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A World Of Grey Clouds by Livia Ethelind starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 224]
To the world Harry Potter is either a deranged freak or a celebrated hero, but the truth about Harry and the secret the child carries is about to turn the world upside down - not only Harry's but Snape's as well!

Takes Place: 1st summer before Hogwarts, 1st Year, 2nd summer - Snape flavour: Snape is Depressed, Snape is Mean, Snape is Stern
Tags: Girl!Harry, Resorting, Slytherin!Harry, Snape-meets-Dursleys
Categories: Parental Snape > Biological Father Snape, Teacher Snape > Professor Snape
Rated: T - Warnings: Abusive Dursleys, Physical Punishment Spanking, Neglect, Profanity, Violence
Chapters: 35 - Completed: No - Updated: 19 Feb 2018 / 07 Feb 2016
Series: None - Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 33: Resorting To Resorting 02 Jun 2017
Reviewer: nnjjj (Signed)
    So nice to see another chapter! I'm glad that Victoria got sorted into slytherin. Hopefully it will create some opportunity for her to (reluctantly) get closer to her father.
    You had the emotions spot on in this chapter-the pre-teen Victoria and surly, yet trying to be patient Severus. Your characters are just so great, and the development is realistic. Love the whole story.--oh and I really liked that you briefly mentioned Madam Pomfrey. It tied in well with the beginning of the story and the whole situation Victoria found herself in.

Title: Chapter 31: Determination 18 Sep 2016
Reviewer: nnjjj (Signed)
    A lovely chapter! You write the conflicting emotions so well. I really liked the part from Victoria about Snape having had enough when she started sniffing. I look forward to the struggeling road ahead.

Title: Chapter 30: Storms on the horizon 12 Sep 2016
Reviewer: nnjjj (Signed)
    I was surprised to see this update. I must have somehow missed it and didn't catch it until I read your other story. Sorry for not being able to review the previous few chapters. I read them when they were posted but have not been feeling well so this will be a joint review. You do a great job as always and I have enjoyed the updates.
    I was a bit disappointed in Victoria 2 chapters back when she choose to sneak out, go to the headmaster and then lie to Snape about it. I thought she was pretty rude and wouldn't be too undeserving of a smack or 2 to the backside. Then I was so happy when they somewhat reconciled in the next chapter. It was so sweet. This chapter was great too. I am almost hoping that she will get a glimpse at what a real family is and how they treat and respect each other and come back a little apologetic to Snape regarding her previous behavior. Great job!

Title: Chapter 27: The rules of chess 21 Jun 2016
Reviewer: nnjjj (Signed)
    Yes, another chapter of one of my favorite stories! I don't know how you do it but excellent job yet again. I absolutely loved this chapter. The emotions are great and so realistic. You portray Victoria and Snape's internal struggle so well and I enjoy seeing them work toward resolution. Victoria realizes that she does need and want to be wanted and Snape is trying to work on his temper. Great job showing that without changing their personalities.
    Dumbledore still gives me the creeps. He is so manipulative. He's insisting on calling her Harry and the try to get her to sneak around and lie instead of encouraging a good reslationship with her father. To me the whole Hermione visit seemed like a bribe to get on her good side. Can't wait to see what his game is. I hope she will still be in slytherin both for the extra drama and to get closer to Severus.
    I'm curious to see if Victoria will get caught being out? Maybe Flitwick or Minerva?
    Thanks for an excellent chapter. I look forward to the next one.

The Unwanted One by Amy starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 162]
Harry has always wished for someone to care, for a family of his own. On his birthday, he finds out that a certain Potions Master is his father, but Severus has finally settled into life with his other son. Can Harry finally have the family he has longed for, or will he always be the unwanted one?

Takes Place: 6th summer, 6th Year - Snape flavour: Snape is Angry, Snape Comforts, Snape is Cruel, Snape is Kind, Snape is Loving, Snape is Mean, Overly-protective Snape, Snape is Stern
Tags: Alternate Universe, Sibling Addition, Snape-meets-Dursleys
Categories: Parental Snape > Biological Father Snape
Rated: T - Warnings: Abusive Dursleys, Neglect, Violence
Chapters: 22 - Completed: No - Updated: 25 Mar 2020 / 17 Mar 2016
Series: None - Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 18: Remind Me 18 Apr 2017
Reviewer: nnjjj (Signed)
    Nice to see another enjoyable chapter. Good job!

Title: Chapter 15: Settling Back In 26 Sep 2016
Reviewer: nnjjj (Signed)
    Great job! I'm enjoying your story and can't wait for more. Can't help to think Harry's going to hear something he wish he wouldn't or end up being n trouble for eavesdropping.

    Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you're enjoying it!

Title: Chapter 16: Force of Habit 20 Oct 2016
Reviewer: nnjjj (Signed)
    Great chapter! I love that you keep the angst going. Great job at keeping it realistic too with the relationship between Snape and Kieran. Even if he doesn't like the way he (or his mother) acts he's still his son and he has a certain responsibility.

Unfamiliar Familiar by Eihwaz Ehwaz starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 87]
Everyone knows that the wand chooses the wizard but fewer are aware that familiars can choose their wizard as well. How will Severus Snape react when he is chosen by a bird of an unusual breed?

Takes Place: 0 - Pre Hogwarts (before Harry is 11) - Snape flavour: Out of Character Snape
Tags: Alternate Universe, Animagus!Harry
Categories: Parental Snape > Guardian Snape
Rated: T - Warnings: None
Chapters: 10 - Completed: No - Updated: 17 Oct 2016 / 26 Mar 2016
Series: None - Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 10: Return to the Unexpected 20 Oct 2016
Reviewer: nnjjj (Signed)
    Nice to see another update. Great job and I look forward to seeing some more Snape and Harry interaction in the future. I think are a lot of issues that need to be worked through/discussed still and can't wait wait to see how it goes. Keep up the great work!

Where You Belong by That_One_New_Pokemon starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 15]
The twins weren’t kidding when they said there would be a magical test in order to be sorted. They just didn’t specify what it was. Harry, along with the other children of his year, must take a magical test of strength before the teachers would even consider letting them get sorted. The only problem is, Harry doesn’t know magic. The most he can do is spit out sparkles. With the teachers and the rest of the school watching, will Harry manage to pass his test, or will he be expelled before he is even able to step foot in the castle? A short, three-chapter story in response to JAWorley's Magical Test Sorting challenge.

Takes Place: 1st Year - Snape flavour: Canon Snape
Tags: None
Categories: Teacher Snape > Professor Snape
Rated: T - Warnings: Profanity
Chapters: 3 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 22 Oct 2016 / 19 Jun 2016
Series: None - Challenges: Magical Test Sorting
Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 24 Oct 2016
Reviewer: nnjjj (Signed)
    I absolutely loved this. Great job! Your characterisation of Snape is spot on. I wish there were more works with him like that because you nailed it.

Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 24 Oct 2016
Reviewer: nnjjj (Signed)
    What a great story! You have me wishing for more. I like that you leave us hanging instead of telling us which house Harry ended up in.
    With all the competitions the story did feel a little hunger game inspired, but that is not a bad thing. It's actually an interesting twist. I wasn't a fan of that many kids getting seriously during the test, but that's just my personal preference. Excellent job!


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