^_^ I love the ending! It's great that you pulled out all of Harry's favorite toys and whatnot. (I forgot the gooey lizards, I want one). It's cute how Harry played in his little cave... all quiet. Shows that he's still afraid of losing his things (seeing as Snape has taken his toys in the past), but he's still brave enough to play and have fun. It was a really cute ending to the chapter. And the whole chapter was great! I'm glad that you updated, I can't wait to read the next chapter (yes I and others will always want more). Keep writing and don't let the internet bugs get you down.
Author's Response: Aw, yay thank you for the review! I'll try not to let the internet bugs get me down. XD Love your review! Thanks again for the help!
Those people sure are being nice to little Harry. :) Just a quick point out- you said flight 117 earlier and 177 later. Just a small mix up I though I'd point out. Great story so far!
Author's Response: Thanks, I'll fix that! Okay, fixed! Thanks for reading and reviewing!
I loved it when he said, "let me assure you in advance that I am quite allergic." The Krispy Kreme password is cool too! It make me want to go get some right now but I think I'll read on instead. Great start so far! :)
Author's Response: LOL, thank you Alexis!
| Title: Snape's Trap
| 18 May 2007 7:16 pm
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| Reviewer: Phoenix (Anonymous)
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Harry was definately feeling better, with his attitude towards Snape. I think Snape makes a really good guardian, stern but fair and look forward to the next chapter.
Author's Response: Tehe, I guess Harry did have an attitude in this chapter. What a rugrat! :) Thanks for your review!
| Title: Snape's Trap
| 18 May 2007 4:06 pm
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| Reviewer: chmcm (Anonymous)
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Thank you for the update! It is great to see Snape and Harry's relationship continuing to develop.
Author's Response: Thank you for the review, chmcm! :) I appreciate it!
Wow, a new chapter - thank you very much! Please update soon(er), I can't wait for the next :-)
Author's Response: You're welcome Teddy! Haha, I'll try!
| Title: Stealing Daisies
| 15 Apr 2007 3:52 am
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| Reviewer: Tracy (Signed)
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Not only did Snape watch over Harry all night, but he took care of him all the next day too! Bet he never knew he had it in him! LOL! They are turning into quite the little family unit, albiet an odd one.
Looking forward to more hon!
Tracy
Author's Response: Thank you for all your reviews! Yup, hopefully we wil have a lot more fun with them! Stick with it, hopefully i'll be able to write next week some.
| Title: Velveteen Rabbit (Sick Harry)
| 15 Apr 2007 2:54 am
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| Reviewer: Tracy (Signed)
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Ahhh, Snape is being really wonderful. Too bad Harry is too sick to appreciate that.
Tracy
Author's Response: Yup. When he's older, he'll able to too. Shhhh...
| Title: Secret Accident
| 15 Apr 2007 2:38 am
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| Reviewer: Tracy (Signed)
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Oh, I love how Snape handled this whole accident business with Harry. Wonderful, simply wonderful! Looks like our potions master is thawing out! He even patted Harry on top of the head!
Loved it!
Tracy
Author's Response: Tehehe. Thank you! *pulls out the thawers for Snape* It'll get better!
OK, the clothes pin on Snapes nose, now THAT was priceless! Harry and Hobbity weren't the only ones laughing! That is even better than Neville's imagining him wearing his grandmother's clothes as the bogurt (I think that is what it was) came out of the wardrobe.
Brilliant hon,
Tracy
Author's Response: Hahah!! Thanks! Yup, quite a sight. ;)
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