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Title: Chapter 6: Dulcify
| 10 Jan 2018
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Reviewer: Draco-senpai (Signed)
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I hope that Severus will come to realize that trust is just as important as answers, although I can understand his reasoning. He doesn’t want attachment. Trust means getting closer. Great chapter! I can’t wait for the next.
Author's Response: Thanks for your review! I will try to update as soon as I can.
Title: Chapter 6: Dulcify
| 10 Jan 2018
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Reviewer: Draco-senpai (Signed)
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I hope that Severus will come to realize that trust is just as important as answers, although I can understand his reasoning. He doesn’t want attachment. Trust means getting closer. Great chapter! I can’t wait for the next.
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
| 21 Oct 2017
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Reviewer: Draco-senpai (Signed)
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I, for one, am intrigued as to where you would take this and how Harry's and Severus' relationship has developed. I would love to see an update on fine work!(~.^)
Title: Chapter 1: You'll Never Walk Alone
| 26 Oct 2017
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Reviewer: Draco-senpai (Signed)
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Very sweet. (~.^)
Author's Response: Thanks so much, means a lot to me.
Title: Chapter 2: Time at the Hotel
| 29 Oct 2017
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Reviewer: Draco-senpai (Signed)
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Severus seems really laid back in this work, it's kinda funny. He doesn't bother correcting people when Harry is mistaken for his son. He has no shame in using all the hotel towels for transfiguration. It makes me smile to see Severus acting so, well, young. (He IS 27, technically...) Thanks for the fluffy chapter. I'm patiently waiting for the next!
Author's Response: I figured Severus’s reaction would be a bit more relaxed than anything else. First of all, he certainly doesn’t want to alert the authorities! Haha. And he is young as well. I’m glad you liked this chapter! I promise to update when I can.
Title: Chapter 13: Sick
| 14 Jan 2019
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Reviewer: Draco-senpai (Signed)
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First off, I LOVE this story! And I am so happy to see it updated! It's so sweet and silly and Snape is kidding himself to think he can untangle himself from Harry. I mean, he was past the point of no return a long time ago. I love the Silverstein poems in this chapter! It brought me back to my grade school days. (Honestly /Sick/ was everyone's favorite and that last one you referenced is so, so powerful.) I loved the scene where Severus is being silly with Harry about being sick. It might have ended poorly, but honestly, it was so cute. And we all caught that Freudian slip, Sev, so don't even think denying the fact that you called Harrikins "honey" because you love the child. Wonderful chapter! And I can't wait to see where this adventure takes us next! (~.^)
Author's Response: Thank you for such a wonderful review! Please enjoy the next chapter. Sorry for such a long wait.
Title: Chapter 1: Change of Plans
| 26 Oct 2017
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Reviewer: Draco-senpai (Signed)
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Ooo, can't wait for the next one! Update soon please! (~.^)
Author's Response: Thank you! I shall try.
Title: Chapter 5: Rules and Regulations
| 16 Nov 2017
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Reviewer: Draco-senpai (Signed)
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I've really enjoyed the story so far. It is quite prevalent that young Severus and little Harry have matters to work through, but it is reassuring to know they will at least have each other. Great job on the dream by the way! You had me convinced for a moment. I think I was actually screaming at Dumbledore at one point. (At least it was only a dream!) One last thing: I had read some of the responses you had left on the comments, and I want you to know that your own story touched me, too. For what it's worth, I'm glad that you found HOME, as well. Also, I admire the way you structured and conducted you responses. Your politeness and respect worked through each was inspiring. Thank you. (~.^)
Author's Response: Thank you so much for your kind and encouraging words! I am so glad you like the story and happy that my dream sequence really did catch some people off guard - that was the goal, as welll as to show some of Severus’s inner fears. And thank you, I never thought my own story would reach out to people, but I’m glad it did for you. I promise to update again soon!
Title: Chapter 6: Bond of the Guardian Angel
| 10 Jan 2018
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Reviewer: Draco-senpai (Signed)
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Cute, cute, cute!! I love supportive Minerva. I really liked the spell as well with all the examples (even if some where sad). It was well executed. (There are some who really miss the mark, if you know what I mean.) Of course, some of it has to be with originally, which you had down! I love this work and wait patiently for the next!
Author's Response: Thank you for your thoughtful review. I enjoyed thinking up of scenarios and had to keep myself from telling the entire story of all the different examples with this spell - well the three examples. I do have the full backgrounds to those examples, but a writer knows to only reveal what’s important, even if we wish to tell all. Haha! Thanks again for your review and I promise to update soon!
Title: Chapter 7: Twenty Questions
| 26 Jan 2018
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Reviewer: Draco-senpai (Signed)
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I absolutely love how persistent Harry is about things with Severus (like the book). Severus is right Harry is comfortable; insecure, yes, but comfortable. One day, Severus will realize that Harry has “burrowed” so far in his heart, he won’t be able to let him go! Thank you so much for this, and I eagerly await your next up date. (~.^)
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