Title: Immunity
| 10 Jul 2006 12:46 am
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Reviewer: Becca (Anonymous)
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Cool! I read the other fic too and really liked it. The interaction between Hermione and Snape was great and very realistic. It would be like Snape to do that to Harry just to make him fail!
Title: Immunity
| 09 Jul 2006 11:16 pm
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Reviewer: lilyseverus100 (Anonymous)
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UPDATE!!! I can't wait to find out what happens next!!!
That was cool. I like how Harry used the vaccination incident as a defense in occlumency. Kind of spitting in Snape's face... in a way. Oh and I liked how you did the slytherin cunning- Snape trying to bait and hook Hermione, only to be blackmailed himself...
*That* was a brilliant chapter. You left me on the edge of my seat. You drew Hermione so amazingly well. I'm quite tired of seeing dumbed-down or, alternately, all-brains-but-no-personality Hermione. Your character shows Gryffindor bravery, high intellect, cunning, and passion for her cause. I look forward to reading more of this story.
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