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| Mol-dune [Contact]
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| Molly Holkesvik ()
| Member since: 19 Nov 2016
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| I am an English teacher in a rural town. I teach writing and reading. I found fanfiction through a student least year, and I can't get enough of it; however, I have never attempted to write my own. The power of imagination to bring a reader into a new world with fresh circumstances memorizes me. Oh, and I love to edit! [Report This]
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Title: Chapter 9: Of Mice and Men
| 26 Nov 2016
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Reviewer: Mol-dune (Signed)
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Snape's response to Dumbledore was some of the best writing and most realistic conversation in literature. Bravo!!!!!!!!
Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8: The Truth
| 26 Nov 2016
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Reviewer: Mol-dune (Signed)
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I am totally unto this state ru. Please keep getting going!!!!!😀👍
Title: Chapter 3: Chapter Three
| 08 Dec 2016
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Reviewer: Mol-dune (Signed)
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I love the accurate word choices and punctuation marks that make this sentence perfect!!!!! "Harry relaxed. So Snape hadn't told Dumbledore everything? Well, that was a decent thing to do. Weird for Snape, but yeah, decent."
Title: Chapter 2: Come here, Harry.
| 22 Nov 2016
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Reviewer: Mol-dune (Signed)
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I am really sad for them both!!!! : (
Title: Chapter 8: I promise.
| 23 Nov 2016
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Reviewer: Mol-dune (Signed)
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I really like the story. I have never read a fanfiction like it. Please keep it going😃
Harry would always remember it as the summer he got to go to camp and forever escape the Dursleys. Severus would remember it as the summer he allowed himself to stop being blind. In response to the Camp challenge by JAWorley.
Takes Place: 3rd summer
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Snape flavour: Snape is Angry, Canon Snape, Snape Comforts, Snape is Kind, Snape is Loving, Snape is Stern
Tags: Adoption, Incognito!Snape, Injured!Harry
Categories: Healer Snape, Teacher Snape > Trusted Mentor Snape, Parental Snape > Guardian Snape, Teacher Snape > Unofficially teaching Snape
Title: Chapter 11: The Reality We All Face
| 24 Nov 2016
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Reviewer: Mol-dune (Signed)
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I loved the variety in your story. I have never read another story like this. Thank you!
Thanks to James' sacrifice, Lord Voldemort is defeated. Lily barely survives and is rescued by Severus. Years later Harry struggles to live side by side with his hateful and unforgiving stepfather in a very troubled household. Unbeknownst to both much greater challenges lie ahead.
Takes Place: 0 - Before Harry is born, 0 - Pre Hogwarts (before Harry is 11), 1st summer before Hogwarts, 1st Year
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Snape flavour: Snape is Angry, Snape Comforts, Snape is Controlling, Snape is Cruel, Snape is Depressed, Snape is Mean, Snape is Stern
Tags: Alternate Universe, Amnesia, Child fic
Categories: Teacher Snape > Professor Snape, Parental Snape > Stepfather Snape
Title: Chapter 8: The Chimes Of Two
| 22 Nov 2016
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Reviewer: Mol-dune (Signed)
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I don't know about this last part, but I think Harry is going to break about the abuse and Snape and Harry will see each other in very different light: they will learn to appreciate each other; and in the end, Snape will adopt Harry. Their family will push forward.
Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19
| 06 Aug 2017
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Reviewer: Mol-dune (Signed)
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Wow, I can't wait to read the next chapter of your story!!! You have my attention. Great attention to detail.
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