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Title: Forgotten in a Cupboard 18 Nov 2007 11:55 am
Reviewer: MorwenIsilwen (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Poor Harry....of course I'm still reading this!

    Uh oh...Severus isn't going to be happy about a tantrum. Now I'm worried...

    Author's Response: Oh goody! Thanks for still reading! I hope that you enjoy the new chapter!
Title: Forgotten in a Cupboard 18 Nov 2007 8:16 am
Reviewer: Arualcopia (Signed) [Report This]
    Yay! an update! This made me soooo happy. It was really cute and poor wittle Harry getting forgotten. I like how he's getting better at the occlumency, and that Snape is giving him semi-compliments. Oh, and it's great how you balance Harry's littleness with his oldness too (if that makes sense). The chapter seemed really short though and I want more T_T... Of course, no matter how long your chapters are I always want more. So yeah... updatey time!

    Author's Response: Thank you so much for all of your comments! :) I always look forward to hearing from you. Sorry for taking so long to update!It was and is really too long. Hopefully as the story progresses, I will be more compelled to write. I hope that you enjoy the new chapter!
Title: Forgotten in a Cupboard 18 Nov 2007 6:46 am
Reviewer: pdantzler (Signed) [Report This]
    Hooray, you updated! I liked this chapter a lot. You've caught a child's POV very well to where the smallest thing (a friend having to leave) becomes the the biggest problem ever.

    I can't wait to read the next chapter - Harry and Snape have been getting along far too well. I'm looking forward to more angst and argument.

    Well Done

    Author's Response: Thank you! I'm afriad that I didn't write in too much angst in the newest chapter, but I'm sure that the chapter afterwards will make up for it. :) I hope that you enjoy it!
Title: Forgotten in a Cupboard 18 Nov 2007 6:05 am
Reviewer: mamaduck (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I'm so glad you updated! This is such an interesting and entertaining story.

    I love the way you have written Snape, Harry and Hoppity. Very credible. Their relationship is steadily developing and the interaction between Snape and Hoppity is hilarious!

    I'm really looking forward to the next chapter! Mamaduck

    Author's Response: Thank you mamaduck! I'm so glad that you like the story. :) I hope that you will enjoy the newest chapter, if you are still reading. Sorry about taking so long to update!
Title: Forgotten in a Cupboard 18 Nov 2007 5:17 am
Reviewer: chmcm (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Jan,

    I was thrilled to see the update and I was not disappointed when I read the chapter. I am glad that Snape is starting to have some empathy for Harry and maybe even starting to feel affectionate. I hope Harry realizes it sooner rather than later. I re-read the chapter posted on ff.net, as well. It is a great story.

    Author's Response: Thank you so much chmcm! :)
Title: Forgotten in a Cupboard 18 Nov 2007 3:57 am
Reviewer: Kim (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I'm so glad you wrote another chapter. This is a wonderful story. I loved the chapter. Poor Harry and Snape are both coming to terms with a less than happy childhood. You're doing it very well.

    Author's Response: Thank you!
Title: Forgotten in a Cupboard 18 Nov 2007 1:59 am
Reviewer: Kaitlyn Alysa Snape (Signed) [Report This]
    I was so pleased when i spotted the update announcement in my emails. i've been sick for the last few days and this new chapeter has made my day...please don't make us all wait for ages for the next one!!

    I love how snape is starting to soften up around harry..but not so much as to make him out of character...i'd love to see Harry do some more 6yr old stuff and get into trouble...but that might just be me!!

    Author's Response: Sure, your wish is my command! More six year old stuff coming up! Sorry for taking so long to update! Thank you for reviewing.
Title: Forgotten in a Cupboard 18 Nov 2007 1:51 am
Reviewer: Jade_Sullivan (Signed) [Report This]
    Thank you so much for the update! I loved this chapter :) I'm quite in awe of how well you keep Snape in character... Keep up the great writing; I can't wait for the next update!

    Author's Response: Thank you Jade! :) Sorry for taking so long to update! I hope that you can enjoy the newest chapter.
Title: Forgotten in a Cupboard 17 Nov 2007 11:06 pm
Reviewer: Alexis8907 (Signed) [Report This]
    I'm soo happy for the update!! Excellent chapter too! Michael is a bit bossy though but at least he and Harry can play together. It was nice to see the (somewhat) nicer side of Snape. He actually stopped the lessons once Harry got distraught. I really really hope you can find time to update again sometime soon! Please! :)

    Author's Response: Thank you for your review, Alexis! Sorry for taking so long to update!
Title: Forgotten in a Cupboard 17 Nov 2007 10:50 pm
Reviewer: LindseySnape (Signed) [Report This]
    OMG thank you so much for the update. I was so suprised and excited when I saw you updated. This was an awesome chapter, just when you think poor Harry is getting somewhere with Severus he gets all snarky again. Really looking forward to the next chapter, keep up the awesome work, and PLEASE update again soon. LES

    Author's Response: Sorry for taking so long to update! I hope that you can forgive me and still enjoy the next chapter, if you are still reading. Thank you for your review!

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