Ravenclaw!
10 year old Harry is kidnapped along with his aunt and cousin after Vernon finds money that belonged to powerful people. Snape eventually steps in to save the day. Severus later adopts Harry though a ritual to make Harry his biological son. Harry just wants to be normal but that isn't possible with escaped convict Sirius Black on the loose! Harry's first year at Hogwarts but with a slight twist to it.
Takes Place: 0 - Pre Hogwarts (before Harry is 11)
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Snape flavour: None
Tags: Adoption, Kidnapped, Snape-meets-Dursleys
Categories: Parental Snape > Guardian Snape
Membership status: Member
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Reviews by Arualcopia
Rated: T
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Warnings: Abusive Dursleys
Chapters: 20 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 08 Sep 2007 / 02 May 2007
Series: Adventures of Alec Snape - Challenges: None
Chapters: 20 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 08 Sep 2007 / 02 May 2007
Series: Adventures of Alec Snape - Challenges: None
| Title: Chapter 1: Money, Money, Money | 02 May 2007 |
| Reviewer: Arualcopia (Signed) |
- This is a good start. I had a funny thought, Vernon writing the "men" back saying he'd send 2/3s of the money back for Petunia and Dudley... but that they could keep the freak. He almost seems stupid/selfish enought to do it... don't you think?
Author's Response: I certainly agree! Vernon would be the type to do that. Thanks so much for the review!
| Title: Chapter 2: Unlocking Doors | 02 May 2007 |
| Reviewer: Arualcopia (Signed) |
- Poor Harry... the Dursleys do enjoy hurting him don't they? T_T
I had an idea... for the begining of your chapter, you could add in some more emotion (for Harry). Like he panics or something and that's why the door unlocks.
Author's Response: In my opinion, the Dursley's seem to enjoy causing him pain whether it be mental or physical just because they are horrible people. If I find time to re-write this, I will make a note to add more emotion for Harry. Thanks for the review!
| Title: Chapter 3: Fruit Loops | 06 May 2007 |
| Reviewer: Arualcopia (Signed) |
- It's so funny how Harry keeps getting out. And he's so calm about it too. If i was one of the kidnappers I'd be pretty freaked out by Harry lol. Anyway, I can't wait to get to the chapter labeled "rescue" or something like that... so yeah..
Author's Response:
Harry has a knack for getting out and it certainly freaked the muggles out. THanks for the review!
| Title: Chapter 4: Wizards, Witches and Toads | 06 May 2007 |
| Reviewer: Arualcopia (Signed) |
- I thought "rescued" meant from the kidnappers... I hope nothing too horrible happens to Harry at his relatives. I mean I know they're crappy and all... And Harry will need to be rescued... but, but... I don't want him hurt anymore T_T.
Oh I liked this line: “Fine.” Severus growled out. Because ha ha ha, Snape, you will be a daddy and you will like it!
Author's Response:
Snape will be a dad and as much as he denies it, he likes being a father! Thanks for another review! :)
| Title: Chapter 5: Rescued! | 07 May 2007 |
| Reviewer: Arualcopia (Signed) |
- Aw T_T they hurt him... so sad T_T. At least he's with Snape now. Oh and Dumbledore's comment, "are you related to Sybil" too funny lol.
Author's Response:
He is indeed with Snape and they'll be happy together. Thanks so much for continuously reviewing!
| Title: Chapter 6: Summer Shopping | 07 May 2007 |
| Reviewer: Arualcopia (Signed) |
- Aw cute, Snape almost smiled. ^_^
Author's Response: Almost is the key word, but he will smile later on....
| Title: Chapter 7: Summer Ends | 07 May 2007 |
| Reviewer: Arualcopia (Signed) |
- Oh wow, you glossed over a lot of stuff didn't you? I'm excited for the adoption though... I look forward to an update.
Author's Response: Yeah... I kinda sorta cheated on some stuff... Shame on me but I wanted to get right to the story without drawing out the summer and all. Next chapter should be up tomorrow!
| Title: Chapter 8: Billowing Cloaks | 15 May 2007 |
| Reviewer: Arualcopia (Signed) |
- Harry (turned Alec) is so cute with his billowing robes. It's funny how he's mimicing his dad.
Author's Response: I had fun adding that part in! Thanks for the review!
| Title: Chapter 9: Escaped Convicts | 15 May 2007 |
| Reviewer: Arualcopia (Signed) |
- I wonder how Sirius will feel when (if) he finds out that Alec is Harry. I wonder though, since Harry is starting out a year earlier... does Percy still have his "rat"? Because then Pettigrew is there... and yeah interesting prospects. I look forward to an update.
Author's Response: He will find out... eventually. The rat will show up eventually as well. Thanks for another review!
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Snape and Harry are locked in the Room of Requirement by Dumbledore. Harry's magic works, and Snape's doesn't. Will they kill each other? In response to the 72-Hour Challenge.
Takes Place: 6th summer - Snape flavour: None
Tags: None
Categories: Snape Equal Status to Harry > Comrades Snape and Harry, Snape Equal Status to Harry > Foes Snape and Harry
Takes Place: 6th summer - Snape flavour: None
Tags: None
Categories: Snape Equal Status to Harry > Comrades Snape and Harry, Snape Equal Status to Harry > Foes Snape and Harry
Rated: T
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Warnings: Abusive Dursleys, Alcohol Use, Violence
Chapters: 28 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 13 May 2011 / 30 Jun 2007
Series: None - Challenges: 72 Hour Challenge
Chapters: 28 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 13 May 2011 / 30 Jun 2007
Series: None - Challenges: 72 Hour Challenge
| Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10 | 05 Sep 2007 |
| Reviewer: Arualcopia (Signed) |
- Oh wow, that's so horribly sad T_T. Poor Harry AND poor Snape. Gah, I can't wait for an update. Your story is really very interesting and entertaining. I hope things work out okay in the end for Harry and Snape. And yeah, I must read an update!