COMPLETE. Harry and Hermione go to a prestigious summer school, where Snape is a teacher. Unfortunately for Harry, Snape has spoken to the other staff and is on his way to turning the whole school against Harry.
Takes Place: 6th summer
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Snape flavour: Snape is Angry, Snape's a Bully, Canon Snape, Snape is Cruel, Snape is Kind, Snape is Loving, Snape is Mean, Snape is Stern
Tags: Adoption, Hospitalization, Injured!Harry
Categories: Healer Snape, Teacher Snape > Trusted Mentor Snape, Teacher Snape > Professor Snape, Parental Snape > Guardian Snape
Membership status: Member
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Reviews by cookie-time
Rated: 16+
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Warnings: Abusive Dursleys, Neglect, Physical Punishment Non-Spanking, Romance/Het, Violence
Chapters: 30 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 31 Jul 2020 / 20 Jan 2014
Series: None - Challenges: Another School, Other wizarding cultures
Chapters: 30 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 31 Jul 2020 / 20 Jan 2014
Series: None - Challenges: Another School, Other wizarding cultures
| Title: Chapter 13: What He Wanted | 05 Feb 2015 |
| Reviewer: cookie-time (Signed) |
- I love you and Gan and the slow yet still perfect pace this story is taking. I was however kinda disappointed when harry didn'show his awsome planning skills he seemed to have during training (you know, when the pairs fought against each other he seemed to be able to analyse everything) but you still managed to make everything turn outpretty good!
Oh and his fear of August is really well done! And lastly, is it just me or are there less characters shown? I mean where are the girls hermoine hang out with or did she gave them up fully? Or just the other students in general...and/or the teachers? I also guess you won't write any classes in detail anymore but I think it would be kinda nice to sometimes read more detailed ones...just my opinon ^_^
Sorry for the long rant. Please keep being awesome, you are great at that.
Have a nice day.
Author's Response:
The other students are there they just don't have to be mentioned. I like to really just focus on the main characters and in this case the story is very Harry centric. In a lot of my stories the lesser characters really take a back seat in the story to focus on Harry and his thoughts and feelings. He's not really interacting with a lot of people in the story at this point so we're not seeing a lot of the characters. It's just implied that he's seeing Hermione in some of his classes that she is now taking with him and at meal times.
It's good to hear what you want to see in the story, that is always welcome. Thanks for the review.
When Dumbledore sees the welts upon Harry Potter, he removes him from his relative's care at once. His guardian for the summer is none other than Severus Snape. It is an unhappy arrangement-Snape is snarky and snide, making Harry do chores and never keeping him happy. But Harry realises that Snape is not as he seems. In fact, he is just what Harry had needed all along-a support. Warning: CP!
Takes Place: 2nd summer - Snape flavour: Snape is Angry, Canon Snape, Snape Comforts, Snape is Controlling, Snape is Kind, Snape is Loving, Snape is Mean, Overly-protective Snape, Snape is Stern
Tags: Adoption, Snape-meets-Dursleys
Categories: Parental Snape > Guardian Snape
Takes Place: 2nd summer - Snape flavour: Snape is Angry, Canon Snape, Snape Comforts, Snape is Controlling, Snape is Kind, Snape is Loving, Snape is Mean, Overly-protective Snape, Snape is Stern
Tags: Adoption, Snape-meets-Dursleys
Categories: Parental Snape > Guardian Snape
Rated: T
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Warnings: Abusive Dursleys, Physical Punishment Spanking, Neglect
Chapters: 14 - Completed: No - Updated: 08 Aug 2015 / 17 Jul 2014
Series: None - Challenges: None
Chapters: 14 - Completed: No - Updated: 08 Aug 2015 / 17 Jul 2014
Series: None - Challenges: None
| Title: Chapter 8: Apologies and Nightmares | 10 Nov 2014 |
| Reviewer: cookie-time (Signed) |
- So looking forward to this! A Hooray for Nightmare!Harry...or not...nightmares are shit. You really are a great writer and I enjoy your way with words. Did you change the font? I'm not sure, just felt like it (liked the one from the beginning more...I don't even know if you can change it...pretty new here...My first comment btw!...idk). ANYWAY. I really like the antsy parts. However, in my opinion it is getting a little repetitive, you know? Harry blowing up, Snape getting irritated, arguing, Harry gets punished, feeling sorry Harry goes to Snape and he forgives him...well at least until now. You did great with Snape not being as acceptive of the apology and keeping him grounded in his room. Hope you gonna keep it up! And it's so freaking cute when Harry's crying and Snapes like 'Stop crying! how the fuck am I supposed to handle a sobbing Potter-mess!' (In general a Harry in disstress and Snape not knowing how to handle it is just brilliant).
So, Thank you for being awesome!
Have a nice day