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Kirinin [Contact] Better be Gryffindor!
Call me: (undisclosed) Member since: 10 Jul 2006
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Hi!  My name is Kirinin, and I've been writing fanfiction for over ten years, now.  My initial fandom was Ranma 1/2.  After having a lot of fun with this fandom for around five years, I decided to branch out.

My first completed Harry fic is Secret of Slytherin, which was initially on fanfiction-dot-net.  I have to say that writing and posting this story has been one of the most fun and interesting literary experiences I've had.  For one thing, the tale started off as a bedtime story, meant to be shared with someone verbally, so it had to have a certain cadence.  Then, when I initially posted it, the feedback was thoughtful and thorough - to the point that people brought up and argued issues I'd never even thought of.  Some or the reviews themselves are works of art, and I've met a lot of great people through their analyses of the story. 

It's wonderful to be able to share SoS with a new fanfiction community here, and give the story some more life.  :)

Secret of Slytherin now has a sequel called Geas of Gryffindor.  While Severus and Harry are very important characters in that tale, they are no longer its sole focus, which is why I have chosen not to post it here.  Please check it out on fanfiction.net, or on Archive of Our Own, where I am posting Secret of Slytherin and Geas of Gryffindor under the same penname.

I tend to like many if not all of the canon characters in the HP Universe, and really dislike it when an author is willing to demonize one set of characters to make the others look better.  My favorite characters to mess with are the Trio, Draco Malfoy, Severus Snape and Remus Lupin, but I'm willing to read anyone, so long as they're written thoughtfully.

As a final note, I tend to recommend stories I've enjoyed in my Author's Notes; I also have a C2 for Harry Potter fics on my fanfiction-dot-net account.  That is all.

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Dudley and Harry flee Vernon - to Severus. A different Tom Riddle, Petunia is good. Lucius and Draco are helpful. Albus is a bit misguided. The twins are only a year older than Harry, so I can make them non-Gryffindor.

Takes Place: 1st summer before Hogwarts, 1st Year - Snape flavour: None
Tags: Alternate Universe, Slytherin!Harry
Categories: Parental Snape > Guardian Snape
Rated: T - Warnings: Abusive Dursleys, Profanity
Chapters: 137 - Completed: No - Updated: 28 Sep 2014 / 28 Jun 2009
Series: None - Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 31 Aug 2009
Reviewer: Kirinin (Signed)
    These kids are acting awfully grown up, from the kid who defends Harry on the playground and on to Dudley and Harry themselves - Harry calmly calling what happens to him 'abuse' and Dudley deciding that his own father will have to leave seem overly mature of them...

    -K

After viewing Snape's memories in the pensieve, Harry knocks into a silver instrument on the desk and is sent back into Snape's past. Meanwhile, Snape is struggling to survive in the future. Beta-ed by Fang's Fawn.

Takes Place: 8 - Pre Epilogue (adult Harry) - Snape flavour: None
Tags: Alternate Universe, Child fic, Time Travel
Categories: Reverse Roles > Big Brother Harry
Rated: K+ - Warnings: Neglect
Chapters: 10 - Completed: No - Updated: 14 Jun 2013 / 02 Aug 2009
Series: None - Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 2: Chapter Two 01 Sep 2009
Reviewer: Kirinin (Signed)
    This is certainly an interesting beginning...

    Author's Response: Thanks! Hopefully it will stay so. :)

Title: Chapter 3: Chapter Three 01 Sep 2009
Reviewer: Kirinin (Signed)
    I'd say it's hard to believe that Eileen Snape would let Severus out of the house with a stranger, but she seems so grasping and she has correctly divined that Severus has already charmed Harry. Perhaps it's her intellect and not her carelessness that makes her behave so.

    I like this one so far. Timetravel stories always weave very tangled webs. I think this could end up being very interesting!

    -K

    Author's Response: Heh - that thought didn't actually occur to me! Although I think that Eileen (in this story at least) doesn't really care about Severus so much as for herself. She sees him more as a means to an end, so, if someone whom she thinks works at the ministry and can get her power or prestiege, wants to take him out that's fine with her. Her initial reaction was to trust Harry's word, rather than Severus' after all...

Harry wakes up in Grimmauld Place one day with no memory of anything that happened in his 5th year.

Takes Place: 6th summer - Snape flavour: None
Tags: None
Categories: Parental Snape > Guardian Snape, Teacher Snape > Trusted Mentor Snape
Rated: 16+ - Warnings: Alcohol Use, Profanity, Violence
Chapters: 3 - Completed: No - Updated: 25 Aug 2009 / 22 Aug 2009
Series: None - Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 01 Sep 2009
Reviewer: Kirinin (Signed)
    Frankly, amnesia is one of those cliches that I can't help but adore, and you're handling it well so far. Just because amnesia is a cliche doesn't mean it can't be entertaining! Tropes are tropes for a reason. ;)

    -K

    Author's Response:

    Thanks! I never thought I'd do an amnesia story, but the plot just came to me and I went along with it.

     -Welsh


Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 01 Sep 2009
Reviewer: Kirinin (Signed)
    The grammar took a turn for the worse here, especially w/possessives...

    ...it really matters to me, my brain gives a hiccup every time I stumble over one, which takes me out of the story.

    -K

    Author's Response:

    Well, I was never too good with grammar and I dont have a beta to look my stuff over. I'm more of an independent writer, but I'll defininley try and work with the possessives if you say they're that bothersome.

     -Welsh


Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 01 Sep 2009
Reviewer: Kirinin (Signed)
    I liked this chapter... but again with the possessives, and I do believe that Lupin's parting shot is a bit too insensitive for him.

    I liked the way that Lupin needed time to gather himself (for whatever reason) and disappeared into the pantry for a few minutes to calm himself down.

    -K

    Author's Response:

    Thanks for the review!

    -Welsh


It is extremely unfortunate for Harry Potter that once the bond of an apprentice is made, it cannot be undone… that is until the Master relinquishes control. It is unfortunate for Mr. H. Potter, graduate of Hogwarts school of witchcraft and wizardry, that a mistake has been made, and he has become apprenticed to Master of Potions, Severus Snape. Response to "Apprentice Mistake Challenge" by ObsidianEmbrace

Takes Place: 8 - Post Hogwarts (young adult Harry) - Snape flavour: Snape is Angry, Canon Snape, Snape is Kind, Snape is Mean, Snape is Stern
Tags: Deaged!Harry, Deaging, Hospitalization, Injured!Harry
Categories: Master Snape > Apprentice Harry
Rated: T - Warnings: Abusive Dursleys, Neglect, Romance/Het, Violence
Chapters: 8 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 22 Aug 2010 / 16 Sep 2009
Series: JAWorley's Challenges - Challenges: Apprentice Mistake, Boulevard of Broken Dreams
Title: Chapter 1: A Mistake 21 Oct 2009
Reviewer: Kirinin (Signed)
    “Now before you take this parchment, you understand that once you are apprenticed you are under the full authority of your Master?” Harry nodded, realizing that she had said ‘he’ meaning he had definitely not been placed with Tonks.

    The receptionist never referred to 'he' or 'him'....

    The premise is certainly a rich one. Looking forward to reading more! :)

    -K

Title: Chapter 2: Dirty Work 21 Oct 2009
Reviewer: Kirinin (Signed)
    I really like it so far! But... Diagon Alley is two words. Say it like "diagonelly" and you'll end up at Knockturn...

Title: Chapter 3: The Unseen 21 Oct 2009
Reviewer: Kirinin (Signed)
    I like the turn this took. Since Snape doesn't even know where Harry lives, will he have to take him in?

    I liked the way you wrote from childish Harry's perspective. It was child-like but not *too* young.

    -K

Title: Chapter 4: Shopkeeper 21 Oct 2009
Reviewer: Kirinin (Signed)
    Cool! I'm enjoying this so far. Hope you continue! :)

    -K


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