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HermioneGirl [Contact] Better be Ravenclaw!
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Just logged into this account again after 3 years... wow. I apologise for the quality of my stories. If I write more fanfic on here, it will likely be very AU, as I am considerably less obsessed with Harry Potter than I was when I created this account!

As for IRL information... You can call me HermioneGirl, or HG ;). I'm a university student studying psychology. I love reading historical novels (think Jane Austen, Philipa Gregory, etc), choreographing dances far beyond my skill level, and watching movies with my housemates (currently going through Vampire Diaries).

I don't know when I'll be on here again, so I'll let you know that this update was written on the 15th of June, 2023, while I was supposed to be writing an essay.
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Soulmate by 2cute4u starstarstarstar [Reviews - 10]
Harry Potter, the Master of Death, the Boy Who Lived, has been betrayed. Yes, he's been blinded by the 'Light' to see what was the truth. Dumbledore had wanted to kill Harry from the start and his 'friends' were being paid to be his 'friends'. He knew better now. After being shoved in Azkaban for 6 months, his trial was short and Majority voted for his death. Dumbledore had managed to succeed in delaying a letter after his death with lies within.

Death has granted him a second chance. However, if Death grants this second chance, Harrys' second half of his soul must be granted a second chance as well.

In other words, Harry time travels and Tom Riddle (Voldemort) regains his memories as well. How will this effect the new future?

Takes Place: 1st Year - Snape flavour: Overly-protective Snape
Tags: Time Travel
Categories: Parental Snape > Guardian Snape, Parental Snape > Stepfather Snape
Rated: K+ - Warnings: Abusive Dursleys
Chapters: 5 - Completed: No - Updated: 12 May 2021 / 30 Mar 2021
Series: None - Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4: Meeting 12 Apr 2021
Reviewer: HermioneGirl (Signed)
    I like your writing style and enjoy reading your descriptions. Your story sounds interesting too. However, I find it confusing - I'm not sure why or how Harry is Merlin's heir and what the deal is with he and Voldemort being alive again.
    I have a couple suggestions which might help:
    1. Plan out the plotline and chapters of your story and identify any gaps.
    2. Ask someone to proof-read your chapters before you post them. Even if they aren't professionals, they should be able to identify where things do and don't make sense.
    I hope this helped, and I wish you all the best!
    ~HermioneGirl~


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