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Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 38
| 05 Feb 2013
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Reviewer: DreamLuna (Signed)
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Man-Who-was-not-Dumbledore, Dumbledore-who-was-not-Dumbledore.How do you think of all of these new proper nouns? It's inspiring. It really is. Wouldn't Severus have felt the throbbing of the dark mark rather than having to unravel the bandage? "Multiple times of coming to consciousness in situations which were less than optimal had taught him not to make big movements or otherwise alert others to the fact that he was awake" I love this line, it both sad and funny that this is the first thing Harry thinks because it would be strange for any other child ever to think this but it's almost normal for Harry.
Title: Chapter 39: Chapter 39
| 05 Feb 2013
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Reviewer: DreamLuna (Signed)
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Did Harry just cut Lucius' magic to shreds? He can't do magic anymore?! YES! Weird that Harry weakened the White Wizard with hate and pain but weakened the Dark Lord with love and hope. Just something to think about . . .
Title: Chapter 40: Chapter 40
| 05 Feb 2013
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Reviewer: DreamLuna (Signed)
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For some reason I had thought that Severus had already admitted to liking 'the boy.' I don't think Severus should be the one to tell Ron and Hermione what had happened just because it is something Harry may need to talk to them about. Also, why didn't Severus mention Draco as one of the tormentors? He better still come to Hogwarts (although, hopefully a little less evil now that Lucius is a squib and OMG I just realized that Voldemort turned on Lucius. Does this mean that he rejects Draco too? Will Draco have to switch sides? Don't I wish.)
Title: Chapter 41: Chapter 41
| 05 Feb 2013
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Reviewer: DreamLuna (Signed)
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I love hearing what Harry is really thinking through his journal--which, I guess, is the point. I like that Severus is trying to be civil to Ron and Hermione and it seems like they just won't have it.
Title: Chapter 42: Chapter 42
| 05 Feb 2013
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Reviewer: DreamLuna (Signed)
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I'm glad that Ron has gotten over Severus turning good and I thought it was really amazing when HE was the one to stop Hermione from blurting out questions when Harry arrived. While this is amazing, and a very sweet end to a story, Harry will have to talk about what has happened sometime, won't he?
Title: Chapter 43: Chapter 43
| 05 Feb 2013
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Reviewer: DreamLuna (Signed)
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I would have thought that Severus would encourage Harry to continue at Hogwarts like normal and say that Harry couldn't hide forever. Also, would the spell really be helpful in potions? Because it would turn superextremely dangerous if he did. I'm glad that Draco isn't a complete prat but I think this chapter left too many questions behind. Anyway, love the story and I can't wait to start on the sequel.
Title: Chapter 17: Postscript
| 15 Apr 2012
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Reviewer: DreamLuna (Signed)
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This was a wonderful story although I found it a bit odd that luna and snape got married as he is old enough to be her father and he once wished he could adopt her. And I don't like how he secluded himself away for 7 years but otherwise, lovely story.
Thirteen-year-old Harry is forced into the body of another Harry in a parallel world, where Snape adopted him years ago. And Snape is enraged to discover that his son has been replaced by a stranger. In our world, Snape discovers a new Harry--one who sees him as a father he never wanted to be. Each Harry must learn to survive in a strange new world, and search for a way home.
Takes Place: 4th summer
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Snape flavour: None
Tags: Adoption, Alternate Universe
Categories: Snape Equal Status to Harry > Foes Snape and Harry, Parental Snape > Guardian Snape
Rated: T
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Warnings: None
Chapters: 24
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Completed: Yes
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Updated: 02 Feb 2011 / 20 Dec 2007
Series: None
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Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: A Parallel
| 20 Jan 2013
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Reviewer: DreamLuna (Signed)
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This is killing me here. I love that Snape is so amazing with the 'other' Harry but I can't help but think he's being too harsh on the 'known world' Harry. I love the one version but I hate him with the 'known world' Harry because that was just cruel. I hope that makes sense.
Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2: The Long Night
| 20 Jan 2013
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Reviewer: DreamLuna (Signed)
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Arrrrgh! I feel so bad for everybody! My heart and tear ducts are just going to explode!
Otherwise, great chapter and I just really hope that people start connecting soon or I'm just going to go mental with emotions.
Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3: Lost at Sea
| 20 Jan 2013
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Reviewer: DreamLuna (Signed)
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Oh Merlin that was awful. I mean the writing was great but it was such a heartbreaking chapter. I really think this Harry has it a lot worse. I can't believe that you just told this Harry that he wasn't good enough for his mum. And Snape wants to get rid of him . . . I guess my desire to scream at Snape right now is just proof that you are just an amazing writer.
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