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Dumbledore's Men by Bil starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 15]
Post-HBP. Harry runs into Snape. They manage to communicate for once.

Takes Place: None - Snape flavour: None
Tags: None
Categories: Snape Equal Status to Harry > Comrades Snape and Harry
Rated: T - Warnings: None
Chapters: 1 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 26 Feb 2006 / 26 Feb 2006
Series: None - Challenges: Post HBP: The Next Meeting
Title: Chapter 1: Dumbledore's Men 01 Mar 2006
Reviewer: pdantzler (Signed)

    Well done - very moving. I wish it could have been longer. I love scenes that take place at night so when the morning comes the characters wonder if it all were a dream, a trick of the darkness.

    Please keep writing. I enjoy your style 


Just Two Nights by Suzu_Beaver starstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 8]
Harry is dying in the Hospial Wing a decade after the defeat of the Dark Lord. Snape is recalled from exile to tend to him, for reasons only Harry keeps mum about. Snape is not a very sympathetic or gentle care-taker, both because he is bitter and tired, and because Harry throws things at Snape's head.

There is also a horcrux involved, somewhere.

Takes Place: 8 - Post Hogwarts (young adult Harry) - Snape flavour: None
Tags: None
Categories: Parental Snape > Guardian Snape

Rated: T - Warnings: None
Chapters: 1 - Completed: No - Updated: 27 Feb 2006 / 27 Feb 2006
Series: None - Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 01 Mar 2006
Reviewer: pdantzler (Signed)

    Good, but a little confusing. Hopefully, the next chapter will be clearer since I'm having trouble understanding what has taken place. Please make the next chapter longer so we can get more information. I'm sure this is just a start, so I'll wait to read more before giving any more criticism.

    Keep writing, and I'll keep reading. 



    Author's Response: Thanks!  Will try to write more next chapter, but ack, it\'s a lot harder than I\'d thought.

A meeting unlike the others by preety_lady_serenity starstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 17]
Response to Fic Fest Challenge #16:
It is a little known fact that Parselmouths are sensitive to certain kinds of music...

Takes Place: None - Snape flavour: None
Tags: Alternate Universe
Categories: Snape Equal Status to Harry > Comrades Snape and Harry
Rated: T - Warnings: None
Chapters: 1 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 28 Feb 2006 / 28 Feb 2006
Series: None - Challenges: Music Sensitivity
Title: Chapter 1: A meeting unlike the others 28 Feb 2006
Reviewer: pdantzler (Signed)

    This is good. I wish it could be a little longer. Also, I wanted to have more description about the sound whistling has for Harry. Is it horrible shrill? Does it make his teeth buzz with pain?

    But good story. We want more as always.


The Silent Watcher by Howl starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 6]
Set before 'The Only Thing He Needed', Snape watches Harry after the incident with Malfoy and Potter in the Entrance Hall, and comes to some different conculsions. Major OoTP spoilers, end of fifth year. Not Slash One-shot

Takes Place: 6th summer - Snape flavour: None
Tags: None
Categories: Misc, Misc > All written in Snape's POV
Rated: K - Warnings: None
Chapters: 1 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 09 Mar 2006 / 09 Mar 2006
Series: The Silent Watcher Series - Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 1: The Silent Watcher 10 Mar 2006
Reviewer: pdantzler (Signed)
    Nice. I liked it a lot. Keep writing.

Harry Potter and the Cavern of Crystals by bella eiram starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 19]
Picks up where HBP left off. Harry returns to Privet Drive one last time completely unaware of the evil that has taken root within Number 4. He must rely on his own strength and his ability to put aside past differences when Snape rescues him. He finds unexpected allies in his journey to destroy the Horcruxes.

Takes Place: None - Snape flavour: None
Tags: Adoption
Categories: Parental Snape > Guardian Snape
Rated: 16+ - Warnings: Abusive Dursleys, Torture
Chapters: 5 - Completed: No - Updated: 05 Apr 2006 / 21 Mar 2006
Series: None - Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 23 Mar 2006
Reviewer: pdantzler (Signed)

    Poor Harry! I hope Snape will help him get out.

    Keep up the good work.



    Author's Response: Thanks for the review.

Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 23 Mar 2006
Reviewer: pdantzler (Signed)

    Yay! Snape saved him.

    I really enjoyed this chpater. Keep it up!


A Great and Terrible Power by StormyLlewellyn starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 39]
Harry is in for a full summer dealing with the Slytherins. After his family dies, Snape if forced to take him to Spencer Academy for the summer. New enemies, new friends, new powers. Mentor!Snape and eventually Guardian!Snape.

Takes Place: 6th summer - Snape flavour: None
Tags: Adoption
Categories: Misc
Rated: K - Warnings: Alcohol Use, Character Death, Rape, Self-harm
Chapters: 5 - Completed: No - Updated: 28 Mar 2006 / 22 Mar 2006
Series: None - Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 2: Slaves to the Past 23 Mar 2006
Reviewer: pdantzler (Signed)

    Very good at building suspense. I can't wait for the next chapter.

     I've always enjoyed that idea that all the kids in the books are paying for the actions of their parents or the generation before them. You tapped into that feeling, and I really like it. 


For Duty and Honor by Bratling starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 262]
During Occulmency lessons in the course of Harry Potter and the Order of the Phoenix, Severus notices something... off in Harry's memories.

Takes Place: 6th summer - Snape flavour: None
Tags: Adoption, Alternate Universe, Snape-meets-Dursleys
Categories: Teacher Snape > Trusted Mentor Snape, Parental Snape > Guardian Snape
Rated: T - Warnings: Abusive Dursleys, Neglect, Profanity, Violence
Chapters: 17 - Completed: No - Updated: 12 Dec 2010 / 27 Mar 2006
Series: None - Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 1: Orsa 31 Mar 2006
Reviewer: pdantzler (Signed)

    Great chapter! You should bring this to the workshop! I like your speed of writing.

    Post another shapter soon!

    Author's Response: I\'ll think about it, Perry.  Dan did say to bring anything, even fanfic, to workshop, right?  ;) I should be writing chapter six about now, I guess.  Am a bit blocked.  Glad you like this little bit of AUness.

Title: Chapter 6: Congressus 03 May 2006
Reviewer: pdantzler (Signed)
    Great chapter. I really enjoyed all the conversation and banter. It keep the pacing moving very quickly. Please keep writing and give us more! 

    Author's Response: Thanks, Perry!  And yes, there will be more soon.

Forgiveness by the Thames by lesyeuxverts starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 8]
After the war, Severus Snape is looking for Harry Potter and something that only Harry can give him.

Takes Place: 8 - Post Hogwarts (young adult Harry) - Snape flavour: None
Tags: None
Categories: Snape Equal Status to Harry > Comrades Snape and Harry
Rated: 16+ - Warnings: None
Chapters: 1 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 30 Mar 2006 / 30 Mar 2006
Series: None - Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 1: Forgiveness by the Thames 30 Mar 2006
Reviewer: pdantzler (Signed)
    Good chapter - very sad and quietly morose. I would like to see more from you.


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