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A potion carefully brewed on Halloween opens the Veil between the living and the dead. What will Lily say to Harry and Severus?
Takes Place: 6th Year
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Snape flavour: Snape is Desperate
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Categories: Fic Fests > Tri-Writing Tournament 2019 > Round Two
Rated: T
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Warnings: None
Chapters: 1
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Completed: Yes
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Updated: 17 Oct 2019 / 17 Oct 2019
Series: None
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Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 1: Economy of the Heart
| 08 Nov 2019
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Reviewer: bridgeportfox (Signed)
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What a wonderful story. It sounds like there is more to Crookshanks than we thought. I especially like the idea of Lily persuading Severus to try to live past the war and find someone else to love. Harry getting to see his Mum at the same time was great, too.
Author's Response: Thank you for taking the time to review! I can't see Lily abandoning James in the afterlife, but think she would want Severus to find his own happiness.
Five-year-old Harry has a delicious surprise for Severus, and Mr. Scarecrow is about to attend his first Halloween party ever. *Fic Submission for the first annual Tri-Writing Tournament. (Second Round)
Takes Place: 0 - Pre Hogwarts (before Harry is 11)
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Snape flavour: Snape is Angry, Snape Comforts, Snape is Controlling, Snape is Depressed, Snape is Desperate, Snape is Kind, Snape is Loving, Out of Character Snape, Overly-protective Snape
Tags: Adoption, Alternate Universe
Categories: Parental Snape > Guardian Snape, Fic Fests > Tri-Writing Tournament 2019 > Round Two
Rated: K+
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Warnings: None
Chapters: 1
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Completed: Yes
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Updated: 20 Oct 2019 / 20 Oct 2019
Series: None
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Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 1: Harry's surprise
| 21 Oct 2019
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Reviewer: bridgeportfox (Signed)
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Wow. Poor Severus. That was a different kind of horror. Little Harry was as adorable as his Dad thinks and the interaction with the staff was really cute. Hopefully, the house elves will manage to keep Harry from future culinary experiments in the future though.
Author's Response: Poor Severus indeed, he's the prime example of what parents sometimes give up for their children. You're right, hopefully, the house-elves will be enough damage control when Harry ends up sneaking around the kitchens again. Thanks for reading and have a nice day!
Title: Chapter 1: A Feather of Hope
| 02 Nov 2019
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Reviewer: bridgeportfox (Signed)
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I like the idea of Snape as a protector of children. He must have had some concern for the students in his House though we never saw that part of him in canon.
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
| 07 Nov 2019
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Reviewer: bridgeportfox (Signed)
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Nice first chapter. I wonder how Snape knew it was Harry?
Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2
| 07 Nov 2019
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Reviewer: bridgeportfox (Signed)
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Interesting. So, is that really Albus? Petunia should remember the name.
Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5
| 07 Nov 2019
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Reviewer: bridgeportfox (Signed)
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That was a fun story. I like that Snape and Harry have become friends. Had you considered a sequel?
Once upon a time a new headmaster dragged a young man in his charge back from the depths of darkness. Now, years later, another boy has turned up to school in poor shape and the Headmaster thinks it’s time for Severus Snape to pay forward what was once done for him, even if said Potions Master goes kicking and screaming all the way. Written for round two of the 2019 Tri-W tournament (even though it’s submitted late). If you like this story don't forget to go vote for it in Site News.
Takes Place: 0 - Before Harry is born, 5th Year
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Snape flavour: Snape is Angry, Canon Snape, Snape Comforts, Snape is Depressed, Snape is Desperate, Snape is Kind, Snape is Stern
Tags: Hospitalization, Injured!Harry, Injured!Snape
Categories: Healer Snape, Teacher Snape > Trusted Mentor Snape, Teacher Snape > Professor Snape, Fic Fests > Tri-Writing Tournament 2019 > Round Two
Title: Chapter 1: Duality - This Like That
| 09 Jan 2020
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Reviewer: bridgeportfox (Signed)
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I like the way you started with Severus' story and used it to mirror Harry's. Naturally, Minerva and Albus would think of Snape as the one to try to convince Harry to talk. It was probably a good idea since sympathy didn't work. I wonder if Snape will ever tell Harry how similar their childhoods were?
Title: Chapter 2: The Same But Different
| 09 Jan 2020
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Reviewer: bridgeportfox (Signed)
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I like that Hermione and Ron defended the way Snape has been treating Harry. Hopefully, Snape will break through Harry's defenses soon. It sounds like it is getting to them both.
Title: Chapter 3: Two Stories Are One
| 10 Jan 2020
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Reviewer: bridgeportfox (Signed)
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I liked the idea that Remus and James had actually been undercover friends with Snape. Too bad he didn't realize it until then. And, of course, I like the idea that Harry and Snape had a better relationship instead of hating each other.
“It’s like playing a game,” Harry said. “A judging game. You sit and listen and at the end of the day you’ll decide whether Severus Snape deserves to die or not.”
His father had spent his whole life trying to protect Harry from the outside world, from himself, at the expense of his own life. Now it was Harry's turn to at least try.
*Fic Submission for the first annual Tri-Writing Tournament. (Round Three)
Takes Place: 0 - Pre Hogwarts (before Harry is 11), 1st summer before Hogwarts, 1st Year, 2nd summer, 2nd Year, 3rd summer, 3rd Year, 4th summer, 4th Year, 5th summer, 5th Year
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Snape flavour: Snape is Angry, Canon Snape, Snape Comforts, Snape is Depressed, Snape is Desperate, Snape is Kind, Snape is Loving, Out of Character Snape, Overly-protective Snape, Snape is Stern
Tags: Azkaban!Snape, Baby fic, Child fic, Incognito!Harry, Incognito!Snape, Injured!Snape, Physical Impairment, SuperPower! Harry
Categories: Healer Snape, Parental Snape > Guardian Snape, Fic Fests > Tri-Writing Tournament 2019 > Round Three
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1; The Judging Game
| 01 Dec 2019
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Reviewer: bridgeportfox (Signed)
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Good first chapter. I have never read one where Potter is still alive when Snape comes to the house. It's an interesting twist.
Author's Response: Yeah, I don't think I have ever read one with James Potter and Snape interacting after the attack as well. Oh well, I'm glad it turned out like this. Thanks for reading! Chapter two will be up shortly.
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