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| DevonShard [Contact]
| Better be Ravenclaw!
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| Ashley (female)
| Member since: 24 Jul 2012
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| I'm an avid reader who loves Harry Potter but have not yet dared to try my hand at writing fan fiction for it but hope to soon. [Report This]
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Title: Chapter 15: And the Truth Shall Set You Free
| 03 Aug 2012
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Reviewer: DevonShard (Signed)
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This is all very interesting. I can't wait to see what happens next. I really look forward to it.
Title: Chapter 9: A Royal Mess
| 24 Sep 2012
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Reviewer: DevonShard (Signed)
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This is interesting. I'm a little confused on how Peach and the others fit in but I look forward to seeing how it all turns out. I like Ambervale and Pamela.
Title: Chapter 3: The Cupboard Under the Stairs
| 04 Aug 2012
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Reviewer: DevonShard (Signed)
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I love this and I want to read more of it.
Title: Chapter 3: Among Friends
| 12 Jun 2019
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Reviewer: DevonShard (Signed)
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This story is amazing. I had to come read this one as soon as I finished the first. I can not wait to see what happens next and do hope you are able to update this one soon.
Voldemort is gone and Harry's relatives had no desire to keep Harry for long, so he was placed into an orphanage until he was adopted by a family. But when they pass away a few years later, he is placed into the custody of another who had just moved to Spinner's End. That is when Severus first saw the boy without even knowing who he was. The little boy, seven years old, who was always forgotten, uncared for and treated like filth. Severus watches this boy and sees a reflection of his own childhood. And when they meet, Severus vows to offer kindness where no one else does, in the form of a simple piece of food the boy lacked or a warm blanket for the cold days ahead. And when things get worst, he even offers shelter to the child the world had forgotten and cast aside. The boy Severus now wants to save.
Takes Place: 0 - Pre Hogwarts (before Harry is 11), 1st summer before Hogwarts
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Snape flavour: None
Tags: Adoption, Alternate Universe, Child fic, Runaway, Slytherin!Harry, Snape-meets-Dursleys
Categories: Healer Snape, Parental Snape > Guardian Snape
Title: Chapter 12: Changes
| 26 Aug 2012
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Reviewer: DevonShard (Signed)
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I think this is great. I can't wait to see how this all turns out. I love it. I feel bad for Jack who's going to be left when Harry starts school. I hope they keep in touch.
Author's Response: Thank you, I'm pleased you think so. I am actually writing more now, though a much later chapter. When Harry get his Hogwarts letter, it will indeed be a sad time for the two boys, though I feel content with how I wrote it so hopefully my readers will agree. Thank you for your review.
Title: Chapter 13: Baking and Breaking
| 30 Aug 2012
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Reviewer: DevonShard (Signed)
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This chapter was so cute. I loved all the mischief they got into. I can't wait for the next chapter to see what happens next and how things go for the family. I have to wonder if Michael will ever appear again. I can't wait to find out.
Author's Response: Aw, thanks. Michael will appear again, though not for quite a while. Haha, I liked your comments and thanks for the review.
Title: Chapter 14: Owl Post
| 04 Sep 2012
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Reviewer: DevonShard (Signed)
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Poor Jack and Harry. And here they had it all worked out. I can't wait to find out what happens next. I really look forward to it. It would be amusing if they took Jack with to get Harry's school supplies but that would also just enforce the fact that they are being separated.
Author's Response: Yeah, this is a very sad time for the boys :( And I agree with your comments. I'm glad you're looking forward to finding out what happens next. I will be updating again in a few days. Thank you for your review.
Title: Chapter 15: Hogwarts Acceptance Letter
| 07 Sep 2012
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Reviewer: DevonShard (Signed)
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How cute! I loved how this turned out and I can't wait for the shopping trip. That's sure to be amusing for the boys. I loved this.
Author's Response: Thanks. And yes when they go shopping it will be quite interesting. I'm glad you think so, and thanks for the review.
Title: Chapter 16: August Fades, September Nears
| 11 Sep 2012
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Reviewer: DevonShard (Signed)
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This is very interesting so far. Poor Jack. His parents are so mean. And Harry's never had to deal with having to share his parents so this makes sense. I look forward to the next chapter and seeing how this all turns out. I can't wait to see how the shopping trip goes. I could see Erin trying to sneak in some extra for both the boys.
Author's Response: Thanks, I'm glad. Jack's parents are very centered on their older son, so yeah they're rather mean to Jack as a consequence. The shopping trip will be interesting, to say the least, and what "extra" are you refering to? :P Thanks for the review.
Title: Chapter 19: King's Cross Station
| 27 Sep 2012
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Reviewer: DevonShard (Signed)
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I loved these chapters. I found everything with the shampoo to be amusing. I can't wait to see what happens next. I really look forward to it.
Author's Response: Thanks, I'm glad to hear your comments. I will hopefully be updating again asap.
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