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Going Home - Revisited by Swamygliders starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 59]
REWRITE Harry has come back to Hogwarts for his second year and something is...off. Harry has tried as hard as he can to keep everything secret and hidden, but people who are watching him know something is wrong. Warning: Mentions of Abuse

Takes Place: 2nd Year - Snape flavour: Snape Comforts, Snape is Kind, Snape is Loving
Tags: Abuse Recovery
Categories: Parental Snape > Guardian Snape, Healer Snape
Rated: T - Warnings: Abusive Dursleys, Emotional Abuse, Neglect, Sexual Abuse
Chapters: 32 - Completed: No - Updated: 01 Jan 2024 / 18 Mar 2023
Series: None - Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 26: Papers 28 Jun 2023
Reviewer: Vadimmom (Signed)
    Love the cat. Cat glares are definitely formidable.

'Til That Morning by Nemo starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 90]
Summer after fifth year: Why did everything bad happen to Harry Potter? Why did it always have to be Severus who picked up the pieces? And why did the kid in Severus’ neighbourhood had to be such a Hufflepuff?

Interrupted in his well-earned summer holidays of tending to his vegetable garden and just reading a lot of sciene fiction, Severus Snape is sent to track down one runaway Harry Potter.

Takes Place: 6th summer - Snape flavour: Snape Comforts, Snape is Angry, Snape is Kind, Snape is Mean, Snape's a Bully
Tags: Adoption, Runaway
Categories: Parental Snape > Guardian Snape
Rated: T - Warnings: Abusive Dursleys, Alcohol Use, Bullying, Drug use, Emotional Abuse, Neglect, Physical Abuse
Chapters: 26 - Completed: No - Updated: 05 Mar 2024 / 26 Mar 2023
Series: None - Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 18: Schemes in the Garden 13 Feb 2024
Reviewer: Vadimmom (Signed)
    Excited for an update for this story. At least Snape didn’t send him back to Privet Dr.

    Author's Response:

    Thanks! 

    But is it going to be better at Snape's? *evil grin*


Title: Chapter 8: Summer Storm 10 Apr 2023
Reviewer: Vadimmom (Signed)
    Interesting story so far. Poor Harry and Ben. Snape’s summer persona is definitely out of character but I can accept that. Obviously all that reading you’ve done for years is a benefit to your writing. This is an excellent story for first timer.

    Author's Response: Thank you so much for reviewing! Each and everyone makes me happy. Snape'll definitely get more into character when he meets Harry ;)

Title: Chapter 11: On the Road 06 May 2023
Reviewer: Vadimmom (Signed)
    If Dumbledore was bothered by Snape’s treatment of Harry, why didn’t he confront him right away about it? I would think a Slytherin like Severus would recognize Dumbledore’s manipulation here. I’m curious what’s next. Looking forward to more.

    Author's Response: Thank you! Mmh, maybe Dumbledore realised just now how bad the mistreatment is what with Severus just losing Harry's trace. And for Severus recognizing the manipulation: I think he was really upset over being called "pathetic". Just look at how he reacted to Harry calling him a coward. I guess, Slytherins are clever and cunning but also their emotional side sometimes makes them a bit blind ;)

Title: Chapter 13: Unknown Ways - Part 2 11 Jun 2023
Reviewer: Vadimmom (Signed)
    Your story is a pleasure to read and hardly a hardship to follow. I’m concerned about Ben too so you’ve sucked me into the side plot.

    Author's Response: Thank you! That means a lot to me :)

Title: Chapter 21: Stormy Weather 17 Feb 2024
Reviewer: Vadimmom (Signed)
    Snape is infuriating in this chapter and poor Harry accepts this as normal.

    Author's Response:

    I felt so too :'( I wanted to show how screwed up Harry is from his stay with the Dursleys. 


Title: Chapter 23: Rescue Mission 23 Feb 2024
Reviewer: Vadimmom (Signed)
    I liked Ben’s questions for Snape. It should give him something to think about

    Author's Response:

    Thanks! 
    I think so too: Snape should really sit down to have a good little eye-opening thinking-session ;)


Title: Chapter 26: Raincoats, Tolkien and Presbyopia 09 Mar 2024
Reviewer: Vadimmom (Signed)
    I didn’t find it boring at all. I like seeing the interactions between Snape and Ben and between Harry and Ben. Though I enjoy action as much as anyone, without some character development, a story can feel hollow . Poor Harry must feel like he’s in an alternate universe with Ben joking around with the dungeon bat.

    Author's Response:

    I'm happy you liked it! I guess from now on they will be less action (mmh, was there even action to begin with? :D) and more character development as the three will settle into life together. 


Edge of Despair by Swamygliders starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 5]
In the aftermath of the Triwizard Tournament, a guilt-ridden Harry finds himself on the brink of despair at the Astronomy Tower. As he contemplates his life's worth, the unlikeliest of saviors intervenes.

Takes Place: 4th Year - Snape flavour: Snape is Kind
Tags: Abuse Recovery
Categories: Teacher Snape > Professor Snape
Rated: K+ - Warnings: Abusive Dursleys, Suicide Themes
Chapters: 1 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 25 Apr 2023 / 25 Apr 2023
Series: None - Challenges: Your life matters
Title: Chapter 1: Edge of Despair 30 Apr 2023
Reviewer: Vadimmom (Signed)
    An interesting solution to the guardianship problem. It was sweet how they all worked together for Harry’s sake. Well written.

Feature Understanding by MagnificentAndStrange starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 9]
Winter break of Harry’s first year at Hogwarts brings awful memories of his life with the Dursleys and new stresses in the forms of Quidditch rivalry and wizarding biases. Still trying to figure out what Hagrid’s three-headed dog is guarding, Harry’s also struggling to adapt to a world that he didn’t know existed mere months ago. When fighting between the Slytherin and Gryffindor teams gets out of hand, Harry suffers because of it and Snape must help him begin to heal.

Takes Place: 1st Year - Snape flavour: Canon Snape, Snape Comforts
Tags: Injured!Harry
Categories: Fic Fests > Bingo! Fic Fest, Healer Snape, Teacher Snape > Professor Snape
Rated: T - Warnings: Abusive Dursleys, Bullying, Physical Abuse, Self-harm, Violence
Chapters: 1 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 12 May 2023 / 12 May 2023
Series: None - Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 1: Understanding 14 May 2023
Reviewer: Vadimmom (Signed)
    I would encourage more. It was very well done. I love how Snape cared for Harry.

    Author's Response: Thank you! I love Snape looking out for Harry, so more is in the plans!


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