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Severus Snape was discovered as a spy mere days before the start of the school year. Thankfully, Albus had been working on a vague contingency plan for this possibility. It had been inspired by the question, “What would it take for Severus Snape to see that he was wrong about Harry Potter?”

The answer? Force Severus to go undercover as Alfonse “Eli” Hopkirk, a sixth year Gryffindor.

Takes Place: 6th Year - Snape flavour: Canon Snape, Snape is Secretive
Tags: Alternate Universe, Deaged!Snape, Disguised!Snape, Gryffindor!Snape, Incognito!Snape, Injured!Harry
Categories: Snape Equal Status to Harry > Comrades Snape and Harry
Rated: T - Warnings: Abusive Dursleys, Neglect, Romance/Het
Chapters: 24 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 02 Jan 2020 / 26 Sep 2019
Series: Forgiveness and Redemption - Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22 26 Dec 2019
Reviewer: emrice (Signed)
    That chapter ending tho. Hit me like a ton of bricks, what's going to happen next ahhh!

    Author's Response: you're definitely not alone in that sentiment!!! keep your eye out over the next couple days for the next chapter and thank you for reviewing!!!!

Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23 03 Jan 2020
Reviewer: emrice (Signed)
    The pace picked up even more, I didnt know that was even possible. Great chapter!

    Author's Response: this was an intense chapter! started fast and ended faster, i think!

Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24 03 Jan 2020
Reviewer: emrice (Signed)
    Wow, can't believe the story is over. I really appreciate how regular your updates were, because that doesn't happen too often for WIPs I follow. Bu even waiting for those small gaps were torture, because I really kept on wanting to know what happened!

    I'm sad I didn't to see more detail about the battle, like how did Remus and Moody die, but I suppose that's how battles are, fast, confusing and messy.

    I liked the scenes involving Sirius the most, and its quite sad that Dumbledore had to die. And boy was I glad you announced there is going to be a sequel, I was screaming before I read the authors note, it simply couldn't end like that. Eagerly awaiting that as well.

    thank you for writing it, I had a fun time following this story, I feel honoured to be part of its journey.

    Author's Response: yeah I know that irregular update schedule struggle from the view of a reader, so I did my best to avoid doing it as an author! it's good to hear that someone appreciated it! and yeah I will admit that part of the chaos of the battle is just because that's how battles are, but it's also partially because I am. not a fan. of writing action like that. it takes a lot of work for me, and I'm rarely all that happy with the outcome, so I tend to take a shortcut because, well, I am writing for fun. I'm really glad you liked the scenes with Sirius! he was so much fun to write because I kept imagining his pov the entire time. a part of me wants to write what happened at king's cross from sirius's pov, but i think i have too many other things to write at the moment, unfortunately. and I knew people would be antsy about the ending, so i had to reassure you! thank you so much for reviewing consistently! i really appreciate it <3

Sirius gets to babysit a small Harry for the first time, Snape shows up with unexpected news and the cat turns blue.

Takes Place: 0 - Pre Hogwarts (before Harry is 11) - Snape flavour: Snape is Angry, Snape is Depressed, Snape is Desperate, Out of Character Snape, Snape is Secretive, Snape is Stern
Tags: Baby fic
Categories: Healer Snape, Misc > No category on the site fits
Rated: T - Warnings: None
Chapters: 1 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 26 Sep 2019 / 26 Sep 2019
Series: None - Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 1: Blue 04 Dec 2019
Reviewer: emrice (Signed)
    I really enjoyed this story! I was not expecting this to be the bad news Snape was going to deliver, and woah it worked so well. Sirius behaved perfectly, that is exactly what to do when your archenemy gives you bad news. I'm so up for a continuation as well, but nevertheless, I'm glad you released this one-shot into the void :D

    Author's Response: Hi! I'm so glad that you enjoyed this story! I might continue this story at a later time when my schedule frees up a little. I have some very interesting ideas regarding this story. Thank you for reading! :)

Once upon a time a new headmaster dragged a young man in his charge back from the depths of darkness. Now, years later, another boy has turned up to school in poor shape and the Headmaster thinks it’s time for Severus Snape to pay forward what was once done for him, even if said Potions Master goes kicking and screaming all the way. Written for round two of the 2019 Tri-W tournament (even though it’s submitted late). If you like this story don't forget to go vote for it in Site News.

Takes Place: 0 - Before Harry is born, 5th Year - Snape flavour: Snape is Angry, Canon Snape, Snape Comforts, Snape is Depressed, Snape is Desperate, Snape is Kind, Snape is Stern
Tags: Hospitalization, Injured!Harry, Injured!Snape
Categories: Healer Snape, Teacher Snape > Trusted Mentor Snape, Teacher Snape > Professor Snape, Fic Fests > Tri-Writing Tournament 2019 > Round Two
Rated: 16+ - Warnings: Abusive Dursleys, Alcohol Use, Bullying, Neglect, Physical Punishment Non-Spanking, Profanity, Violence
Chapters: 3 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 14 Nov 2019 / 14 Nov 2019
Series: None - Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 3: Two Stories Are One 18 Nov 2019
Reviewer: emrice (Signed)
    This is a such a unique take on what Snape's relationship with James during their Hogwarts years could have been like, the way you managed to fit it in is nothing short of awesome. The portrayal of Voldemort's rise is also great, though it does change canon a little bit, but I'm all for it!

“It’s like playing a game,” Harry said. “A judging game. You sit and listen and at the end of the day you’ll decide whether Severus Snape deserves to die or not.” His father had spent his whole life trying to protect Harry from the outside world, from himself, at the expense of his own life. Now it was Harry's turn to at least try.


*Fic Submission for the first annual Tri-Writing Tournament. (Round Three)

Takes Place: 0 - Pre Hogwarts (before Harry is 11), 1st summer before Hogwarts, 1st Year, 2nd summer, 2nd Year, 3rd summer, 3rd Year, 4th summer, 4th Year, 5th summer, 5th Year - Snape flavour: Snape is Angry, Canon Snape, Snape Comforts, Snape is Depressed, Snape is Desperate, Snape is Kind, Snape is Loving, Out of Character Snape, Overly-protective Snape, Snape is Stern
Tags: Azkaban!Snape, Baby fic, Child fic, Incognito!Harry, Incognito!Snape, Injured!Snape, Physical Impairment, SuperPower! Harry
Categories: Healer Snape, Parental Snape > Guardian Snape, Fic Fests > Tri-Writing Tournament 2019 > Round Three
Rated: T - Warnings: Alcohol Use, Bullying, Character Death, Neglect, Out of Character, Profanity, Violence
Chapters: 10 - Completed: No - Updated: 23 Jul 2020 / 29 Nov 2019
Series: None - Challenges: Christmas
Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2; Feather Party 11 Dec 2019
Reviewer: emrice (Signed)
    I'm so invested in this story, you have me on the edge of my seat for updates. The concept of Harry being at odds with Shacklebot intrigued me at first, like how could that possibly happen, and reading more has got me so many questions that I can't wait to be answered. Looking forward for more insight into Harry and Severus's domestic life and what happened. Love!

    Author's Response: I'm very glad you like this story emrice! I really love writing stories that put characters at odds with each other depending on the situation. It has very tangible results, as is to be expected. A new chapter will be up in a few hours! With some answers AND a new insight into Sev and Harry's domestic life. Happy reading!

Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3; Tinsel Mess 19 Dec 2019
Reviewer: emrice (Signed)
    So heartwarming to get more insight into how Harry and Severus lived! Interested to see how all this ties in with the outcome we now see/ the plot of the story.

    Author's Response: I agree! It is heartwarming and also devastating to write as well. New chapter will be up shortly!

Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5; Ollie Ollie Oxen Free 19 Jan 2020
Reviewer: emrice (Signed)
    “Do you know what they say, about paper cranes Harry?” his father had asked, seemingly a lifetime ago.

    Can I just say your transitions to the flashbacks are beautiful. They invoke images of movie scenes where the colour shifts to indicate a different timeframe perfectly.

    Cool idea, the two way mirror. Love the chapter, the plot gets intriguing by the minute.

    Author's Response: This review was an absolute delight for me, because when a reader fully understands the 'color' of a story, the sets, the whole mood surrounding it and can differentiate the scenes, then that means the story is turning out the way the writer intended them to be. Thank you for seeing the way this story was intended to be narrated. New chapter us up now!

Terror and destruction seemed inevitable after Voldemort finally revealed himself to the Wizarding World, but at Hogwarts, Harry lives a disturbingly unchanged life. He exists in parallel to the people around him, and as time passes the line between friend and foe stretches into a complex gradient, difficult to decipher. Seeking desperately to become the hero the Order needs, it becomes more and more clear to him how dangerous that prospect is.

But, in a life fraught with crisis and tragedy, what's just a little more?

Takes Place: 6th Year - Snape flavour: Snape's a Bully, Snape is Kind, Snape is Secretive, Snape is Stern
Tags: Adoption
Categories: Teacher Snape > Professor Snape, Parental Snape > Guardian Snape
Rated: 16+ - Warnings: Abusive Dursleys, Alcohol Use, Bullying, Character Death, Neglect, Profanity, Romance/Het, Romance/Slash, Suicide Themes, Torture, Violence
Chapters: 18 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 02 Dec 2020 / 14 Dec 2019
Series: Makes the Wind - Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 1: Harry 16 Dec 2019
Reviewer: emrice (Signed)
    I have no idea what you guys have planned but this is making me shake, I'm SO INTRIGUED. This seems like its going to be a phenomenal fic. So many questions I want to find out everything, but more than that see the whole journey. Can't wait to see where this story goes eek!

    Author's Response: Luckily for you, this is 13 chapters in, the admins are releasing a chapter a week until they've caught up to us. Chapter 14 is being written as we speak! So hopefully you enjoy the progression!

Title: Chapter 2: Cleo 21 Dec 2019
Reviewer: emrice (Signed)
    Beyond stoked to see this update!

    I'm quite taken with Cleo so far. Did not imagine from the first chapter that Snape actually did NOT have a special interest in Cleo (outwardly at least). I feel very sorry for her situation, the DADA professor is really a piece of work. 500 points?! That's insane. It will be interesting to see how Cleo's relationship with Snape will develop.
    Looks like Harry overheard Draco's conversation with Cleo, wonder what he thinks about it. Can't wait for more, I'm hungry, this is so good. I was ecstatic when you wrote that you already had 14 chapters written up. Thank so much for your hardwork!

    Author's Response: We are so happy you are!! Thank you so much for your kind words and review! We hope you continue to like it too!! :D


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