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Title: Snape's Trap 28 May 2007 12:12 am
Reviewer: Kim (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Awesome story! I'm so glad I found it here. It looked to be abandoned elsewhere. Does this site give updates for new chapters? I really hope so. I really adore your Harry, Hoppity and Snape!

    Author's Response: Thank you! The site does give updates if you are a registered member and you favorite a story. The story is not abandoned anywhere, it is just ahead here.
Title: Snape's Trap 27 May 2007 8:19 am
Reviewer: Tracy (Signed) [Report This]
    I love Harry's POV on things. It is just adorable! He really thought he was being SO badly done to by Snape too! Of course we know that Snape is actually being about as nice as Snape is capable of being and obviously Harry doesn't much appreciate that fact! LOL!
    Another wonderful chapter hon!
    Tracy

    Author's Response: Thank you Tracy! :) I always love your comments.
Title: Snape's Trap 26 May 2007 6:55 am
Reviewer: mmcgonagall (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Great story! I'm so excited to be reading the updates! Please update soon!

    Author's Response: Thank you! Sorry for taking so long to update! I hope that you can enjoy the new chapter!
Title: Snape's Trap 22 May 2007 12:57 am
Reviewer: Alexis8907 (Signed) [Report This]
    I'm glad to say I finally finished reading everything but I'm also sad becuase there aren't anymore chapters to read! I really like this story so far. Harry is so cute with the childlike things he does eventhough he's supposed to be 16. Just out of curiousity, but will Snape or Hoppity ever realize they missed his birthday? I'm thinking that would make a great chapter and I can just see Snape scowling if a few kids came over. I love this story and I really hope it wont be too long before the next chapter is up!

    Author's Response: Awww, sorry! I will try to update more. It's really been too long between updates. Snape and Hoppity will realize that they missed his birthday when you get back to Hogwarts. They will have to throw him a party then, of course!
Title: Snape's Trap 21 May 2007 10:22 am
Reviewer: animealam (Signed) [Report This]
    I'm glad you finally updated! :)

    This was a great chapter. I think that despite still being snarky you're gearing Snape into a parental figure. Are you planning to make him a bit more caring?

    Author's Response:

    Thank you! Sorry for taking so long to update! I hope that you can enjoy the new chapter!

    Yes, Snape will be more of a parental figure for Harry, and he will become more caring. It will take time, however. Thanks for your review! 

Title: Snape's Trap 20 May 2007 7:08 am
Reviewer: Jen77 (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Will this involve any corporal punishment? Snape did say he would tan his hide if he meddled again. I like this story, snape is turning into a good Daddy. I think he should have a parents'night and be introduced to his teachers. .."Oh, so this is Harry's daddy! He is such a well-behaved boy you must be so proud." I can see snape ready to sick up at that one.

    Author's Response: No, no corporal punishment. Snape likes to make threats. There will definitely be a parents' night! Thanks for your reviews!
Title: Snape's Trap 19 May 2007 8:54 pm
Reviewer: AchillesMonkey (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Wow. I'd given up on this story. I'm so glad I decided to check this website today or I probably wouldn't have found this new chapter. Thank you so much for the update. I hope the next one comes sooner.

    Author's Response: If you log in and favorite this story, you can get an e-mail alert next time it is updated if you set that preference in your personal preferences. :) Thank you for your review!
Title: Snape's Trap 19 May 2007 12:13 pm
Reviewer: curlybean (Signed) [Report This]
    Yah!!! Another chapter. I was just about to turn off my computer and go to bed when I saw that you had updated. You've made my day.

    I love your Harry. He is so cute, and just the right mix of little-boy-Harry and teenage-Harry. He is definitely willful and stubborn at times, ALMOST a match for Snape. And I love that we can see a wee bit of softening with Snape. I predict that by the end of your story, Snape will love Harry as much as we do.

    I don't know why, but I love to see 'stern Snape' trying to handle a disobedient Harry. He truly has no idea what he's doing, yet he always seems to do an excellent job. Very sweet.

    Anyway, thanks for the update. Hopefully it won't be too long before the next.

    Author's Response: I'm so glad that I made your day, even if it was so long ago. Thank you for all of your wonderful comments! Sorry for taking so long to update! I hope that you can enjoy the new chapter!
Title: Snape's Trap 19 May 2007 5:05 am
Reviewer: LindseySnape (Signed) [Report This]
    I was so suprised and excited that you finally had a chance to update. I absolutely love this story, and this chapter was great, I'm glad that Harry and Severus are slowly starting to work through Harry's abuse problems, and their personal relationship. Sev giving Harry a timeout, walking him all the way to his room was priceless. Keep up the great work and please update soon. LES

    Author's Response: Thank you Lindsey! I was looking forward to reviews like yours when i updated. ;)
Title: Snape's Trap 19 May 2007 1:49 am
Reviewer: Polaris (Signed) [Report This]
    It was very exciting to see this had been updated! I like that you started the questions up again, though I would like to see Snape's reaction after the answer Harry gave him.

    The Booby Trap thing is very Snape, it made me laugh. Poor Harry. Thanks for the great chapter!

    Author's Response: Yeah? I'll see if I can go back and add Snape's reactions in. I thought that he was rather blank, hiding his emotions and reactions. Thank you for your review!

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