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Wow!! Snape really didn't pull any punches there, did he? I'm glad that the miscreants have been severely punished, as hopefully that will keep anyone else for getting any smart ideas!! I'm also glad that he's still looking out for his Slytherin's, even when they mess up!!
Poor Luna!! I do hope she'll be OK!! What a good friend she is to Harry!! And Poor Harry!! His poor ribs will never heal at this rate!! I'm so glad that Snape gave him that portkey - it must give him such a sense of safety!!
Awesome chapter!! I do hope Luna's dad won't be a problem!!
Scarlett
OMG!! What a fantastic story!! This is definitely going on my favorites list!!
Umm... I'm sorry though, I just couldn't bring myself to read Whelp - there is a level of Harry Harm that I just can't get past, and the idea of Harry being treated like a DOG by those horrible Durleys pushed all my squick buttons!! I'm sure it's a really great story, and I hope I don't get too lost in this one because I didn't read it, but I just don't think I can!!
I'm like Harry though, I'm trusting Severus to keep him safe in this story, and since I love your other stories so much, I thought I'd take the chance, and it was soooo worth it!!
Looking forward to more!!
Scarlett
OMG!! Poor Little Harry!! Severus is being a complete beast to the poor little mite!! He better smarten up before he traumatizes Harry completely beyond all help!! I love how Treacle is clearly looking out for Harry's best interests!! Scarlett
Yes!! Severus gets it!! I'm so glad that Severus apologized to Harry, and reinforced the fact that Harry isn't a freak and that his abilities are a good and natural part of him - I especially liked the way Severus drew parallels between his own fairly rare abilities and Harry's, so that if Harry couldn't hate Severus gifts that his own gifts weren't bad either!! Really really great chapter - terrific job!! Scarlett
OMG!! I'm so sorry your RL has become so difficult - I will send 'good job' vibes your way, and 'good health' vibes as well!!
I'm so glad Harry was able to talk to Severus about the abuse he received at the Dursleys, maybe it will help to unburden his poor little heart some!! I was also extremely pleased that Harry finally had a 'smooth' day with the Weasleys!! Molly is so good with Harry, I just love her in this story, and she just annoys me in canon, so kudos to you!!
I look forward to more, but I understand that you obviously have other priorities at the moment, so I'll just wish you the best of luck and hope we hear from you soon!! Scarlett
ohmygod!! Please let Severus keep his promise!! Harry needs to have promises to him kept - no excuses!! You're making me very nervous with that "He promised" in italics, and I shall wait on the edge of my seat for the next update (No pressure though - I'm sure you'll get to it when you can, no worries!), as I'm afraid something will come up and Harry will be left as an afterthought again!! PLEASE don't let Severus screw this up!! Fingers crossed - and Hugs for Harry!! Scarlett
Title: Chapter 1: The truth in pen and ink
| 09 Oct 2007
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Reviewer: ScarlettPendragon (Signed)
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OMG!! Poor Harry!! I hope Severus can help him, and I'm glad that at last someone isn't turning a blind eye to Harry's situation!! Please do continue, I think you have a fantastic start to what would be a terrific story!! Scarlett
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Let the games begin.
| 24 Oct 2007
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Reviewer: ScarlettPendragon (Signed)
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Wow!! Kudos on starting your first fic!! And you've really made a terrific start here!! I'm certainly looking forward to more - although I hope Severus isn't too hard on poor little Harry!! Scarlett
Author's Response: thank you so much! I hope you enjoy the next chapter!
Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2: Before we lose our way
| 25 Oct 2007
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Reviewer: ScarlettPendragon (Signed)
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OMG!! Little Harry tucked up in bed is soo cute!! I'm glad Severus isn't too too harsh with Harry, but he's right, the child definitely needs discipline so he's not a complete terror. I'm sorry though, I'm beginning to quite dislike your Lily, she sounds as though she's completely self-obsessed and living in the past!! To paraphrase one of my favourite sayings: "Get down off the cross, we need the wood!!" Severus and Harry had some really nice interaction in this chapter, and I hope we get to see them in situations when they're not at loggerheads with one another!! Looking forward to more!! Scarlett
Author's Response: I love that saying! I'd not heard it, but i'm going to keep it for future use. I love cute Harry, i'm writing some more of him at the moment! Harry and Severus will have a bit more bonding soon (though I bet Snape would hate the word 'bonding' LOL). Thanks for your lovely review! I'll have another chapter out very soon :-)
Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3: Stop and think, for a while.
| 28 Oct 2007
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Reviewer: ScarlettPendragon (Signed)
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OMG!! Poor Harry!! I hope that he hasn't been captured by Death Eaters!! And I do wish he'd tell Severus about whatever it was he did so that those evil boys couldn't blackmail him anymore!! Great chapter - I'm on the edge of my seat with worry for Harry!! Scarlett
Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing, it's really nice to know that you're enjoying the story!
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