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Reviews For Solitary Confinement
I loved Harry's lines toward the end, they were fantastic! Update soon! Author's Response: Thanks very much ^_^ will do! If ever you see me taking my tie feel free to give me a swwift kick up the butt to get me moving lol
My favorite line was this: "A human was something Harry could deal with in this situation. A Snape on the other hand ..." Lol a Snape! It made me laugh. Author's Response: Yay! Someone picked out my favourite line! You're the first and only person to single it out as being humourous, I love you ^_^ lol
Nice chapter. I guess the ligilmens is what made Harry in such a state. The quesiton I have is did he dream he was nagini or is it unrealted? Also is my assumption correct about him feeling that way because of the ligilmens and why is he in so much trouble? To do with the big V perhaps? Great chappy keep up the good work. Author's Response: Most of this will be explained in the next chapter, but no, Harry's dream was no unrelated. It's a massive part of the plot, in fact lol. Any yep, you assuemd correctly. The Legilimency would leave any untrained wizard wiped out, especially when it's Snape that threw you out of his head. And Harry's in trouble because he breached Snape's memories. Extremely personal. Snape's going to be a tad upset lol. Hope this answers your questions ^_^
Author's Response: Will do!!
Author's Response: lol I recieved 10 points from my beta for extra gore, so what can I say? I couldn't resist. Thanks very much for your comments!
Author's Response: Whoa!! Thanks very much, seriously. No one's ever said anything like that before. Thanks! Ugh, I know it. The next chapter will be much longer, I swear it. It's just full of content, so look out for that! Author's Response: Whoa!! Thanks very much, seriously. No one's ever said anything like that before. Thanks! Ugh, I know it. The next chapter will be much longer, I swear it. It's just full of content, so look out for that!
Author's Response: Will do!
OOh! I love it! ~Tilly Author's Response: Thanks very much ^_^ I'll update as soon as possible!
Author's Response: Fantastic to hear ^_^ I will as soon as I'm able. Thanks very much for reviewing!
Ah! GREAT! LOL. Oh man, yes you did indeed manage to make Snape not so soft this time. XD Oh man, poor Harry! I really, really like your characterization of Snape, his blunt way of stating how he doesn't like children, how he wants to kill someone once in a while. Harry was really pushing it when he made that Death Eater comment. Earlier though it felt a little off when Snape was explaining the charm an dthe way he quirkled his eyebrow. He seemed nice there and the swift transition didn't quite make it. Also, I don't think you mentioned that Snape let go of Harry's neck. XD So Snape turned away while Harry was still being choked. XD Good job on the chapter though. I really liked the use of the charm, and their rage. Dobby was cute and the Snape vanished him, aw poor Dobby. Author's Response: Ah well, que sera sera. lol. Thanks very much for all your comments and we'll pretend that he did stop chocking Harry ... despite how little he wanted to lol. I may have confused Snape there I suppose, with his teacher mode and nice more. Nice mode not really existing but still lol. Right, I'll work on that next chapter - consistan meaness lol. |
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