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A midnight escapade does not go as planned when Harry finds himself injured, locked in Snape’s storage room and worst of all, doused in Veritaserum. And this is all before Snape finds him. Entrant in the 2009 Prompt Fest. Prompts: Locked in Snape's Storage Room and Veritaserum
Takes Place: 6th summer
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Snape flavour: None
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Categories: Teacher Snape > Professor Snape, Fic Fests > #9 Prompt Fest 2009
Rated: K+
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Warnings: Profanity
Chapters: 1
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Completed: Yes
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Updated: 22 Nov 2009 / 22 Nov 2009
Series: None
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Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 1: Forced Confessions
| 17 Sep 2020
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Reviewer: ARim (Signed)
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Loved it, loved it. Gangly Harry, stern, truth-seeking and curious, discretly kind and with that fast elegant movement at the end, you have drawn our Snape here. More, please?
During the Summer of Second Year, Molly Weasley express her concerns about Harry returning to his relatives. The school staff has to hear her and a place must be found for Harry.
Takes Place: 3rd summer
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Snape flavour: None
Tags: Adoption
Categories: Parental Snape > Guardian Snape
Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13
| 02 Sep 2019
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Reviewer: ARim (Signed)
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Sev Snape's determination : He was a grown man that did not need a guest room. You keep on describing these two to a T, and I Melt. It is a lovely story, and, Huzzah, it continues over on fanficnet, and evolves into many more chapters. I always cross-check, when a good yarn has me in its grip. Hope springs ever green. Thank you, authoress, for writing so gently and compassionately.
Harry runs into Snape while trying to find the definition of home, and finds himself drawn into Snape's summer Order task by the headmaster, looking for a location outside of London. Along the way, he and Snape learn a few new definitions themselves.
Takes Place: 6th summer
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Snape flavour: None
Tags: Adoption, Deaging, Snape-meets-Dursleys
Categories: Parental Snape > Guardian Snape
Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9 - The Basilisks and Billywigs
| 29 Aug 2018
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Reviewer: ARim (Signed)
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I have re-read this story, often, and you are talented, from root to crown. It is pleasing, gentle and you know how to craft the feeling of relationship. You may laugh at me, a lot, but I have found the river Mersey, the restaurant, Lily's road, St.Mary Way, a park in Stockport, but not the small alley, on which you placed Snape's house,'Spinner's End- so what is the alley's road name?I hope it exists. I would like to use Google earth to walk down it.... Would you give me a clue? *a hand tugging hair* After 14. January 2016, your story gives a quiet balm. He is missed. Please write on from time to time. Best regards.
Author's Response: I didn't use an exact address, but had in mind the park by Bridge Hall Primary and the neighbourhood south of there for Lily, and the neighbourhood directly north with the city/country names as Snapes. Hope that helps. :)
Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19. Summer Surprises
| 17 Jul 2021
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Reviewer: ARim (Signed)
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Hello, What an interesting story. About the text of strategy, which he is reading..Is it a text? Or were you inspired by the manuscript of Al-Mankair, the Book of Five Rings by Miyamoto, or perhaps The Art of War by Sun Zi ? Quote of the last:' The supreme art of war is to subdue the enemy without fighting.' Please give more quotes from your text and the lessons he is learning. I am also a loner and a victim of severe bullying. Harry's quiet fighting really rings a bell in my heart.
Title: Chapter 3: The Cupboard Under the Stairs
| 24 Jun 2021
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Reviewer: ARim (Signed)
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OH! Dear god and goddess, do please update. Severus must have been dieing for a long time of his wounds, since you last wrote. Please! *singing a James Brown song* Please. Do update, or, at least, cure the unlucky man. You know, it has just been ' Midsummer Night ' yesterday, and Will Shakespeare allows us all, and Titania and Bottom, to experience wonderous things on that night, perchance to dream, to hope you will take up your pen again and finish this lovely tale? Pouring a glass of bubbly: 'Cheers' Looking forward to reading more from your Muses.
Title: Chapter 7: Serva Me, Servabo Te
| 20 Oct 2021
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Reviewer: ARim (Signed)
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A well-penned story. Love the stong late-Medieval opening scene. Is that a tip of your writer's plume to our wonderful, lost, lamented Colonel Brandon? '..could be found again, if sought?' I had to stop and read that paragraph out loud. Mr. A. S.P. Rickman. Febr. 21. 1946
When Severus Snape is left in charge of Hogwarts over the Christmas break, he is less than pleased to discover Harry will be one of his charges. Events force him to face that Mr. Potter may not be quite what he has assumed all these years.
Takes Place: 6th summer
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Snape flavour: None
Tags: None
Categories: Master Snape > Apprentice Harry, Parental Snape > Guardian Snape
Rated: K
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Warnings: Abusive Dursleys
Chapters: 28
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Completed: No
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Updated: 30 Sep 2010 / 18 Jul 2010
Series: None
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Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28
| 01 Nov 2020
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Reviewer: ARim (Signed)
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Such a wonderful story, which I often re-read. To Y'All ,this story has 42 chapters in total and can be found completed on f.f.net. Wasn't I relieved at that? There are so many half-finished stories sauntering around here and elsewhere, and I dearly wish you glorious authors among us would commit to finishing a story in pencil before starting the posting. Only a handful do. Sigh. We very, very grateful readers would be spared a lot of heartache and longing and missing locks of hair. Please? As a Christmas wish?
Title: Chapter 2: The Fate of Severus Snape
| 09 Aug 2019
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Reviewer: ARim (Signed)
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... ought to review this wonderful story, so... I adore it, and read, and re-read it. Thank You very much for writing such a good tonic against gloom and life. This chapter two just has me chuckling out loud: Snape is a delight in his gruff softness, and the children are sweeties. His inner musings do me in, always. Have you ever read Celeste's 'Three Gryffindors and a Baby'on ffnet? Ron is a very, very evil reader of nighttime-stories and 'his' puppy has a very short life, much to Neville's horror. The fic is also a gem.- but a WIP. Again , thank you so much, and for completing your stories. ' Tis a consummation Devoutly to be wished.' Best regards and Ta.
When he is taken on a school field trip by Severus Snape, Harry learns some surprising information about himself and his mother, Lily. Response to the Field Trips challenge by HJ Marsh
Takes Place: 1st Year
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Snape flavour: None
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Categories: Parental Snape > Guardian Snape, Teacher Snape > Professor Snape
Rated: K
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Warnings: Abusive Dursleys
Chapters: 1
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Completed: Yes
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Updated: 30 Aug 2010 / 30 Aug 2010
Series: None
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Challenges: Field Trips
Title: Chapter 1: Field Trip
| 12 Feb 2020
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Reviewer: ARim (Signed)
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I love this challenge. and am going to dive into it now. May I recommend on ffnet the very, Very funny story by white mouse called 'The Owl Chronicles'?It's in two chapters from Jan. 25. 2006. "Severus, Minerva, Sybil and Lockhart take the third year students on a Muggle Studies field trip. Of course it is complete anarchy." I have not laughed so much in a long time and made the mistake of reading the reviews afterwards - oh, my diaphragm hurt- that author is brilliant. ... Lockhart flirts, Sybill loses students in a mall. Sn. is surprised in an amusement park and Minerva and the other adults get drunk after the students run them all ragged. In letters to Dumbledore, hence Owls... Please enjoy y'all. Delicious writing.
An accident the summer before 6th year puts Dumbledore's plans for Harry in motion sooner than planned. Will an unexpected truce with Snape better prepare Harry for what is to come? An introspective Snape mentors Harry fic with all the regular players, told from Harry's point of view. Slightly AU after OOTP.
Takes Place: 6th summer
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Snape flavour: None
Tags: Physical Impairment
Categories: Teacher Snape > Trusted Mentor Snape, Teacher Snape > Professor Snape
Rated: T
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Warnings: Neglect
Chapters: 44
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Completed: Yes
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Updated: 06 Apr 2011 / 28 Dec 2010
Series: None
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Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 15: Childhood Friends
| 06 Mar 2020
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Reviewer: ARim (Signed)
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Love the description of Quidditch locker room -aroma - made me chuckle. This is such a well-written, adorable, yes it is - sorry, Sev... unputdownable story. I always re-read them, hoping to find you have penned twice as many, when I emerge for air and daily life. Thank you . They are a joy.
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