the Phoenix
Ravenclaw!
When an Occlumency lesson goes wrong, Snape learns more about Harry’s past than he ever wanted to—and it changes everything. But change doesn’t come easily, especially for two who have spent five years loathing each other’s very existence. Can Snape and Harry come to a mutual understanding of sorts to defeat their greatest enemy—themselves? Spring of 5th year, A/U. Completely written and posted in chapter installments.
Takes Place: 5th Year
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Snape flavour: Snape is Angry, Canon Snape, Snape Comforts, Snape is Kind, Snape is Stern
Tags: Injured!Harry, Snape-meets-Dursleys
Categories: Healer Snape, Teacher Snape > Trusted Mentor Snape
Membership status: Member
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Reviews by Lucinda Hindle
Rated: 16+
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Warnings: Abusive Dursleys, Physical Punishment Spanking, Neglect, Rape, Romance/Het, Torture, Violence
Chapters: 40 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 31 Oct 2017 / 26 May 2017
Series: None - Challenges: None
Chapters: 40 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 31 Oct 2017 / 26 May 2017
Series: None - Challenges: None
| Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26 | 04 Sep 2017 |
| Reviewer: Lucinda Hindle (Signed) |
- Poor Harry, damn those Dursley's to hell. I wonder what might have happened when he was nine. At first I had imagined Covey as Mrs. Weasley but then you told that she was attractive so I guess she is a little like Tonks? Without the metamorphmagus abilities, of course.
| Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30 | 23 Sep 2017 |
| Reviewer: Lucinda Hindle (Signed) |
- I don't know what, or why but as the new chapters are posted they start to get better, so I don't think that there is a need to say that that this one is my favourite so far. This one sent strange tingling sensations through my heart and stomach.
Even I have enough tact to know what Harry really wanted. Snape is jus pretty messed up, though not more than Vernon or Petunia........
Any way, it was a good chapter, I, for a fact know, if it was Covey instead of Severus, she would have known that Harry wanted to be proved wrong that Snape didn't care, ah well, as I said, Snape is pretty messed up.
By the way, may I ask, how many chapters does this story contain?
Author's Response: Probably around 40 chapters. It is all written, but I wrote it as one big file. So I still need to break it into chapters. I have started a sequel but I have other stories started too that I want to post once this one is completely up.
| Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28 | 17 Sep 2017 |
| Reviewer: Lucinda Hindle (Signed) |
- Is this Harry's second vision? Nice chapter, bu it wasn't good of you to leave the chapter in a cliffhanger, *pout*
| Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29 | 18 Sep 2017 |
| Reviewer: Lucinda Hindle (Signed) |
- That last line sent the chills up my spine.* shudder*
| Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32 | 04 Oct 2017 |
| Reviewer: Lucinda Hindle (Signed) |
- Lol, it had to happen, didn't it? Snape is quite obtuse when in a rage, though I like this version better, actually I love it. Lets see how Snape feels if he really does find out himself that Harry had had an accident. (Keyword being himself.)
Thanks for taking me out of the depression I had found myself in after reading 13 Reasons Why. Quite depressing, but when I saw the notification of an update, I smiled, so, waiting for the new chapter! Love it so far!
| Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33 | 09 Oct 2017 |
| Reviewer: Lucinda Hindle (Signed) |
- Poor Harry, one of the first thing that came into my mind after reading halfway through it was, everything goes wrong with Harry.
Though, at least in the end they made up.
As far as I know, with a few teeth knocked out you can still speak perfectly. My front two milk teeth had fallen together when I was around 8 or 9 and I could speak perfectly clearly.
Whatever, I like this chapter, at least it doesn't end in a cliffhanger but to be honest, I like the story Lily's Lost Boys better.
| Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34 | 13 Oct 2017 |
| Reviewer: Lucinda Hindle (Signed) |
- That, ended very vaguely. Very much indeed. And even though I was fascinated by your theories, I couldn't make head nor tails of it. Care to explain?
Not much of a chapter, but a chapter indeed. Lets see where this leads. No Severus' perspective, I am disappointed.
I am actually waiting for the chapter of Lily's Lost Boys.
That comment about your theories, I wasn't sarcastic, I truly found that fascinating. I had always found the human mind fascinating. Dreams and consciousness and sleep, it is just a big mystery, isn't it? I just want to hear more. The way JKR had described Occlumency, it was very engaging, I still can't completely grasp the concepts of Legilimency and Occlumency. Lets see your take on it!
| Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35 | 18 Oct 2017 |
| Reviewer: Lucinda Hindle (Signed) |
- Oh, thats nice, but I still think that Vernon should be subjected to the Dementors Kiss and Dudley to a life sentence in Azkaban, I guess that classmate would be Ron? No, who is it? Any idea? Well at least, even Petunia has to go to Azkaban, that made my day!
| Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 36 | 21 Oct 2017 |
| Reviewer: Lucinda Hindle (Signed) |
- This was quite a long chapter. Isn't Harry a little small to be drinking Wine? I won't know...........
Well, lets see where this story is heading. At least Harry is now completely healed. (read: Physically.)
a respond to Spring Fic Fest! "What makes the little bastard think I don't care about him?"
That was the question that Severus Snape asked himself everyday since last week. The question that revolved around his son's latest temper tantrum since last week. And the same damn question that didn't leave him alone no matter what he did.
He even woke up with the thought swirling in his mind. What had he done to make Harry think he was being neglected?
Takes Place: 0 - Pre Hogwarts (before Harry is 11), 1st summer before Hogwarts, 1st Year, 2nd summer, 2nd Year, 3rd summer, 3rd Year, 4th summer - Snape flavour: Snape is Angry, Canon Snape, Snape Comforts, Snape is Kind, Snape is Loving, Snape is Mean, Out of Character Snape, Overly-protective Snape, Snape is Stern
Tags: Adoption
Categories: Healer Snape, Fic Fests > #22 Spring fest 2017
That was the question that Severus Snape asked himself everyday since last week. The question that revolved around his son's latest temper tantrum since last week. And the same damn question that didn't leave him alone no matter what he did.
He even woke up with the thought swirling in his mind. What had he done to make Harry think he was being neglected?
Takes Place: 0 - Pre Hogwarts (before Harry is 11), 1st summer before Hogwarts, 1st Year, 2nd summer, 2nd Year, 3rd summer, 3rd Year, 4th summer - Snape flavour: Snape is Angry, Canon Snape, Snape Comforts, Snape is Kind, Snape is Loving, Snape is Mean, Out of Character Snape, Overly-protective Snape, Snape is Stern
Tags: Adoption
Categories: Healer Snape, Fic Fests > #22 Spring fest 2017
Rated: T
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Warnings: Abusive Dursleys, Physical Punishment Spanking, Neglect, Out of Character, Profanity, Romance/Het, Violence
Chapters: 20 - Completed: No - Updated: 05 Sep 2018 / 14 Jun 2017
Series: None - Challenges: None
Chapters: 20 - Completed: No - Updated: 05 Sep 2018 / 14 Jun 2017
Series: None - Challenges: None
| Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 | 17 Oct 2017 |
| Reviewer: Lucinda Hindle (Signed) |
- Hm, that slap was the best, or worst part of the evening. Really? Severus, you need to control yourself, but then, Harry, that wasn't a very good thing to say, was it? I don't know what is wrong with Janet. Is there, or is Harry just threatened? The baby was the last straw, I admit, but then again, Severus did say that he had been neglecting Harry lately.