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Reviews For Muggleville
"....people would think me of favouritism". I like this story... there are some typos, tho. Do you have a prereader? Having Dumbledore as a relation DOES explain everything. I like Hoppity so far. -K Author's Response: Favouritism is not spelled wrong. I use British spelling. No, I do not use a prereader. Please point out the typos so that I can correct them, however kindly do not point out British/American spelling differences unless I use the American one as I will ignore any British spelling uses pointed out as "mistakes". :)
constringent... do you mean a "contingent" of Death Eaters, or is this just a word I don't know?.... Interesting premise! I like it so far. Author's Response: Yes, I probably meant contingent. Glad you like it so far.
You did a very believable job with the interaction in this chapter. Snape is efficient and even a little kind without going all ooey-gooey. It's rough being sick when you're six! Author's Response: Thank you! it sure is, poor Harry!
As I said, I love the story and I'm looking forward to the next step. Author's Response: Well you're right about something happening, but I don't think it'll happen as soon as you think. Some other things have to happen first, remember the purporse of this tsory is to add in as many Snape and Harry situations as possible. Just sit tight. :) thanks for the review.
An update! You are awesome! I loved this chapter! Snape was so fatherly to Harry in this chapter, and yet he stayed in character too. I do like how you are gradually softening Snape up to Harry. Harry's whining was so cute too, but it didn't work with Snape, hee hee. The flowers for Hoppity was sweet too, I'm surprised that Snape gave them to her, but that was nice touch. I laughed at Harry antics to try to get out of a lesson with Snape, too funny! Just loved this whole chapter-fantastic!!! Update when you can!!! Author's Response: Thank you! thank you! Snape was trying to get Harry to get him some more flowers, that's partly why he was so nice with them. Thanks for the review! :D
Author's Response: Thank you! Glad you liked it. :)
Yeah for a chapter. Snape seems to be warming up to Harry. He even called him Harry a couple of times.
Author's Response: Yup, he sure did! Thanks for the review!
Author's Response: thanks! :D
This chapter is so cute. Harry is slipping deeper into his little self while Snape is becoming more of a "daddy" figure. It's really a subtle change, hidden away in your story. So it doesn't seem ooc or anything. Your Snape is still Snape... trying to get Harry to gather daisies, lol. Oh an Hoppity is sweet, taking care of Harry. But she doesn't gush over him either. I think that's a really strong part of your story. All your characters are adjusting to fill their rolls, but you can still true selves. Am I making any sense? It's late... So, I hope you're feeling all super inspired to write now. And that you start to pop out lots and lots of chapters! Your kidfic is really one of my favorite stories. I can't wait to read more. Thanks for the great update. Author's Response: Thank you so much for your review! :D I really enjoyed it.. I'm so happy that you are really liking it and can see all of that. I hardly know how it's coming. And this is really funny because I always check your stories for updates though I haven't had much time for reading. XD Well I'll try my best to update more! Thanks!
Author's Response: Yup! Coming up! Thanks for the review. |
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