Over Christmas break, Harry and Snape are attacked by a Ghangzou, a rare, magical genie that shows its victims what life would be like if one thing changed.
What they see will alter their relationship forever, if they'll let it.
(Originally meant for the Christmas challenge, but it sort of took on a life of its own)
Takes Place: 1st Year
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Snape flavour: Canon Snape, Snape is Kind
Tags: Alternate Universe, Sibling Addition
Categories: Teacher Snape > Professor Snape, Parental Snape > Godfather Snape
Membership status: Member
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Reviews by Outlawgal
Rated: K+
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Warnings: None
Chapters: 15 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 01 May 2014 / 03 Apr 2014
Series: May All Your Christmas' Be White - Challenges: None
Chapters: 15 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 01 May 2014 / 03 Apr 2014
Series: May All Your Christmas' Be White - Challenges: None
| Title: Chapter 8: You are Not Alone in This | 21 Apr 2014 |
| Reviewer: Outlawgal (Signed) |
- I love the way Sev met Polly lol
Also who said Sev wouldn't make a good father or friend. He did a lot of things to put a smile on my face in this chapter :)
Author's Response:
Hey! Glad you like Polly. I was initially a little worried about her because I know some people have issues seeing Severus with anyone but Lily, but I like her too. He is for sure a good friend/godfather and I'm glad he put a smile on your face!
Thanks for taking the time to review! Keep me updated on your thoughts, I love hearing them.
| Title: Chapter 9: Movin' On | 25 Apr 2014 |
| Reviewer: Outlawgal (Signed) |
- Polly and Sev are going to get it on :P
Author's Response:
Hahaha bow-chicca-wow-wow
| Title: Chapter 10: I'll Never Drown | 29 Apr 2014 |
| Reviewer: Outlawgal (Signed) |
- I was shocked when she said she couldn't be with a death eater like Severus. I wanted to slap her. But, I guess I can forgive her now that she regrets what she did and is back with Severus like she was supposed to be all along.
I wonder which horcrux they forgot and who brought back Voldeyshorts. Oh the irony Vodey dies in suck a muggle way. LOL!!!
Great Chapter
Author's Response:
I was worried about that break-up scene because I didn't want people to start hating Polly. I wanted to be true to the seriousness of Snape's actions though, and how hard that could be to get past for someone who had their parents killed by Deatheaters.
The Horcrux they didn't get was the Diary. Dumbledore figured out that they would be related to Hogwarts so they got the locket (James knew who RAB was), the cup and the diadum. Guant's ring was also an obvious choice to Voldemort. However, since the Chamber didn't open in this timeline, they did not figure out that the diary was a Horcrux until after Voldemort's return.
| Title: Chapter 11: Like I've Been There Before | 02 May 2014 |
| Reviewer: Outlawgal (Signed) |
- its called protection James :P
It happens at least once with every child the run away act. Oh course I don't remember doing it myself but i'm sure there is a fascinating story to found. :P
Author's Response:
Haha to be fair, they did want a big family! It just gets overwhelming at times. I definitel pulled the runaway act myself haha.
| Title: Chapter 12: Lean on Me | 02 May 2014 |
| Reviewer: Outlawgal (Signed) |
- Awww
Author's Response: Haha glad you liked it!
| Title: Chapter 13: I'll Be Your Soldier | 02 May 2014 |
| Reviewer: Outlawgal (Signed) |
- OMG I cried so much in this chapter. What a beginning. I knew that James wasn't going to die but still its not like I wasn't thinking it. WOW
James's chili must be REALLY good. He always cooks it :P
Poor Jason. I'm glad that Sev was able to help. Lets hope that his dad doesn't find them and the next things we know we are putting Jason and his mom in the ground and his dad is either on the run or in jail for double count of murder.
Author's Response:
Hey Outlawgal,
Thanks for all your reviews throughout this whole story! I always look to see what you have to say, so I just wanted you to know that it was very encouraging.
Yeah, poor James, he's a tough nut though, and I always think of chilli as the ultimate comfort food so I had James whip it out whenever comforting was neeed (which was a lot in this story admittedly haha).
I hope Jason is ok too. I think it would have been a bit of a wake-up call for his Mom, and although his Dad is an abusive asshole let's say he's not a murderer and they lived happily ever after. Don't worry though, Snape will keep an eye on him.
| Title: Chapter 14: Stay With You | 02 May 2014 |
| Reviewer: Outlawgal (Signed) |
- So that was Severus's time in the other world. Maybe he can still find Polly in his normal world. Still have Mikey and the daughter.
Ok back to the top. Wow what a shocker with the whole liver failure again I cried. Glad he made it out ok. I so wish he would have taken out Lucius it would have made my day.
Author's Response:
Hey Outlawgal!
I am a fan of the happy ending ; ). Yeah, poor Mikey! He was ok though.
| Title: Chapter 15: The Beginning | 02 May 2014 |
| Reviewer: Outlawgal (Signed) |
- I would love to see Severus get together with Polly again. But, I fully enjoyed this story. I would have loved to see what they would have named their little girl.
Author's Response:
Hey Outlawgal!
Thanks for the review! I'm so glad you enjoyed the story!
I actually was going to have them say the name of their daughter over Christmas with Harry (so in chapter 3 or 4), but it was getting long so I cut it. In case I don't do an epilogue, her name was going to be Fiona.
Harry has a plan to humiliate Umbridge, but with the help of a young house-elf, he gets a bit - okay, a LOT - more than he bargained for.
Takes Place: 5th Year - Snape flavour: Canon Snape
Tags: Spying!Harry
Categories: Misc > Strictly Canon Universe, Teacher Snape > Professor Snape
Takes Place: 5th Year - Snape flavour: Canon Snape
Tags: Spying!Harry
Categories: Misc > Strictly Canon Universe, Teacher Snape > Professor Snape
Rated: T
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Warnings: None
Chapters: 1 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 08 Apr 2014 / 08 Apr 2014
Series: None - Challenges: Uninhibited
Chapters: 1 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 08 Apr 2014 / 08 Apr 2014
Series: None - Challenges: Uninhibited
| Title: Chapter 1: A Very Merry Punch | 09 Apr 2014 |
| Reviewer: Outlawgal (Signed) |
- LOL poor Harry. He has to burn the images from his mind and hope Snape doesn't kill him.
When Harry returns to school for his third year battered and bruised, can his hated and feared Potions professor find a way to see through their mutual dislike and help? AU, Abused!Harry
Takes Place: 3rd Year - Snape flavour: Snape Comforts, Snape is Kind, Overly-protective Snape
Tags: Alternate Universe, Snape-meets-Dursleys
Categories: Healer Snape, Parental Snape > Guardian Snape
Takes Place: 3rd Year - Snape flavour: Snape Comforts, Snape is Kind, Overly-protective Snape
Tags: Alternate Universe, Snape-meets-Dursleys
Categories: Healer Snape, Parental Snape > Guardian Snape
Rated: T
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Warnings: Abusive Dursleys, Neglect, Profanity, Violence
Chapters: 7 - Completed: No - Updated: 19 Aug 2014 / 19 May 2014
Series: None - Challenges: None
Chapters: 7 - Completed: No - Updated: 19 Aug 2014 / 19 May 2014
Series: None - Challenges: None
| Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 | 20 Jun 2014 |
| Reviewer: Outlawgal (Signed) |
- Oh you have no idea how many ways you 'wizards' have failed your "savior"