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To the world Harry Potter is either a deranged freak or a celebrated hero, but the truth about Harry and the secret the child carries is about to turn the world upside down - not only Harry's but Snape's as well!

Takes Place: 1st summer before Hogwarts, 1st Year, 2nd summer - Snape flavour: Snape is Depressed, Snape is Mean, Snape is Stern
Tags: Girl!Harry, Resorting, Slytherin!Harry, Snape-meets-Dursleys
Categories: Parental Snape > Biological Father Snape, Teacher Snape > Professor Snape
Rated: T - Warnings: Abusive Dursleys, Physical Punishment Spanking, Neglect, Profanity, Violence
Chapters: 35 - Completed: No - Updated: 19 Feb 2018 / 07 Feb 2016
Series: None - Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 24: Schadenfreude 08 May 2016
Reviewer: Dark Inu Fan (Signed)
    *weird smile* Yeah, I got it... at least, I think that was it.
    Pfft, Cinnamon. Well... it goes with the plant theme and it's unique! Actually... looking it up. False Cinnamon is called Cassia. That's... actually a really pretty name. And plant/potions/latin themed to boot! Depending on the context, the name can either mean 'Champion' or 'Empty/vain'. Gah... Ok, I'm just really getting into the naming game now. Then again, most every name in the HP series has some two/three/more layers of depth. Except Harry... JK just likes the name. (Even Padfoot. Did you know that's an alternative name for the Grim?)

Title: Chapter 25: A lily by any other name... 20 May 2016
Reviewer: Dark Inu Fan (Signed)
    Roman version of the goddess Nike. That really should have been something to celebrate, especially since it was actually a name of her own for once, and not the name of a fantasy child that never actually happened. But... they're like magnets with the negative sides facing each other. At least Victoria has tried, though her efforts have just been met with more pushing away. I wish that he would stop pushing her away at every turn. That is beyond being 'prickly', down to being emotionally abusive. I just hope he learns before something snaps and hurts her or any possibility of them even being able to be in the same room for any length of time.

Title: Chapter 26: Watching and learning 05 Jun 2016
Reviewer: Dark Inu Fan (Signed)
    I love Flitwick. I have yet to ever see him not take a student under his wing. Maybe he could have some more interaction with Victoria? Someone to talk to that she wouldn't stress over getting in trouble with. And maybe he could help with her little writing issue (I bet he's already thinking up solutions for her). A little socializing without Snape breathing down her neck might be something she needs. Minerva's fine, great and all, but she really needs a friend, a confidant, at this point, not another disciplinarian. Not another person that has expectations, just someone to listen for when she's ready to talk. And I mean actually -listen- when she finally decides to. Someone to work -with- her, not 'what's best' for her. (Yes, in the end, I think what she really needs at this point is a hug.)

Dark secrets and an even darker past threaten to destroy the boy on whom the entire wizarding world has pinned their hopes. Can Severus Snape find it within him to heal and accept the broken child of his nemesis, and in the process, ultimately heal and accept himself? (AU-ish, but follows canon. Severitus - mentor/adoption - WARNING: mentions sexual abuse, but no details)

Takes Place: 6th summer - Snape flavour: Snape is Angry, Snape Comforts, Snape is Desperate, Snape is Kind
Tags: Injured!Harry, Injured!Snape, Snape-meets-Dursleys, Spying on Harry! Snape
Categories: Healer Snape, Reverse Roles > Healer Harry, Parental Snape > Guardian Snape
Rated: T - Warnings: Abusive Dursleys, Alcohol Use, Drug use, Profanity, Rape, Violence
Chapters: 37 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 10 Sep 2016 / 13 Mar 2016
Series: Right in Front of Me Trilogy - Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 36 11 Sep 2016
Reviewer: Dark Inu Fan (Signed)
    What a ride it was. Now, to that fateful school year, right? Sixth year really was one full of changes for Harry and all of Hogwarts, I just wonder now how that's going to change here with Lily and Jilly added into the chaos. And maybe a little student-teacher aid in the DADA classroom to come? After all, Harry's actually had more experience teaching DADA than the average Defense teacher, Severus might need a little help from the 'real' teacher from the previous year.

Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 34 14 Aug 2016
Reviewer: Dark Inu Fan (Signed)
    Horcrux can really screw with the mind, can't they? And now Albus is 'living' on purely borrowed time. If I were any less moral of a person, this would be where I would suggest the Unicorn blood.

Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 31 15 Jul 2016
Reviewer: Dark Inu Fan (Signed)
    Welp, Dumbledore has his irrefutable proof of abuse now, doesn't he? The magic of a parent's love and the lengths they will go to for the safety of their child. It's been known to raise the dead before, why not the half-dead in the hospital. And it truly is indeed magic, one that even muggles can tap into when in need. I just hope nobody's -stupid- enough to try to pin Vernon's death and Dudley's assault on Severus. Because those are not muggles, they're monsters.

    Author's Response: *Slow clap by a single audience member grows to roaring standing ovation by the entire crowd* AMEN SISTER!! I couldn't have said it better myself!!

Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 28 06 May 2016
Reviewer: Dark Inu Fan (Signed)
    Would this be a part that has a parallel with the canon books? Or has Narcissa come with a different request?

    Author's Response: Hmmm... I'm going to leave that up to you. ;) You never can tell with those Malfoys...

Harry has always wished for someone to care, for a family of his own. On his birthday, he finds out that a certain Potions Master is his father, but Severus has finally settled into life with his other son. Can Harry finally have the family he has longed for, or will he always be the unwanted one?

Takes Place: 6th summer, 6th Year - Snape flavour: Snape is Angry, Snape Comforts, Snape is Cruel, Snape is Kind, Snape is Loving, Snape is Mean, Overly-protective Snape, Snape is Stern
Tags: Alternate Universe, Sibling Addition, Snape-meets-Dursleys
Categories: Parental Snape > Biological Father Snape
Rated: T - Warnings: Abusive Dursleys, Neglect, Violence
Chapters: 22 - Completed: No - Updated: 25 Mar 2020 / 17 Mar 2016
Series: None - Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 15: Settling Back In 28 Sep 2016
Reviewer: Dark Inu Fan (Signed)
    I know it's an innocent gesture, borne of goodwill, but I can't help but to flinch and think of Tom's diary instead. I'm just really glad to see that Harry now has the room he deserves. Now, is there an anti-brat ward on the door to keep his half-brother out? Otherwise I see some problems occurring in the future in regards to the whole -respecting each other's space- thing. (...Aand... he's back. Sigh, I had hoped we'd gotten rid of the brat and his mother. Oh, well, I guess we need a foil anyway.)

Title: Chapter 14: Through the Storm 14 Aug 2016
Reviewer: Dark Inu Fan (Signed)
    "Potter, stay behind and close the door. I wish to speak to you about your performance in class today." *waits for door to close* *Hugs Harry and doesn't let go* "You did well today, my son. If you have no plans this coming Friday, I wish to have dinner in my quarters with you." A little OOC, but something I can see them working towards. To the rest of the school, it would be 'detention', but those two would know better. "Now go on, I believe you have Defense next and I will not be writing out an excuse for you."

    This was definitely a waking up chapter. Severus was getting the clue that Harry's home life wasn't all roses, but going into his mind and seeing even a portion of the physical effects, that really woke him up to the reality that his abuse was -a common occurrence- and something he was honestly used to and almost came to expect, in one form or another, from every adult that he came into contact with. (And the few that don't, confuse and scare the shit out of him, but he treats them like gold. (The Weasleys (sans Percy) and Hagrid Primarily.))

    About halfway through the dreams, I had a thought and I started praying that they stopped before Harry got to school-age abuses. I don't think his body could have delt with a second round of Basilisk venom. Even pseudo-venom. Even as painful as it was, I'm glad that Severus was able to pull Harry out when he did. And, with seeing what his past was like 'first-hand', I suggest some positive-reinforcement touch therapy from now on. Because, really, very few people have ever touched him without the intent to harm. (I imagine that is why Hermione tackle-hugs Harry every chance she gets. Because she doesn't do it to Ron, I've noticed.)

    Author's Response: Ya know, I wondered what would happen if the curse progressed that far when I was writing the chapter, but decided to cut it off before the memories of Hogwarts. The curse would have lasted too long and it would just be a drag.

    Hmm I can't really see Snape easily giving out free hugs lol, but yeah maybe they can work towards something along those lines. Especially now that Severus has seen Harry's home life.


Title: Chapter 8: On the Edge 04 Apr 2016
Reviewer: Dark Inu Fan (Signed)
    Oh, that's lovely. At least when he finally succumbed to his injuries, Severus was on hand instead of Harry being alone... or worse, with his 'little brother' of more likely to kick him in the cracked ribs and laugh than get help. More'n likely the brat did something during their little 'wrestling match' anyway. Oh, Severus is going to get a wake-up call when he sees what was under those glamours.

    Author's Response: I couldn't make Harry suffer anymore by himself or in Kieran's company, it would have been too cruel of me. Severus is definitely going to be shocked to say the least. Thanks for reviewing!


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