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On Halloween, Harry embarks upon a bizarre quest in order to escape an impossible detention in the Potions Dungeon. Written for Halloween 2014.

Takes Place: 6th Year - Snape flavour: Snape is Controlling
Tags: Alternate Universe, Snape-meets-Dursleys
Categories: Teacher Snape > Professor Snape
Rated: T - Warnings: None
Chapters: 1 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 27 Oct 2014 / 27 Oct 2014
Series: None - Challenges: Halloween
Title: Chapter 1: Harry Potter and the Blood of Thieves 29 Oct 2014
Reviewer: teriwright (Signed)
    What, no apology? Snape really is a bastard.

    Author's Response: Apologize? Snape?? To a Potter??? Ha! Seriously, I think Snape is still in shock on several levels, but at least he did admit his error. That's about all one could expect from him. Thanks for taking the time to review.

On Halloween when the house elves decide that the demands on them are too much, and the appreciation too little, students and staff are forced to fend for themselves. For the unofficial Halloween challenge 2014. A Halloween and the week that follows story. A one-shot. This is also in response to JanAQ's House Elves In Revolt Challenge.

Takes Place: 3rd Year - Snape flavour: Snape is Angry, Canon Snape, Snape is Stern
Tags: None
Categories: Teacher Snape > Professor Snape, Fic Fests > Tri-Writing Tournament 2019 > Round One
Rated: K - Warnings: Romance/Het
Chapters: 1 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 30 Oct 2014 / 30 Oct 2014
Series: None - Challenges: Halloween, Hogwart's Kitchens, Multiple Challenges, House Elves in Revolt
Title: Chapter 1: Not An Elf 31 Oct 2014
Reviewer: teriwright (Signed)
    This was quite a fun read :-)

    I'm surprised that an Elf Strike has never been considered before in a fanfic. Well done! Very creative!

The summer Harry turns eighteen he sleeps alone in a shed at the Burrow. Will he be fit to return to Hogwarts for a seventh year of education? What does a last year at Hogwarts have to offer in the aftermaths of Voldemort’s demise? And how will Harry cope with the Headmaster in office?

Takes Place: 7th Year - Snape flavour: None
Tags: None
Categories: Healer Snape, Teacher Snape > Professor Snape
Rated: 16+ - Warnings: Romance/Het, Romance/Slash, Self-harm, Suicide Themes
Chapters: 47 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 24 Nov 2015 / 11 Nov 2014
Series: Spiral - Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 Housing distrust 24 Feb 2015
Reviewer: teriwright (Signed)
    I've quite enjoyed this story and look forward to more. I will say that I agree with the students and disagree most vehemently with Snape's decision to punish those that were prevented from attending school with loss of prefect status and to a lesser extent playing on a sports team. Especially the prefect status.

    It's no fault of the students and they shouldn't be penalized by taking away a position of authority, leadership and trust within the school.

    It's basically saying that unless you were a supporter of voldemort, or you are a pureblood (those that attended the previous year) you won't be allowed leadership positions or to participate in Quidditch no matter what.

    Wrong message to send IMHO. It should be based on merit, not blood status and political outlook.

    Still, I quite enjoy the story. Snape is dick and I can't see why Harry even cares about him at this point. Seriously, Harry has taken enough abuse and given Snape more than enough chances. Enough is enough. A relationship with him is just not possible unless Snape changes on his own.

    Plus, I hate to see harry not stick up for himself and enforce boundaries against those that want to hurt him... ie Snape. Harry needs to grow up a bit in this area I think.

    Major kudos on not glossing over the rage, hurt, and desire for vengeance the students that suffered under Snape feel. Also kudos for not glossing over the immense distrust they feel towards him.... with good reason. It just can't be ignored. In RL, I suspect those students that reveled in the ability to hurt the disfavored students will meet with some comeuppance, no matter what anyone says and I can't say I blame them.

    Tough subject matter for sure and I can't wait to see where you go with this!

    Author's Response:

    Thanks for reviewing! You’re right of course - it is unfair what Snape does to the pupils who were unable to attend school the previous year. He justifies his decision by stressing the importance to study for the exams. In his mind, he probably thinks he is helping them. But he is high-handed and disregards the problem that he is at the same time punishing them, like you pointed out.

     

     

    It's possible, however, that the employers of the wizard society, being aware of what happened during the war 1997-1998, will give the students who graduate after an extra year at Hogwarts priority over those who stayed during Voldemort’s regime. Maybe it will be the purebloods who will have to justify themselves? Maybe its them who will be at a disadvantage when applying for the leadership positions in the wizard world, prefect status or not?


Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9 On the Ethics of Magic - Obliviating 26 Feb 2015
Reviewer: teriwright (Signed)
    I think I love you!

    The ethical discussion about the Obliviate Charm is something I've been longing to read. I just wish I could observe more of the discussion, but realize it would bog down the story. The brevity in what you did include was perfect and prodded us readers to think about it on our own. You gave just enough teasers to keep us engaged but didn't hit us over the head.

    This is becoming one of my favorite stories.

    Can't wait for more!

    Author's Response: Thank you! That was particularly gratifying to hear after a hard day at work... Think I love you too :-)

Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10 Cursing Sir Nicholas 01 Mar 2015
Reviewer: teriwright (Signed)
    OMG....what the hell is Snape's problem? I just don't understand "why" he's doing this. He must sincerely hate them, or have utter contempt for them.

    Talk about blaming the victim at that last part: "it's your fault I invaded your mind, even if I made sure you have no skill in the Mind Arts whatsoever ;-) At least Harry can avoid him for 2 months: give himself some much needed space from the jerk and time to figure out how to not let these sorts of people score a hit emotionally. It's a skill we all have to learn eventually.

    Gah! I love Snape even when I hate him.

    Kudos on creating a background for incantations. Making up Magical Theory from scratch can't be easy. I sincerely commend your imagination.

    Can't wait for more!

    Author's Response: I'm sorry Snape is so exasperating - but Snape is Snape, right? It will take a lot of time for him to change, if ever... Thanks for your encouragement on making up Magical Theory - I enjoy it :-) 

Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11 A Strangling Incantation 12 Mar 2015
Reviewer: teriwright (Signed)
    I'm happy to see an update to this most engaging story. Major points again for the very creative invention of new magic and spells. I love reading it each chapter. I could totally visualize the shield and turning it from protection to containment. Well done!

    I'll be honest, I'm mentally throwing my hands in the air and giving up on Snape. This is like an alcoholic that refuses help over an over again. Finally, people around them just have to step back and let them hit rock bottom. I'm this close to not caring about him. There is only so much drama one can take and defend.

    Plus, I don't actually think he's the best person for reconciliation. My impression is that he doesn't give a sh%t about it, only his own agenda. Actions speak louder than words and his actions...well, they don't really lend themselves to reconciliation do they? Did I miss something?

    Whew! You've done well in getting me emotionally engaged in the story and the characters, even if I want to give up on Snape ;-)

    Author's Response:

    I'm glad you're engaged! I take on the challenge to make you change your mind about Snape before this story is over :-) I don't say that I'm sure I will succeed, but I will do my very best. I understand that I'm not doing so well until now, but just you wait and see...

    That said, I completely agree with you that with some people (those afflicted by addictions, or some personality disorders for example) you do best to just stay away from them. I believe that Harry is actually trying to do precisely that, but that he is thrown in Snape's way by different circumstances all the time. It is particularly difficult if the person you're dealing with and need to stay away from is, let's say, a parent, an employer, or, like in this case, a teacher and a headmaster, who you are dependant on. All you can do, then, is to find a way to manoeuvre around that person and minimise the damage they can cause you. 


Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12 Righteousness and guilt 19 Mar 2015
Reviewer: teriwright (Signed)
    Another great chapter! I commend you for tackling head on the issues these kids would suffer from in the aftermath of war.

    I'm happy Harry found a way to communicate with Snape, since he's been forced to work with the Git, that doesn't include personal insults and humiliation that face-to-face encounters always seem to devolve to.

    Author's Response: Thanks! The letters were tolerably decent, I think, even if Snape's impatient character shone through.

Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16 The Spiral Case Knight´s Battle Move 15 Apr 2015
Reviewer: teriwright (Signed)
    LOL, I see how Hagrid evaded harry's question as to who is comparing Harry to Voldemort. Turn about is fair play eh Hagrid? :-)

    Author's Response: I reckon Hagrid can be quite pigheaded if he wants to :-) 

Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34 Abandoned 09 Jul 2015
Reviewer: teriwright (Signed)
    Now would be a good time for harry to hire a solicitor. He's not capable of defending himself at this point and it seems his gov't is only too willing to hang him out to dry.

    I can't believe I missed the clue from chapter 9! Good on you! Here I have been thinking about careers that don't include Healing or Auror's because Harry didn't have the Arithmancy.

    You've done a brilliant job in creating a society where people are held back at the whims of a few people with power, instead of a society that supports and encourages everyone to excel, no matter if they accomplish things in a non-traditional way or have the wrong bloodline.

    The example with Vector was very illuminating. And frustrating. What does it matter if she taught harry or if he self-studied? It costs nothing and inconveniences no one to allow Harry to take a test. He'll pass or fail on his own merits. Unless, she's put out that she can't claim the prestige of teaching The Savior? How many other people have had their dreams shattered because they didn't take the right class when they were 13 yo?

    The thing with Ginny: I'm sort of numb at this point. I hope this spells the end of their romantic relationship, even though it would hurt Harry in the short term. Long term I think it would be the best decision for all involved.

    You certainly keep your readers engaged and on the edge of their seats :-)

    Author's Response:

    It sounds rather depressive and disturbing when you put it like that - ”creating a society where people are held back at the whims of a few people with power”  - I had not thought of it that way, but it is interesting to consider it now that you point it out. I generally see myself as an optimistic and trusting person who find my way in societey, but I guess that I have encountered enough of those people in life (and have we not all done that?) who behave capriciously for reasons of their own. I think I merely want to point out that those people exist and particularly for young people who have not yet learnt to argue against authorities and stand up for their rights, the encounters with persons like that (Healer Schufflert, Professor Vector) might actually have great impact on their lives. 

    More about the legal aspects of Harry’s actions in Paris in the next chapter.

    More about Harry’s and Ginny’s relationship in a few chapters….



Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14 Mind Soothing 01 Apr 2015
Reviewer: teriwright (Signed)
    Good for Harry! He's always going to be a protector is he? :-) I was wondering if that particular memory of Malfoy's would surface with her relative in the group. Powerful stuff. Reconciliation is not easy to say the least. I don't know if I would have it in me to reject the anger and bitterness when sitting across from the person that tortured my parent/relative and recognize they were traumatized by the event as well. Kudos again for tacking these post-war issues. So very engaging and interesting.

    I'm getting weird, suspicious vibes off the Healer. Should I, or am I just too suspicious myself? Why on earth would she insist on putting Harry and Malfoy in the same group, totally disregarding Snape's suggestion? It's like she was hoping for a confrontation....???

    The last line I could feel Harry's frustration at yet again, being judged by Snape's jumping to conclusions and being assigned in the wrong. I can't wait for more!!!

    Author's Response:

    Hello again! Thanks for reviewing. Harry is, of course, forever the protecting Gryffindor :-) 

    As for Healer Schufflert, she might just be one of those slightly megalomaniac therapists that unfortunately exist, also in the magical world (among extremely considerate and professional ones, of course). She’s probably honoured by the task and eager, perhaps, to prove herself, to a point where she loses sight of the pupils best interests…

    And Snape is still prejudiced against Harry… I’m happy to give Harry an occasion to prove him wrong and speak his mind - coming in the next chapter.  




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