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| SHallow [Contact]
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| Member since: 20 Apr 2015
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Title: Chapter 5: The Fire and Ice
| 27 Nov 2015
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Reviewer: SHallow (Signed)
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Poor Snape, not even remembering that he had said all of those emotional things. Harry, having all his dreams of Dursley free days crushed and torn apart bcuz of the bond
Author's Response: Yeah, I'm pretty good at making all my characters miserable. Call it a gift.
Title: Chapter 4: In Vino Veritas
| 12 Nov 2015
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Reviewer: SHallow (Signed)
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Will you continue this story, please? I am looking so so much forward to the next chapters.... Please.... Please please please.
Author's Response: I'm so sorry I haven't updated lately. I've been really busy with real life, and it's stopped me from updating, but I haven't forgotten about it, I promise.
Around a young witch or wizard's eleventh birthday they acquire wings, a sign that they have developed their full magic. Many worship their new wings, but to Harry, it's just another sign that he is a freak. Severus Snape is assigned his guardian over the summer before Harry's first year. It is up to him to teach young Harry the ways of the wizarding world and to come to terms with his newfound fame. But there is darkness lurking around every corner, and if Harry is not careful, it will be the last thing he ever knows. Eventual Severitus. Response to Mellow Moon's Wizards with Wings challenge
Takes Place: 1st summer before Hogwarts, 1st Year
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Snape flavour: Snape Comforts
Tags: Slytherin!Harry, Snape-meets-Dursleys
Categories: Parental Snape > Guardian Snape
Title: Chapter 3: A New Home For Summer
| 26 May 2015
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Reviewer: SHallow (Signed)
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The story seems to be well thought of and arranged, for now I cannot see any writers block barring ur way... You are really good at this Sam
Author's Response: Thank you so much! :)
Title: Chapter 5: Any Bets?
| 24 Jun 2015
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Reviewer: SHallow (Signed)
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As always awesome! Even though I just read a few of the coming chapters on fanfiction... Looking forward to the upcoming chapters
Author's Response: Haha, thanks. I've been going through to try and get everything to make more sense and when I'm happy, uploading them here. I'm almost caught up. I'll have a new chapter out within a couple of days though!
Title: Chapter 3: The Other Side
| 20 Apr 2015
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Reviewer: SHallow (Signed)
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I love how you have explained the whole situation so fiercely. It feels like part of the series; and I suppose that is what a great author does, makes a person feel intoned and included in the stories. I am definitely following this through to the end.
Title: Chapter 4: A Defensive Position
| 02 Jun 2015
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Reviewer: SHallow (Signed)
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I love this story!!! It is so awesome... Waiting for the next chapter. You are magniloquent, I swear.
Title: Chapter 7: Of Kelpies and Quiddich
| 19 Jul 2015
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Reviewer: SHallow (Signed)
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Brilliant as always... I love how you have shown how Snape cares for Potter (in a weird way) and also how Malfoy is not everything he seemed to Potter before. I am looling forward to the next chapter... Btw, how did Harry manage to clean the teapot if tje pot was so horrible? Is Harry better than a house elf? Or are the teachers just negligent of hygiene?
Author's Response: Thanks a lot :) I think a house elf would insist on using soap to clean the teapot and some brits are a bit funny about that. I think he got through it with elbow grease.
Title: Chapter 8: Visions and Velocity
| 03 Aug 2015
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Reviewer: SHallow (Signed)
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Interesting read, it's slightly different but excellent as always. Will Harry get over his addiction with dark magic? Was this a ploy by VoldyMoldy to find out Snape's true allegiances?
Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 3
| 29 May 2015
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Reviewer: SHallow (Signed)
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This is cool, a nice twist of realities!
Harry has a secret, and his magic helps him hide it. But all secrets come out sooner or later; they are easy to uncover if you know what to look for.
Takes Place: 4th Year
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Snape flavour: Canon Snape
Tags: Injured!Harry
Categories: Teacher Snape > Professor Snape
Rated: T
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Warnings: Abusive Dursleys
Chapters: 7
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Completed: Yes
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Updated: 05 Aug 2015 / 14 Apr 2015
Series: None
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Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 3: Hallucination
| 20 Apr 2015
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Reviewer: SHallow (Signed)
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The first chapter was very short, so not unpleasant but not brilliant either. This chapetr seems to have covered the whole scenario much better, and the glamours are a good way to show it all. Will be watching out for the next update.
Author's Response: I tried making the first chapter longer but it just didn't work. This third chapter is actually the first one I planned and wrote, and is the best at setting it out. Throughout the chapters, make sure you note when it is that people can/can't see through the glamours. It gives a clue as to how they work, and I'm not sure how much I'll spell it out in-story.
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