This is one of my all time favs!
Great story! I felt like Snape agreed to looking after the boy a little quickly though but apart from that the story flowed swimmingly :)
Great story! I felt like Snape agreed to looking after the boy a little quickly though but apart from that the story flowed swimmingly :)
| Title: Chapter Twenty-One
| 29 Mar 2018 1:21 am
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| Reviewer: Dimplz (Signed)
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This was a very darling story! I loved Harry's imagination!
You absolutely could be a 'real' author! Best wishes, Lily Elizabeth Snape, here's to hoping all goes well for you!
I consider this story a classic, and one of my favorite Snape/Harry stories out there, period. Kudos, my friend! The Harry Potter fandom is lucky to have you :) Thanks for all the work and creative effort you put into this!
I can't believe it... It just ENDED!! Where did all my chapters of great and wonderful story go?
On a more serious note, I really enjoyed this read. The Severus in this work, though not perfect in the least, was wonderfully realistic. It was hard for him to make such a drastic change, and you captured that beautifully. I also appreciated that Harry that ACTUALLY seemed his age. The simple organization of his thoughts really captured that of a child's.
Thanks for a fantastic read!
This is such an adorable story! Their relationship is so cute, I can hardly stand it! I like how in the beginning they didn't understand each other at all and you explained each of their point of views. It was occasionally confusing having 1st person point of views for each character, but I got used to it and ended up liking the personal narration.
| Title: Chapter Twenty-One
| 24 Nov 2015 1:36 am
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| Reviewer: abgu (Signed)
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I've read this story twice and absolutely loved it both times! Thank you so much for sharing!
aww how sweet. this is a great story so far. cant wait for more of this story. :)
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