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Severus Snape gets more than he bargained for when he overhears a heated conversation between Harry Potter and his best friend, Ronald Weasley.

Takes Place: 3rd summer - Snape flavour: None
Tags: Adoption, Alternate Universe
Categories: Parental Snape > Guardian Snape, Teacher Snape > Trusted Mentor Snape, Misc > All written in Snape's POV
Rated: T - Warnings: Abusive Dursleys
Chapters: 7 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 20 Jun 2014 / 23 Apr 2013
Series: None - Challenges: Window Sills
Title: Chapter 5: A Swiflty Tilting Perspective 04 Jun 2013
Reviewer: 12reader (Signed)
    Whew! I was afraid that Severus was going to lash out physically (wouldn't blame him). It's easy to imagine Harry winning over someone fast when there's no "Boy-Who-Lived" nonsense in the way. Perhaps it would be best for Severus to have a slight breakdown later on with his grandfather in private, just to further the healing process. Just a thought. You're doing good.

    Author's Response:

    Thank you so much for reading, and for sharing your thoughts with me. A breakdown would probably be a good thing - even though breakdowns, when they are happening, rarely feel good until well afterward when one can see clearly through the heartache and pain. In my initial writing of this story, nothing of the sort happens, and neither did what was in this chapter. I have been re-working some of the events of this story, but am not sure if I will include what you've suggested or not. 

     

    Thank you so much! 


Harry Potter was the younger brother to Henry Potter- the boy who lived. Neglected by his parents since he could remember, he still tries to make them proud. When the goblins perform their centennial vault inspection and students at Hogwarts are required to make an ancestry potion, what will be discovered?

Takes Place: None - Snape flavour: None
Tags: Adoption, Alternate Universe, Kidnapped, Resorting, Runaway
Categories: Teacher Snape > Trusted Mentor Snape, Big Brother Snape
Rated: 16+ - Warnings: Character Bashing, Physical Punishment Spanking, Neglect, Self-harm, Suicide Themes
Chapters: 9 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 03 Jun 2013 / 26 May 2013
Series: None - Challenges: Lost Brother
Title: Chapter 7: Talks 02 Jun 2013
Reviewer: 12reader (Signed)
    I've never read this way of blood adoption either but I've read similar things concerning blood wards. It makes sense. I can't wait to see the trial itself, of course I think everyone is thinking the same thing. Love that Albus is good in this story too, forgot to mention that before.

    Jacobson is a nice character, very interesting that Severus knows him for some reason. Am looking forward to future interactions in the Snape family.

Title: Chapter 8: Trials 03 Jun 2013
Reviewer: 12reader (Signed)
    The hell!? Crazy deluded old coot! Oooh, I would vote for Azkaban too but it's your story and he's being punished, so ok.
    LOVED that Tobias got to scream at Albus and Harry put James in his place (the nerve of him, after everything!) Nice touching scene with the amulets too. Now I'm wondering how Hogwarts will receive Alex now! Ooh, I hope Alex gets to stand up for himself somehow once he gets back. Later!

Title: Chapter 9: New Boy 03 Jun 2013
Reviewer: 12reader (Signed)
    Oh, good one with Draco and Lucius. I like Lucius' parents a lot! Very nice re-sorting scenes too! I rarely see a good-Tobias fic and this was very well-done. Hope to see another fic of yours soon, you're good!

    Author's Response: Wow! Thank you for the high praise. I have a few fics in progress that have a snape/harry dynamic, but 2 dramione complete and 1 wrong BWL in progress.

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