snape
Rated: K - Warnings: None
Chapters: 1 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 29 Jan 2005 / 29 Jan 2005
Series: None - Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 1: Always 30 Dec 2011
Reviewer: Ashlin_Raine (Signed)
    Umm, I don't understand this fic.

Babies Can Teach a Valuable Lesson by preety_lady_serenity starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 69]
Harry turns into a baby after an accident in Potions and Snape is assigned to become his guardian. But can Snape take care of a baby? And especially a baby like Harry? Alternative Universe, written before the HBP (posted firstly in ff.net in 01-30-04 )

Takes Place: 6th summer - Snape flavour: None
Tags: Alternate Universe, Baby fic, Child fic, Deaging
Categories: Parental Snape > Guardian Snape
Rated: 16+ - Warnings: None
Chapters: 34 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 01 Nov 2007 / 30 Jan 2006
Series: None - Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 34: The Ignorant Awakens 01 Feb 2012
Reviewer: Ashlin_Raine (Signed)
    Great story, but it annoyed me up the wall that you kept on saying first graders, second graders, etc. THEY ARE YEARS!
    There was something else, but I can't remember what it is. Oh, well.

I Wish, I Wish by wellyuthink starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 49]
Abandoned in the wilds of northen England, lost and alone, Harry stumbles across a small town and discovers a street called Spinners End...

Takes Place: 0 - Pre Hogwarts (before Harry is 11) - Snape flavour: None
Tags: Child fic
Categories: Fic Fests > #10 Holiday/Winter 2009, Parental Snape > Guardian Snape, Teacher Snape > Trusted Mentor Snape
Rated: T - Warnings: None
Chapters: 2 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 25 Dec 2009 / 24 Dec 2009
Series: None - Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 2: Christmas Day 07 Dec 2011
Reviewer: Ashlin_Raine (Signed)
    I wished that you would have explained about the leter that the Dursley's got from the Malfoy's.
    Plus, I found that Harry was too hyper. He was sooo OOC.

    It was a good idea for a story.

Second Chances by Severus Draconis Potter starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 100]
153 years old, long after the defeat of the greatest Dark lord of all times, Harry Potter divorcee is alone and depressed. Contemplating suicide his familiar finds a way for him to go back and fix what he regrets not doing the first place.

Takes Place: 1st summer before Hogwarts, 1st Year - Snape flavour: None
Tags: Adoption, Alternate Universe, Deaging, Resorting, Slytherin!Harry, Snape-meets-Dursleys, SuperPower! Harry, Time Travel
Categories: Healer Snape, Teacher Snape > Trusted Mentor Snape, Parental Snape > Guardian Snape
Rated: T - Warnings: Abusive Dursleys
Chapters: 18 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 22 Nov 2012 / 09 Nov 2011
Series: None - Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11: Return of Draco Malfoy 29 Dec 2011
Reviewer: Ashlin_Raine (Signed)
    I have one problem wih this chapter. Harry had been with the Dursley's for ten years, since he was sent to them at the age one.

    I like the story so far.

    Author's Response:

    Yes I know that...I'm sorry but your gonna have to be more clearer because I dont understand what you wanted..Did you want me to correct something or what?

    Gladyou like it though..

     


Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14:Return to Quidditch 29 Dec 2011
Reviewer: Ashlin_Raine (Signed)
    The last part of this chapter was having trouble keeping track of just what day it was.

Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11: Return of Draco Malfoy 30 Dec 2011
Reviewer: Ashlin_Raine (Signed)
    My Second review for this chapter, I know. But I didn't explain my last review very good.
    In the last part were Severus and Sirius went to visit the Dursley's, you had written that Harry had been there for 11 years, but he wasn't. It was only 10 years.
    Harry got there when he was a year old, so if he was 11 years old, he would have been there for 10 years.
    It is an easy mistake, I see it a lot. I just wanted to let you know.
    If you have any questions, you know how to ask me.

    Author's Response: Thank you for pointing that out...my mistake and I will..if you see any other mistakes..just review and I'll fix them

Unforgiveable Sirius by Severus Draconis Potter starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 260]
Sirius does something to Harry that he shouldnt and he shatters the poor boy's last hope of finally having a family. He's lost and hurt and terrfied with no one to turn to. No one but the man who has made his life miserable anyway he could. How can Snape help Harry,when he hates him himself; or does he?

Takes Place: 5th Year - Snape flavour: Canon Snape, Snape Comforts, Snape is Kind, Snape is Loving, Overly-protective Snape
Tags: Adoption, Azkaban Character, Snape-meets-Dursleys
Categories: Healer Snape, Teacher Snape > Trusted Mentor Snape, Parental Snape > Guardian Snape
Rated: T - Warnings: Abusive Dursleys, Character Bashing, Profanity
Chapters: 30 - Completed: No - Updated: 11 Nov 2020 / 18 Nov 2011
Series: None - Challenges: Unforgivable Sirius
Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 06 Mar 2012
Reviewer: Ashlin_Raine (Signed)
    What the hell is wrong with Harry? why does he want to see the man that hurt him so much?

    Author's Response:

    Harry has never really known love of a parent, I understand why he keeps going back. Sirius was a link to his fallen parents, he just doesnt understand that Adults arent supposed to hurt him like that....that is where Sev comes in.


Snape's Daughter by Tribi starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 114]
On Harry's sixteenth birthday a potion wears off.

Takes Place: 6th summer - Snape flavour: None
Tags: Girl!Harry, Slytherin!Harry
Categories: Parental Snape > Biological Father Snape
Rated: 16+ - Warnings: Romance/Het
Chapters: 27 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 02 May 2012 / 05 Dec 2011
Series: None - Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 23 Dec 2011
Reviewer: Ashlin_Raine (Signed)
    I am confused. You went from the Dumbledore part to the day the students came back to Hogwarts. What happened to Dumbledore's hand?

A Different Pair of Eyes by watercrystals starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 58]
Perception can be everything. After the incident with the Philosopher's Stone and Voldemort, Harry falls into a magical slumber and wakes months later on August 31st as an entirely different boy who is about to begin his first year at Hogwarts. Sorted into Slytherin as someone else, Harry experiences Hogwarts in an entirely new way. He realises that there is more to Slytherin than it appears, and even more to their Head of House as well. Before long, acting as someone else isn't nearly as hard as fighting the need to reverse it, or at least find out what happened to “Harry Potter”.

Takes Place: 3rd summer - Snape flavour: None
Tags: Resorting, Slytherin!Harry
Categories: Teacher Snape > Trusted Mentor Snape, Teacher Snape > Professor Snape, Parental Snape > Guardian Snape
Rated: K+ - Warnings: Neglect
Chapters: 4 - Completed: No - Updated: 18 Apr 2012 / 22 Dec 2011
Series: None - Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 2: A Change of House Colours 19 Jan 2012
Reviewer: Ashlin_Raine (Signed)
    There is a point in this fic that I don't really agree with. I think that Harry would be out of sorts at first and kind of miss being 'Harry', but I think that he would soon see the possibilities of being a different person.

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