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Reviews For I capture the castle
'Harry grinned cheekily, dropping into one of the tiny, plastic chairs at the table. "Come and sit," he invited graciously, pointing to a yellow chair that had a Winnie the Pooh sticker stuck to the back. "Five points from Gryffindor," said Snape stiffly...' Wonderful rapport between Harry and Snape!
Now no more Harry... Padriac now. I take is as good sign if Severus is only confused instead of anything else. Sure, Harry wouldn't like to show Severus any unhappy memories though he has hardly any good memories. I bet Severus is going to be so surprised when he goes on with harry life-story. Please update soon!
I'd love to know what Harry was dreaming about! Seems a very odd dream for what had been happening earlier. I'd have liked to see Harry in Ravenclaw! Interesting that DD seemed to think Harry'd do well in Slytherin & belonged there -- I wonder, did he always feel that way? Author's Response: I really and seriously considered placing Harry in Ravenclaw, but, when it came down to it, it didn't work with my plot, and, to be honest, he just isn't a Ravenclaw kind of guy. I always took the Sorting Hat's little "Slytheirn will help you on the way to greatness" thing to mean that Harry has a set goal, and will go to any lengths to reach it. When he wants to do something, he does it, so he's very ambitious like that. And there is no doubt that he does posess cunning, but Slytherin would refine it, where Gryffindor rather blunted it.
As for Dumbledore, you'll find out what he thinks in due time.
Just my thoughts and reasoning on the matter. I'm trying to keep this as original as possible, so it was difficult for me to put Harry in Slytherin, seeing as that's what everyone else does, but it's the best decision in the end.
Glad you're enjoying the story. Thanks for reading.
Well, that was an enjoyable jaunt through traditional territory for a Severitus. I like the idea of using occlumency training as an excuse for Snape to learn more about Harry. I like the pace you are setting--not too fast and not too slow. I always want to get to the "good" parts, but the build-up needs to be believable.
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