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Title: Chapter 8: Where Angels Fear to Tread
| 26 Aug 2016
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Reviewer: Kyralian (Signed)
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Oh, oh, Severus lost it and again Harry is the one to suffer for it. I am relieved that the rape warning wasn't about Harry.
Title: Chapter 6: Early to Rise
| 31 Jul 2016
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Reviewer: Kyralian (Signed)
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I was afraid you were never going to continue, I'm glad you did.
When an accident in potions causes imaginable damage to 3 different boys, perceptions start to change. One in particular of a dark and stern man, as truths start to come to light. How does one heal and move on from something like this? Who is left the task of picking up the pieces?
Takes Place: 3rd Year
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Snape flavour: Snape is Angry, Snape Comforts, Snape is Kind, Snape is Loving, Snape is Mean, Snape is Stern
Tags: Alternate Universe, Azkaban Character, Child fic, Deaged!Harry, Deaging, Physical Impairment, Snape-meets-Dursleys
Categories: Healer Snape, Teacher Snape > Professor Snape, Parental Snape > Godfather Snape, Parental Snape > Guardian Snape
Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12
| 12 Dec 2016
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Reviewer: Kyralian (Signed)
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Right, so they let a stolen poisonous snake go in the middle of a muggle town, in winter? That is anything but responsible, not every idea is a good one! It rings very fake that in the holiday crowd nobody remarks on those well-known men suddenly going around with minor relatives.
Author's Response: It's fanfiction. If you're looking for realisticness, look elsewhere. Clearly this story isn't for you.
Title: Chapter 29: Victoria
| 02 Aug 2016
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Reviewer: Kyralian (Signed)
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Yuppi! Finally, we're done with Miss Evans crap
Author's Response: Yeah, distancing is not a nice thing
Title: Chapter 28: Trust is earned as it is given
| 21 Jul 2016
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Reviewer: Kyralian (Signed)
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Snape fleeing the responsibility, I imagine he would have cringed reading this, but it is true! Disappointing, Miss Evans indeed! I impatiently await next chapter!
Title: Chapter 35: The Duel
| 19 Feb 2018
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Reviewer: Kyralian (Signed)
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i'm glad you updated! i love Victoria, and Snape is just clueless! when will he realise that he just told his child that he doesn't want her? idiot!
Thanks to James' sacrifice, Lord Voldemort is defeated. Lily barely survives and is rescued by Severus. Years later Harry struggles to live side by side with his hateful and unforgiving stepfather in a very troubled household. Unbeknownst to both much greater challenges lie ahead.
Takes Place: 0 - Before Harry is born, 0 - Pre Hogwarts (before Harry is 11), 1st summer before Hogwarts, 1st Year
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Snape flavour: Snape is Angry, Snape Comforts, Snape is Controlling, Snape is Cruel, Snape is Depressed, Snape is Mean, Snape is Stern
Tags: Alternate Universe, Amnesia, Child fic
Categories: Teacher Snape > Professor Snape, Parental Snape > Stepfather Snape
Title: Chapter 12: Our Mutual Love
| 29 Apr 2017
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Reviewer: Kyralian (Signed)
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Title: Chapter 7: Great Expectations
| 04 Nov 2016
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Reviewer: Kyralian (Signed)
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How blind can you get? Healing bruises aren't so hard to trace back in time, are they? Funny how he makes up stories about Harry being hexed at Hogwarts, but completely ignores the bruises. I'm very disappointed in Snape. Harry is a defiant boy, thank god the emotional abuse hasn't broken his spirit! So Snape blames baby Harry for injuring Lily, but not himself who became a death eater and blabbed the prophecy to Voldemort? What a bastard! I keep hoping he would change, but if he didn't change in 10 years of raising Harry it's hopeless. You know, I was looking for a bad parent Snape story, but now that I found it I can't wait for a miraculous change of heart!
Author's Response: I know how you feel and it can at times be as difficult to write as I imagine it is to read. I of course have the comfort of knowing why will happen :)
Title: Chapter 8: The Chimes Of Two
| 14 Nov 2016
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Reviewer: Kyralian (Signed)
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Enter Remus, huh? Do you know what I hate about fanfiction in progress? It is infuriating! The abandoned stories are almost easier to bear, as I mourn and accept the unsatisfactory end, but this! I read, starting to enjoy myself, and suddenly the chapter ends and I have to wait again! That's hard! About the chapter, poor Harry - how awful it must be to be a child with such a weight bearing him down. He proved his bravery in going to Snape, a true Gryffindor! Snape, I suppose he was a bit better, but not much! In different circumstances, even the threat of spanking could be perceived as caring, and I expect Snape meant it in this way. Unfortunately, it can't work when Snape is so free with punishments, and often undeserved.
Title: Chapter 9: The Mystery Of A Man
| 24 Nov 2016
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Reviewer: Kyralian (Signed)
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Poor Severus had a bad reaction to Veritaserum? Or did he reveal something... unexpected? Minerva begins to annoy me.
Author's Response: Yeah.. :/ She formed an opinion and ran with it
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