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Title: Chapter 3: Accidental Magic
| 25 Oct 2012
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Reviewer: ZaZa5939 (Signed)
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Great story so far, I'm going to read until the last chapter today ;-)
But I notice in this chapter an inconsistency : "All was quiet in the dungeons, for it was summer and the students had all returned home"... ...and in the morning they're late for classes and school ??
Voldemort is gone and Harry's relatives had no desire to keep Harry for long, so he was placed into an orphanage until he was adopted by a family. But when they pass away a few years later, he is placed into the custody of another who had just moved to Spinner's End. That is when Severus first saw the boy without even knowing who he was. The little boy, seven years old, who was always forgotten, uncared for and treated like filth. Severus watches this boy and sees a reflection of his own childhood. And when they meet, Severus vows to offer kindness where no one else does, in the form of a simple piece of food the boy lacked or a warm blanket for the cold days ahead. And when things get worst, he even offers shelter to the child the world had forgotten and cast aside. The boy Severus now wants to save.
Takes Place: 0 - Pre Hogwarts (before Harry is 11), 1st summer before Hogwarts
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Snape flavour: None
Tags: Adoption, Alternate Universe, Child fic, Runaway, Slytherin!Harry, Snape-meets-Dursleys
Categories: Healer Snape, Parental Snape > Guardian Snape
Title: Chapter 13: Baking and Breaking
| 31 Aug 2012
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Reviewer: ZaZa5939 (Signed)
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Great one!
You said that Cody doesn't want to ask his father about the mark on the tre but he already did that in a previous chapter, didn't he ?
I hope the next chapter will be updated soon!
Title: Chapter 36: Shopping Frenzy
| 31 Aug 2012
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Reviewer: ZaZa5939 (Signed)
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Great as always! I found this story only very recently and I can't stop myself from checking it for any update frequently. :-)
Title: Chapter 48: The Quidditch Commercial
| 07 Feb 2013
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Reviewer: ZaZa5939 (Signed)
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As well as ever! I love to read this fic! ;-) ^_^
Just trying to be alone to grieve for his fallen Godfather, he runs into the one person he never wanted to see him so vunerable in.
Takes Place: 6th summer
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Snape flavour: None
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Categories: Healer Snape, Teacher Snape > Professor Snape
Rated: T
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Warnings: Abusive Dursleys, Self-harm
Chapters: 1
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Completed: Yes
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Updated: 09 Nov 2011 / 09 Nov 2011
Series: None
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Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 1: Unforseen Help
| 03 Jun 2012
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Reviewer: ZaZa5939 (Signed)
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Great story!
Any chance for a sequel?? It makes mus want to see how severus will help on th road to the recovery!
Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21: Can you handle it?
| 03 Jun 2012
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Reviewer: ZaZa5939 (Signed)
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What a wonderful story! You are describing feelings of each character very well! I can't wait for the next chapter...
Just one question : didn't Harry leave a letter on Rons bed ? for his money and things. Ron didn't mention it and Harry is keeping his vault and his belongings...
Keep on writing, and I hope it will be a long story! ;)
(sorry if there are faults, I'm not english...)
Author's Response: He did...Ron is mourning...I will speak on that later...dont worry about it..it will be resovled Im glad you like it though and your english is fine.
Severus finds Harry that night in Godric's Hollow, and instead of being sent to his Aunt's, a different alternative is found.
Takes Place: None
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Snape flavour: None
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Categories: Parental Snape > Guardian Snape
Rated: T
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Warnings: Physical Punishment Spanking
Chapters: 2
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Completed: No
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Updated: 21 Feb 2013 / 05 Dec 2012
Series: None
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Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
| 10 Dec 2012
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Reviewer: ZaZa5939 (Signed)
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Hi!
Nice beginning but you seem far from the "natural" Severus Snape. I hope he will have a stronger character. What is significant in Severus is his wit, sharp, and his repartee. But we will see ;-)
Continue on your way and good writing!
Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12
| 06 Feb 2013
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Reviewer: ZaZa5939 (Signed)
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I can't wait to read the next chapter! Chapters are a bit short but the story is very interesting and entertaining! Keep writing please ;-)
Author's Response: Thank you! XD I shall.
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