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Title: Chapter Seven: To Be Named 17 Nov 2006 6:40 pm
Reviewer: Alucard (Anonymous) [Report This]
    †...Wow!! Very good!! I only found this a few days ago, but I've read it till my eyes bled lol. Please update soon!! Definate fave!!!...†
Title: Chapter Seven: To Be Named 28 Jun 2006 8:18 pm
Reviewer: Catti666 (Anonymous) [Report This]

    Now no more Harry... Padriac now. I take is as good sign if Severus is only confused instead of anything  else. Sure, Harry wouldn't like to show Severus any unhappy memories though he has hardly any good memories. I bet Severus is going to be so surprised when he goes on with harry life-story. Please update soon!

     

Title: Chapter Seven: To Be Named 16 Jun 2006 7:06 am
Reviewer: veritas (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Ha ha! Loved the leprechaun line! Another great chapter. This story is really progressing nicely. I hope that you update soon, and I can't wait to see what Slytherin life will be like for Harry or Padriac. Being Snape's apprentice for anyone could be scary, I can't imagine what it will be like for Harry. lol. Thanks for updating.
Title: Chapter Seven: To Be Named 16 Jun 2006 2:59 am
Reviewer: nancy in chicago (Anonymous) [Report This]

    I'd love to know what Harry was dreaming about!  Seems a very odd dream for what had been happening earlier.

    I'd have liked to see Harry in Ravenclaw!  Interesting that DD seemed to think Harry'd do well in Slytherin & belonged there -- I wonder, did he always feel that way? 



    Author's Response:

    I really and seriously considered placing Harry in Ravenclaw, but, when it came down to it, it didn't work with my plot, and, to be honest, he just isn't a Ravenclaw kind of guy. I always took the Sorting Hat's little "Slytheirn will help you on the way to greatness" thing to mean that Harry has a set goal, and will go to any lengths to reach it. When he wants to do something, he does it, so he's very ambitious like that. And there is no doubt that he does posess cunning, but Slytherin would refine it, where Gryffindor rather blunted it.

     

    As for Dumbledore, you'll find out what he thinks in due time.

     

    Just my thoughts and reasoning on the matter. I'm trying to keep this as original as possible, so it was difficult for me to put Harry in Slytherin, seeing as that's what everyone else does, but it's the best decision in the end.

     

    Glad you're enjoying the story. Thanks for reading.

Title: Chapter Seven: To Be Named 15 Jun 2006 10:10 pm
Reviewer: sunsethill (Signed) [Report This]

    Well, that was an enjoyable jaunt through traditional territory for a Severitus.  I like the idea of using occlumency training as an excuse for Snape to learn more about Harry.  

    I like the pace you are setting--not too fast and not too slow.  I always want to get to the "good" parts, but the build-up needs to be believable.

Title: Chapter Seven: To Be Named 15 Jun 2006 6:10 pm
Reviewer: Arualcopia (Signed) [Report This]
    That was a great chapter. I especially liked the end with the Leprechauns (a cute little touch). The way you've had Snape and Harry go through the memories is really cool- I like that Harry is giving Snape a really hard time! I'm glad that you've started the new identities. It will be interesting to see Harry in with the Slytherins and Lupin trying to be Harry. I can't wait for an update.
Title: Chapter Seven: To Be Named 15 Jun 2006 2:53 pm
Reviewer: Ellie (Signed) [Report This]
    Hehe... Harry in Slytherin, that's good :D This chapter is really all right. I like this relationship between Harry and Severus. And that trip into the Pensieve.Great :PUpdate soon.
Title: Chapter Seven: To Be Named 15 Jun 2006 2:38 pm
Reviewer: chmcm (Anonymous) [Report This]
    This is a good chapter.  I am enjoying your story. Please keep updating
Title: Chapter Six: Through Eyes of Shrouded Black 13 Jun 2006 5:31 pm
Reviewer: catti666 (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Well, I guess I was not clever enough to find your tips but I will review anyhow.  But after all not my first language so that was not so surprise. Sigh, he got away from it at least for moment. But I guess, wrong I know that Snape won't forget to renew his try getting know about Harry's past via the occlumency. But on the other hand he might start to realize that not everything is fine with Harry from his memories. I don't think that Harry even wants to remember his early memories as they are so bad and easiest thing to do with them is get himself to forget them all and live up his reputation as Harry Potter. You're going to redo some parts of your story... Well, do that but please go on with the story so well. Hoping for new chappy soon!
Title: Chapter Six: Through Eyes of Shrouded Black 11 Jun 2006 8:49 am
Reviewer: veritas (Anonymous) [Report This]
    AWesome chapter! Can't wait for another update!!!!!!

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