Ravenclaw!
Harry Potter is located in London in the dead of night. How exactly did he end up there, and what has he been doing? Well, any kid with half a brain knows not to talk to strangers.
Takes Place: 1st summer before Hogwarts
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Snape flavour: None
Tags: None
Categories: Parental Snape > Guardian Snape
Membership status: Member
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Reviews by ravenhaired88
Rated: T
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Warnings: Abusive Dursleys, Neglect, Suicide Themes
Chapters: 22 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 02 Mar 2015 / 03 Apr 2014
Series: To Trust - Challenges: None
Chapters: 22 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 02 Mar 2015 / 03 Apr 2014
Series: To Trust - Challenges: None
| Title: Chapter 14: Flight or Fall | 05 Aug 2014 |
| Reviewer: ravenhaired88 (Signed) |
- I always look forward to updates on this story :) I think I might agree -- not my favorite chapter, but necessary. I think it's better to write so that the overall story is the best it can be, not so that each individual chapter has tons of excitement.
Great job!
Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing! I'm really glad you appreciated the chapter, despite its slow pace, and that you understood what my intention was.
| Title: Chapter 15: Still Living | 17 Aug 2014 |
| Reviewer: ravenhaired88 (Signed) |
- Ah I can't wait for Snape to get the whole story! But I actually really appreciate that you're taking your time and not rushing it. Their relationship is building beautifully.
| Title: Chapter 16: A Detour | 29 Aug 2014 |
| Reviewer: ravenhaired88 (Signed) |
- Yay! So glad you updated! I love this story. I thought this scene with Knockturn Alley was rather interesting. I'll be curious to see how or whether it ends of affecting Harry - his realization that he is a bit out of his depth in the wizarding world. I liked your ending - Severus seeming to think something happened, Harry trying to assure him nothing did.
| Title: Chapter 17: Simple Joys | 21 Sep 2014 |
| Reviewer: ravenhaired88 (Signed) |
- This was a really sweet chapter. I love it.
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm really glad you liked the chapter.
| Title: Chapter 10: Storm of Fire | 22 Jun 2014 |
| Reviewer: ravenhaired88 (Signed) |
- I still love love where this is going. I also really like how you are using Harry to sort of describe the typical manipulative!Dumbledore, yet making Dumbledore (I think?) kind. It's pretty cool.
Author's Response: Thanks! Yeah, I thought it would be interesting to do the opposite of the typical scenario, where Harry trusts Dumbledore while the old man manipulates every detail of his life. Instead, I had Harry think that Dumbledore's manipulating him, while really...
| Title: Chapter 11: A Way Out | 10 Jul 2014 |
| Reviewer: ravenhaired88 (Signed) |
- Ah!! So glad for the new chapter, and now so anxious for the next!! I love the journey you are taking us on with Snape and Harry. The interactions, the misunderstandings, the realizations... all great.
Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing! I really appreciate your feedback.
Harry Potter stolen away from his relatives house, and Draco Malfoy the only witness. There would be some explaining to do, if Severus managed to save the brat in time.
Takes Place: 6th summer - Snape flavour: Canon Snape
Tags: Kidnapped!Harry, Snape-meets-Dursleys, Spying on Harry! Snape
Categories: Healer Snape, Teacher Snape > Professor Snape
Takes Place: 6th summer - Snape flavour: Canon Snape
Tags: Kidnapped!Harry, Snape-meets-Dursleys, Spying on Harry! Snape
Categories: Healer Snape, Teacher Snape > Professor Snape
Rated: T
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Warnings: Abusive Dursleys, Neglect, Torture, Violence
Chapters: 13 - Completed: No - Updated: 08 Jan 2018 / 07 Jul 2014
Series: None - Challenges: None
Chapters: 13 - Completed: No - Updated: 08 Jan 2018 / 07 Jul 2014
Series: None - Challenges: None
| Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Draco's Expectations | 07 Jul 2014 |
| Reviewer: ravenhaired88 (Signed) |
- I love this so far -- I can't wait to read more! I'm excited to find out Brent's backstory.
Author's Response: Hey! Brent has a large role in the beginning of this story, and I'm so glad your're intriqed by him, :D Hope you have a wonderful week!
Harry is heartbroken by memory of his father bulling Snape and isn't sure where to continue from there. Unfortunately, he doesn't have much time to mourn, because when Snape finds him, he is furious at the invasion of privacy. Once dragged to the man's quarters, Harry learns that it's best not to make his Potions Professor snap.
Too late.
Takes Place: 5th Year - Snape flavour: Snape is Angry, Snape Comforts, Snape is Kind, Snape is Mean, Snape is Stern
Tags: None
Categories: Teacher Snape > Professor Snape
Too late.
Takes Place: 5th Year - Snape flavour: Snape is Angry, Snape Comforts, Snape is Kind, Snape is Mean, Snape is Stern
Tags: None
Categories: Teacher Snape > Professor Snape
Rated: K
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Warnings: Abusive Dursleys, Physical Punishment Spanking
Chapters: 5 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 18 Jul 2014 / 11 Jul 2014
Series: None - Challenges: Apologies
Chapters: 5 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 18 Jul 2014 / 11 Jul 2014
Series: None - Challenges: Apologies
| Title: Chapter 4: Four: The Complaints | 18 Jul 2014 |
| Reviewer: ravenhaired88 (Signed) |
- Ah I can't wait for the rest!!!
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When Harry and Draco are at it again, a tense duel insues. But when happens when the dungeon bat of Hogwarts just happens to be standing by? A spell rebounds and hits him, leaving him completely vulnerable to one Mr. Harry J. Potter... So what happens next? In response to ravenhaired88's Grounded! Challenge.
Takes Place: 6th Year - Snape flavour: Snape is Angry, Snape is Depressed, Snape is Desperate, Out of Character Snape
Tags: Alternate Universe
Categories: Misc > No category on the site fits
Takes Place: 6th Year - Snape flavour: Snape is Angry, Snape is Depressed, Snape is Desperate, Out of Character Snape
Tags: Alternate Universe
Categories: Misc > No category on the site fits
Rated: K
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Warnings: Out of Character
Chapters: 1 - Completed: No - Updated: 13 Sep 2014 / 13 Sep 2014
Series: None - Challenges: Grounded!
Chapters: 1 - Completed: No - Updated: 13 Sep 2014 / 13 Sep 2014
Series: None - Challenges: Grounded!
| Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 | 15 Sep 2014 |
| Reviewer: ravenhaired88 (Signed) |
- Yay! I'm so glad to see someone answering my challenge! I thought it would be such a funny idea. Woo can't wait for more! (Also, if you go to the challenge page and click 'respond to the challenge' you can make this story appear under the challenge, just a tip.) Awesome opener, I hope we get more soon!
Author's Response: Yeah, I absouletly LOVED that challenge xD Thanks for the advice!
| Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 | 15 Sep 2014 |
| Reviewer: ravenhaired88 (Signed) |
- hm, I was just thinking about the issue some other reviewers have brought up about the lines, or really the whole page, being overly long in the horizontal direction. Personally, I generally type my stories up on Google Drive and then copy-paste. I don't remember if there is an option for straight uploading, but did you try just copy-pasting? Or perhaps putting your story into a processor with less formatting than Word, such as TextEdit or WordPad/NotePad? I've never tried these, so they might have their own issues, I'm just thinking there may be some formatting thing that got left in and messed with the html script when it got copied over.
Author's Response: Okay, thanks for the advice!