a respond to Spring Fic Fest! "What makes the little bastard think I don't care about him?"
That was the question that Severus Snape asked himself everyday since last week. The question that revolved around his son's latest temper tantrum since last week. And the same damn question that didn't leave him alone no matter what he did.
He even woke up with the thought swirling in his mind. What had he done to make Harry think he was being neglected?
Takes Place: 0 - Pre Hogwarts (before Harry is 11), 1st summer before Hogwarts, 1st Year, 2nd summer, 2nd Year, 3rd summer, 3rd Year, 4th summer
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Snape flavour: Snape is Angry, Canon Snape, Snape Comforts, Snape is Kind, Snape is Loving, Snape is Mean, Out of Character Snape, Overly-protective Snape, Snape is Stern
Tags: Adoption
Categories: Healer Snape, Fic Fests > #22 Spring fest 2017
Membership status: Member
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Reviews by Lym
Rated: T
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Warnings: Abusive Dursleys, Physical Punishment Spanking, Neglect, Out of Character, Profanity, Romance/Het, Violence
Chapters: 20 - Completed: No - Updated: 05 Sep 2018 / 14 Jun 2017
Series: None - Challenges: None
Chapters: 20 - Completed: No - Updated: 05 Sep 2018 / 14 Jun 2017
Series: None - Challenges: None
| Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 | 18 Jul 2017 |
| Reviewer: Lym (Signed) |
- Omggggggg I love this story!! Have never been a fan of stories where Harry is instantly fine as soon as Severus begins to show him some affection and love. Harry being plagued with psychological issues such as anxiety and depression and even bedwetting it seems, is so much more believable and realistic.
I have a theory about Janet, so here goes..... I have a feeling that maybe Janet is Lily in disguise? Or something? From what I have read, both woman have the same birthmark, which Harry also has, so this is the only explanation I can come up with. Perhaps Lily has repented and is trying to build a relationship with Harry again?
I don't know, but I do know that you are a spectacular writer and I honestly can't wait for an update. Any idea when you might update again? I am sooo excited to see what happens next!
Author's Response: THANK YOU! your review literally had me falling off my bed at 6 am in the morning! i'm not a fan of those stories either, it seems a little too unreal, and i always thought about what could happen next,your theory is really close but not there yet, you made the right link between the birthmarks though so stay tuned and again THANK YOU for your brilliant compliment Lym, it warmed my heart, don't worry i will update very soon. ;)