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With a strange potion, new location and the odd Muggle Studies Professor along for the ride, Harry's in for an interesting summer, but why is Snape here? Dumbledore had better pray he gets all three back in one piece! Humor, Angst, No Mary Sues, No Romance, no real plot.
Takes Place: 6th summer
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Snape flavour: Snape is Kind, Snape is Stern
Tags: Child fic, Deaged!Harry, Deaging, Injured!Harry
Categories: Parental Snape > Guardian Snape
Rated: K+
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Warnings: Abusive Dursleys
Chapters: 32
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Completed: No
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Updated: 17 Jul 2016 / 15 Jan 2005
Series: None
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Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 20: Secret Accident
| 09 Mar 2015
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Reviewer: bridgeportfox (Signed)
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That was a neat chapter. I can't imagine that Snape ever thought he would be giving Harry Potter a bath. Harry must be rethinking their relationship, too, or he would not have apologized the Severus.
Author's Response: Yes, both Snape and Harry are starting to become closer, and maybe it will last even after Harry grows up again.
Title: Chapter 21: Velveteen Rabbit (Sick Harry)
| 10 Mar 2015
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Reviewer: bridgeportfox (Signed)
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Poor Harry. At that age and around so many other children, it was just a matter of time until he caught something. I wonder if he is starting to feel like he may have real parents? Between Hoppity and Snape taking care of him and even reading to him, it may seem like it to a six year old.
Author's Response: I like to think that this is what Dumbledore intended, for Harry to feel like he might have real parents for a little while. :)
Title: Chapter 22: Stealing Daisies
| 10 Mar 2015
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Reviewer: bridgeportfox (Signed)
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And now Hoppity caught it from Harry. I'm surprised that Snape didn't giver her the Pepper-Up earlier. With her sick, he had to deal with both her and Harry being unwell at the same time. He must be getting used to his situation.
Author's Response: Snape is doing rather well with taking care of Harry and having to be in a different place, pretending to be a Muggle.
Title: Chapter 23: Snape's Trap
| 10 Mar 2015
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Reviewer: bridgeportfox (Signed)
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I wonder if Snape knew that Harry and Hoppity were going to the bookstore? That sounds like a trip he would have liked, even if they were Muggle books. Harry really is making Snape the bad guy. I wonder if he will get over that?
Author's Response: I think Harry will always see Snape as the bad guy because Snape is the one with the rules, making sure that Harry is safe and protected, and not doing anything that can be remotely dangerous. Snape will always be strict because he cares. Eventually maybe Harry will figure that out. but Snape does enjoy being a git every once in awhile too. :)
Title: Chapter 24: Forgotten in a Cupboard
| 11 Mar 2015
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Reviewer: bridgeportfox (Signed)
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That had to be hard for Harry. I hope someone told him that Michael's mother came and took him before he could say goodbye. He did call out to Harry after all.
Author's Response: Poor Harry, he tends to get into awful situations. Thank you for your comments. :)
Title: Chapter 25: The Buildup to...
| 11 Mar 2015
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Reviewer: bridgeportfox (Signed)
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I wonder why Snape wanted to go to the electronics store? It sounds like he bought something there. Of course, Hoppity would have wanted to go along and check out all the Muggle things. I'm sure she and Harry had a good time, too. But Snape having fun is unusual.
Author's Response: Snape did buy something at the electronics store, we will find out about it later. :)
Title: Chapter 26: The Tantrum
| 12 Mar 2015
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Reviewer: bridgeportfox (Signed)
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It sounds like Harry was tired and cranky when he had his tantrum. He played a long time with Michael and was probably wound up from that, too.
Author's Response: Yes, I don't think that Harry is the type of kid to throw tantrums naturally.
Title: Chapter 27: Bubble and Squeak
| 12 Mar 2015
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Reviewer: bridgeportfox (Signed)
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It sounds like Harry's six-year-old body gets the better of his 16-year-old mind sometimes. I wonder if he succeeded in Occlumency because they had the lesson in the morning. By evening, Harry is probably full of everything that happened during the day and has trouble clearing his mind.
Author's Response: That's a wonderful point! Unfortunately, I don't think that Snape will realize this, but maybe he will. We'll see. :)
Title: Chapter 28: Neighborhood Block Party
| 12 Mar 2015
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Reviewer: bridgeportfox (Signed)
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The block party sounded like fun. Too bad Harry got into trouble for using the bouncy house. Since that was there for the kids and others were using it, it seemed a bit much for Snape to scold Harry for using it. Snape is really being protective. I wonder what the golden thing that Harry saw was? Something to do with the spell Snape put on him? Looking forward to finding out.
Author's Response: Snape is all sorts of unfair, but Harry could of got hurt in the bouncy house, and I think that is the point. :) Thanks for your reviews!
Title: Chapter 29: Family Meeting
| 12 Mar 2015
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Reviewer: bridgeportfox (Signed)
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The rules all seem sensible though Harry probably wouldn't agree. They seem to be coming together as a unit, even Snape called for a family meeting so he must consider them as a family.
Author's Response: That's right! I guess Snape is getting used to the fact that they are a unit now, much like a family. :)
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