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Reviews For Solitary Confinement
Best line ever! Great story so far...I love how you're staying in character
Author's Response: Thanks very much ^_^ will do. Next chapter should be up within a couple of days.
I don't know how to tell you how much I like your story, so I'm just going to say it's briliant, with finelly portraited characters and enough angst to satisfy any angst addict . The only problem? Your chapters are too short. :P. Keep them coming. Author's Response: lol I'm trying to rectify it as we type. The next chapter is shaping out to be much longer, so it should satisfy.
Author's Response: Great to hear, and yes he was. But unfortunatley he isn't the only one who can speak Parseltongue. Mwahaha!
I loved Harry's lines toward the end, they were fantastic! Update soon! Author's Response: Thanks very much ^_^ will do! If ever you see me taking my tie feel free to give me a swwift kick up the butt to get me moving lol
My favorite line was this: "A human was something Harry could deal with in this situation. A Snape on the other hand ..." Lol a Snape! It made me laugh. Author's Response: Yay! Someone picked out my favourite line! You're the first and only person to single it out as being humourous, I love you ^_^ lol
Nice chapter. I guess the ligilmens is what made Harry in such a state. The quesiton I have is did he dream he was nagini or is it unrealted? Also is my assumption correct about him feeling that way because of the ligilmens and why is he in so much trouble? To do with the big V perhaps? Great chappy keep up the good work. Author's Response: Most of this will be explained in the next chapter, but no, Harry's dream was no unrelated. It's a massive part of the plot, in fact lol. Any yep, you assuemd correctly. The Legilimency would leave any untrained wizard wiped out, especially when it's Snape that threw you out of his head. And Harry's in trouble because he breached Snape's memories. Extremely personal. Snape's going to be a tad upset lol. Hope this answers your questions ^_^ |
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