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| bridgeportfox [Contact]
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| Barb Roth (female)
| Member since: 17 Jan 2012
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| I am a former news librarian. I haven't written any stories but I love to read about Severus and Harry. [Report This]
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Title: Chapter 1: Age 1
| 27 Apr 2017
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Reviewer: bridgeportfox (Signed)
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There were some interesting twists in your story. I like that Lucius and some of the other Death Eaters had enough of Voldemort and want out. Severus should have some allies with the disgruntled Death Eaters. Albus may be troublesome though. He certainly was stuck on the blood wards.
Author's Response: Albus is troublesome, but in my version, he does mean well. He's misguided. I know I simplified the whole Death Eater thing, but I've always wanted them to be smart enough to abandon Voldemort.
Title: Chapter 3: Age 5
| 26 May 2017
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Reviewer: bridgeportfox (Signed)
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Ms. Tillery was right - Harry will be a powerful wizard. It sounds like he surprised Severus and Remus with his power. Hopefully, Neville will get over his shock and become friends with Harry.
Title: Chapter 2: Ages 2-4
| 03 May 2017
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Reviewer: bridgeportfox (Signed)
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Aww. I liked how Harry wanted to share his gifts. Though, just like Severus, I wondered how the Slytherin students would feel about toddler toys.
Author's Response: It gets mentioned later!
Rated: T
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Warnings: Neglect
Chapters: 1
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Completed: No
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Updated: 01 May 2017 / 01 May 2017
Series: None
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Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 1: Promised Plans
| 02 May 2017
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Reviewer: bridgeportfox (Signed)
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That was an interesting first chapter. I hadn't read your original story so I wasn't familiar with the theme. That is one I haven't seen before. It's nice to see Petunia so loving towards Harry. Unfortunately, Dudley is still Dudley. Looking forward to finding out what happens next.
Author's Response: This is quite substantially re-worked from the previous version, so no worries if you weren't familiar with it. Actually probably better this way. Writing the Dursleys this way has been quite interesting for me. I'm glad you're looking forward to more - thanks for the review!
Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9
| 22 Jun 2017
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Reviewer: bridgeportfox (Signed)
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That was interesting. So Covey aided both Harry and Severus. Looking forward to more.
Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5
| 10 Jun 2017
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Reviewer: bridgeportfox (Signed)
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Coventry Cook sounds like an interesting character. I'm looking forward to finding out how she and Harry get along.
Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7
| 12 Jun 2017
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Reviewer: bridgeportfox (Signed)
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That was an unpleasant surprise for Harry. At least he didn't know it was coming so he didn't worry about the treatment that day.
Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4
| 05 Jun 2017
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Reviewer: bridgeportfox (Signed)
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Snape's role in Harry's healing came as a surprise. It is going to be hard for Harry to hate him when he is suffering so much to make Harry better. I thought Snape's comment was good, too. He is doing it because it needs to be done. Severus is all about doing his duty whether he actually likes Potter or not.
Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16
| 21 Jul 2017
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Reviewer: bridgeportfox (Signed)
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Yeah, I guess Covey would have known what Severus is since she is a Healer. After the last chapter, I thought, like Snape, that she was gone. No more Severus/Covey. I'm glad they are still an item. Sev needs as much support as he can get.
Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18
| 28 Jul 2017
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Reviewer: bridgeportfox (Signed)
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I wondered what Dumbledore, Covey and Snape would come up with to ensure that the Muggle therapists would keep mum about the wizarding world.
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