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Call me: Corbin Slate (female) Member since: 08 Jan 2005
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I'm almost 25 and love to write. I also get a kick out of reading. My favorite books are HP (POA has been my favorite so far), Bless the Beasts and Children, Jedi Apprentice Series, Lord of the Rings trilogy (including the Hobbit), The Vampire Chronicles (not the new stuff!), Where the Red Fern Grows, and Goldfinger (it's a James Bond book). I'm sure there are others, but I can't think of them right now. Movies: Casino Royale, Star Wars, Lord of the Rings, Indiana Jones, Back to the Future, Scent of a Woman, Finding Neverland, Tombstone, The Princess Bride, The Seventh Voyage of Sinbad, Ladyhawke... and lots of others. TV: The Dead Zone, Wolf's Rain, Witch Hunter Robin, Batman the Animated Series, Last Exile, Due South, MacGyver, Star Trek (any except for Deep Space Nine), Twilight Zone (the classic series), Rawhide (it's an old western with Clint Eastwood), Roswell, Fruits Basket, Zatch Bell and others I'm sure. [Report This]
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Past Featured Story Muggleville by Jan_AQ starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 571]
With a strange potion, new location and the odd Muggle Studies Professor along for the ride, Harry's in for an interesting summer, but why is Snape here? Dumbledore had better pray he gets all three back in one piece! Humor, Angst, No Mary Sues, No Romance, no real plot.

Takes Place: 6th summer - Snape flavour: Snape is Kind, Snape is Stern
Tags: Child fic, Deaged!Harry, Deaging, Injured!Harry
Categories: Parental Snape > Guardian Snape
Rated: K+ - Warnings: Abusive Dursleys
Chapters: 32 - Completed: No - Updated: 17 Jul 2016 / 15 Jan 2005
Series: None - Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 10: The Mall Trip 31 May 2005
Reviewer: Corbin (Signed)
    Gah, this chapter reminded me of how I hate shopping for clothes! I hate it so much (shopping, not the fic)! Especially pants! lol, man I can't believe they didn't let him wear the shoes out of the store. (I know I said something about that on the other site, but eh)I used to do that as a kid! I don't do that anymore, but I remember thinking it was great to wear the new shoes home and have the old ones in the box. hehe good job!

    Author's Response: I used to do that too! I loved it- the new shoes felt so great and you felt like you culd fly and jump without effort (at least if you were skinny or something haha). Yeah i don't do that anymore either because it seems so childish. XD

Title: Chapter 11: Trampolines are Forbidden 03 Jun 2005
Reviewer: Corbin (Signed)
    You stupid child, we are far, far away from any Medi-wizards. If you injure yourself, you shall have to deal with Muggle practices. Do you know what they do in Muggle medicine? They cut people up and sew their wounds closed with string. And do you know what they do with broken bones? Nothing! They leave them alone because they can't-do-anything!" He lightly shook the boy to get his point across. "If you break your neck, it will stay broken!" That line right there is just ooohhh crazy good! There is so much about this chapter that I really liked that I'll probably forget to mention a lot of it but eh. All the dialouge between Snape and Hoppity was great. Snape is such a git! That part where Snape was all concerned about Harry jumping on the tramp was awesome. I know I mentioned the wording earlier, but the things that were unsaid were great too. I got that tight feeling in my stomach, lol. You know how you said this chapter went on forever? That's not really a bad thing. I found it to be rather fun to read. Thanks so much for sharing! --Corbin

    Author's Response: Thanks so much for all your reviews! And the rewording of that part was a treat for me too. I got the tingly stomach! hehe. :D Thanks again!

Title: Chapter 12: First Day of School 06 Jun 2005
Reviewer: Corbin (Signed)
    My favorite part in this chapter was the breakfast scene. Poor Harry! All that trouble to try and help and it got him nowhere! It was very realistic how frantic he was to try and fix the situation once he thought that he had messed things up, and in turn ended up just making things worse. That seems to happen to us all unfortunately. Great Job! :)

    Author's Response: Poor Harry. :\ *pats his messy head* I am so terrible to him, aren't I? Thanks for the revew!

Title: Chapter 13: In Which Bad Choices Are Made 06 Jun 2005
Reviewer: Corbin (Signed)
    What a good chapter! The scene where Harry was snooping around in Snape's room for his wand was excellent! Poor kid. I bet Snape is even more intimidating when Harry is in his younger body. I'd have a hard time not bursting into tears everytime the man barked at me, but then Harry was raised by the Dursleys so I guess he's used to rougher treatment than most kids would be. Anyway, this was a fun chapter. :)

    Author's Response: Yeah, I was a rotten kid so I probably wouldn't have burst into tears but I sure would have kicked him! And probably burst into tears at the same time.. I was a weird kid. Yeah, Harry's showing his upbringing clearly. I wonder if his guardians will start to notice?

Title: Chapter 15: Who Hurt Him? 06 Jun 2005
Reviewer: Corbin (Signed)
    I liked this chapter a lot! I liked ho Snape reacted when he found out that Harry had been injured. It seemed just right to me. Not too mushy and not too mean. I mean you know... Snape is mean, but at least he is taking things seriously. Kinda a bummer for poor Harry though. Not only does he have bruises, but he didn't even get to play soccer like he wanted. Great job! :)

    Author's Response: Yeah poor Harry. It seems like it ends up with a "poor Harry" every chapter.

    I'm so glad that this chapter worked out for you! Whoooo!!

Title: Chapter 16: Dinosaur Chess 12 Jul 2005
Reviewer: Corbin (Signed)
    Awww... Snape took the dino! What's he going to do with it? What a git, hehe. Great stuff!! :)

    Author's Response: Dun dun dun... I have no idea why Snape wanted the dino. Why do you think he wanted it?

The Little Things by Perse starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 21]
Harry, Snape, and snow--a perilous combination! (response to the Snowball challenge)

Takes Place: 6th summer - Snape flavour: None
Tags: None
Categories: Parental Snape > Guardian Snape
Rated: K - Warnings: None
Chapters: 1 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 26 Jan 2005 / 26 Jan 2005
Series: None - Challenges: Snowball Challenge
Title: Chapter 1: The Little Things 24 Jul 2007
Reviewer: Corbin (Signed)
    Aww this was very cute! I enjoyed reading it. Thanks very much for sharing it.

Past Featured Story Drifting by relative1983 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 68]
Remus and Severus are being sent out to find Harry, after Hedwig shows up bloodied and nervous. When they find Harry they are in for a surprise. Will Harry ever recover?

Takes Place: None - Snape flavour: None
Tags: Slytherin!Harry, SuperPower! Harry
Categories: Parental Snape > Guardian Snape
Rated: K - Warnings: None
Chapters: 19 - Completed: No - Updated: 01 Nov 2005 / 01 Feb 2005
Series: None - Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 1: It 23 May 2005
Reviewer: Corbin (Signed)
    Hmm... a very interesting start! It will be fun to see where this story ends up, hehe :)

Unprotected by AccioSeverus starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 48]
Harry Potter has made it through five years of Hogwarts School of Witchcraft and Wizardry and summer break has only just begun. Unexpected and traumatic events leave Harry in more danger than ever before. An unlikely ally in Severus Snape may be his only answer as the situation deteriorates from bad to worse and Harry’s two best friends become pawns in a deadly game of cat and mouse.

Takes Place: 6th summer - Snape flavour: None
Tags: None
Categories: Teacher Snape > Trusted Mentor Snape
Rated: T - Warnings: None
Chapters: 12 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 30 Jun 2005 / 02 Oct 2004
Series: None - Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 1: The Accident 01 Jun 2005
Reviewer: Corbin (Signed)
    Oh my. I think you have something great going here! I loved the dialouge between Vernon and the others before the car wreck, and the way that the paramedic was talking Harry through everything was very nice. Great Job!

Title: Chapter 2: When it rains it pours 01 Jun 2005
Reviewer: Corbin (Signed)
    Oooh, what an exciting chapter! I thought it was great how Harry was so stubborn with Snape. I'm glad that Harry thought about Nick's welfare too. It would have been a shame to leave him to die after what he had done for Harry. great work!


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