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Reviews by LtsHrIt4ThBoyz

To Trust One-Shots by Abie starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 61]
This is a series of one-shots in the universe of 'To Trust', featuring Harry's first year and onward.

Takes Place: 1st Year - Snape flavour: None
Tags: None
Categories: Parental Snape > Guardian Snape
Rated: T - Warnings: None
Chapters: 4 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 22 Apr 2017 / 09 Nov 2015
Series: To Trust - Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 1: To Belong 30 Mar 2016
Reviewer: LtsHrIt4ThBoyz (Signed)
    Excellent!
    I had speculated (I have quite spirited discussions with myself;-D!) that perhaps 'Jade' was magical, too, but then, as your original story progressed, I became increasingly convinced that Jade had been killed by her step-father and had only hoped that Harry would eventually discover the truth of her 'disappearance'. Was Jade older than Harry and could she already be at Hogwarts? If Jade knew Harry's name, from when they used to 'escape' for awhile and since she would have surely heard of 'Harry Potter' after arriving at Hogwarts, why wouldn't she have made the connection and maybe have alerted...Whoops, I forgot: Complete lack of trust in adults. Ah well!
    Anyway, great oneshot, but I'm a little confused about why you 'couldn't' do a sequel and opted to write these oneshots, instead?
    Also, I'm slightly surprised, that after the technical skill you displayed in your first story, to see quite a few typos and grammar errors in this. Were you in a great hurry or were you forced to type on an unfamiliar medium, like an iphone (I believe the 'i' stands for idiot, myself.)
    Anyway, thanks for sharing more of this story with us!
    MelJ

Title: Chapter 2: To Find 30 Mar 2016
Reviewer: LtsHrIt4ThBoyz (Signed)
    Wow; that was a shock and not anything like I'd envisioned! Good, though!
    Gosh I'm not sure where I'd like to see you go with this, but I know I don't want to see Harry holding anything back! I want others to see just how intelligent Harry is, but without 'Mione's know-it-allness. Harry always had great potential, but Rowling chose to hobble him with Ron, but then Rowling chose to handicap 99.9% of her characters, except Fumbledick, the MOB!
    Thanks, again for sharing your gift with us!
    MelJ

All the World's a Stage by Alexannah starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 139]
Snape, of course, would no sooner let them play games in class than adopt Harry -GoF pg 342.

Harry never expected to be adopted—especially not by Snape. Harry hates his new father, and the feeling is mutual. But to the outside world, they have to pretend otherwise, or Harry could end up in very deep trouble. Is anyone that good at acting?

~In memory of one of the greatest actors of our time~

Takes Place: 5th summer - Snape flavour: Snape is Controlling, Snape is Kind, Snape is Loving, Overly-protective Snape, Snape is Secretive, Snape is Stern
Tags: Adoption, Alternate Universe
Categories: Parental Snape > Guardian Snape
Rated: K+ - Warnings: Abusive Dursleys, Neglect
Chapters: 8 - Completed: No - Updated: 14 May 2016 / 15 Jan 2016
Series: None - Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 7: End of a Weird Day 30 Mar 2016
Reviewer: LtsHrIt4ThBoyz (Signed)
    Yes, please continue as soon as possible and, please try to find a way to 'enlighten' Severus to Harry's actual life in Durskaban?
    Thanks!
    MelJ

Ripped by Morgana starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 63]
Harry, scarred from an attack by Ripper, enters the magical world and encounters none other than Professor Snape.
OOC warning because characters have developed/matured due to change in circumstances

Takes Place: 0 - Pre Hogwarts (before Harry is 11) - Snape flavour: Canon Snape, Snape Comforts
Tags: Child fic, Injured!Harry, Physical Impairment, Snape-meets-Dursleys
Categories: Healer Snape
Rated: K+ - Warnings: Out of Character, Profanity
Chapters: 6 - Completed: No - Updated: 04 Mar 2016 / 31 Jan 2016
Series: None - Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 1: A Whole New World 07 Apr 2016
Reviewer: LtsHrIt4ThBoyz (Signed)
    Thank you, thank you: I've been waiting to read a story, with just this viewpoint, ever since I discovered HPff! It's just one of the many, many (ad nauseum) 'off notes' or discrepancies that I thought of after attempting to read the rubbish series!
    Imho, though my opinion is considered to be BLASPHEMY by most. Rowling did, indeed, prove able to drag together EVERY SINGLE PIECE of mythos, fairytale, folklore, fantasy, and CLICHE from every HIGHER CALIBER piece of fiction EVER WRITTEN into HER hodge-podge of stories, but there the compliment and comparison ends!
    If I go to a 5 Star restaurant and order the VERY BEST of everything and eat it all, including dessert and the rarest of vintages and then proceed to turn and VOMIT IT OUT onto a piece of canvas, would you be inclined to pay an extravagant price to own it just because it contains pieces of some very rare and expensive food though regurgitated by a FOOL? Sorry; this is why I READ HPff: Because quite a lot of it is written by writers who actually THINK and have a HEART! Just because her publisher is really good at SELLING Rowling's 'work' and popularizing it to mostly young, inexperienced readers doesn't make them all that GOOD! The REAL WRITERS (LIKE YOU!) are HERE, working in relative obscurity!
    That's one thing I LOVED about the Star Trek fandom: Gene Roddenberry ENCOURAGED writers with ideas for ST FAN FICTION to publish and make money on his creation! They're some of my most treasured books! I only wish that the greedy bastards who control the HP franchise would let Y'ALL make the money y'all deserve and show Rowling what REAL WRITING looks like! Cuz she hasn't a clue!
    Thank you for this great beginning!
    I know you probably won't answer and that I probably won't like what you say, anyway, but there it is: YOU ROCK and Rowling SUCKS!
    MelJ
    54 year old, lifelong Fantasy and Sci-Fi bibliophile!

Title: Chapter 6: Interlude 3: Running with Wolves 07 Apr 2016
Reviewer: LtsHrIt4ThBoyz (Signed)
    Wow! What a tasty treat you're serving! Please, may we have some more?
    A wonderful, original premise and characters with more than ONE dimension; yes, quite delicious.
    Thank you for sharing!
    MelJ

Fawkes' Secret by Morgana starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 3]
Draco and Harry discover Fawkes' secret when they sneak into the Forbidden Forest, whilst Draco was spying on Dumbledore and Harry was spying on Draco. Unfortunately for them, the spies were spied by one Severus Snape!

Takes Place: 2nd Year - Snape flavour: Canon Snape
Tags: Alternate Universe
Categories: Teacher Snape > Professor Snape
Rated: K+ - Warnings: None
Chapters: 3 - Completed: No - Updated: 26 Apr 2018 / 26 Apr 2018
Series: None - Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 3: Understanding 27 Apr 2018
Reviewer: LtsHrIt4ThBoyz (Signed)
    Interesting! I hope to see more Mentor!Snape and Thinking!Harry, please?
    I'd prefer it if you kicked Dumbleweed's ass, but do as you will.
    Thanks!
    MelJ

The Safe House by Morgana starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 7]
After Severus Snape kills Voldemort on the eve of his planned attack on the Potters, James, Lily, Harry, Frank, Alice, Sirius, Remus and, yes, Severus Snape find themselves in a safe-house.

Takes Place: 0 - Pre Hogwarts (before Harry is 11) - Snape flavour: Canon Snape, Snape is Loving
Tags: Child fic
Categories: Parental Snape > Guardian Snape, Parental Snape > Stepfather Snape
Rated: T - Warnings: Profanity
Chapters: 1 - Completed: No - Updated: 26 Apr 2018 / 26 Apr 2018
Series: None - Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 27 Apr 2018
Reviewer: LtsHrIt4ThBoyz (Signed)
    I like it. Interesting and different!
    MelJ

It's not enough by lastcrazyhorn starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 99]
Harry wants what no one has thought to give him. Safety. Security. The ability to rely on someone else. And he's willing to go to any length to find it.

Takes Place: 2nd summer, 2nd Year - Snape flavour: Overly-protective Snape, Snape is Stern
Tags: Adoption, Alternate Universe
Categories: Teacher Snape > Trusted Mentor Snape
Rated: T - Warnings: Abusive Dursleys, Neglect
Chapters: 26 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 19 Jun 2018 / 26 May 2018
Series: Wanted - Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 1: Darkened Room 26 May 2018
Reviewer: LtsHrIt4ThBoyz (Signed)
    There--that's what's missing from all of Rowling's works: Humanity and reality! This is how a *real* child would feel; without dismissal, without downplaying, without whitewash!
    Now, please help to dry his tears and mine; please say you're going to relieve his suffering, quickly?
    Thanks, so much!
    MelJ

    Author's Response: Soon.  Somewhat.  And eventually, yes.  :)


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