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Title: Chapter 33 20 Sep 2007 12:21 pm
Reviewer: Polaris (Signed) [Report This]
    Wow, this story is going in a new direction. I don't like that Harry did that to Albus, pretty much because I have a soft spot for him. I know Harry's had a tough time. I just hope Albus is alright. I liked the last line about leaving Severus to decide when Harry should come out of the dungeons more. Wise indeed.

    So how did Harry do all that without it being Leglimency? Or is he a natural or something? Or was it just that he used the link Albus had already created? Interesting.

    It's kind of starting to seem that Harry will not be ready to go back to school when it starts. Not that I'm surprised. I even think it could make an interesting story, having him still recover when school starts again. They shouldn't rush him, it will just make it harder in the long run.

    Thanks for the fast updates, love them! Hope you have fun writing the next one. See you then!
Title: Chapter 33 20 Sep 2007 9:39 am
Reviewer: Jonathan (Anonymous) [Report This]
    OMG! Hehehe. He shared too much info to Dumbledore! Personally I think Dumbledore is a sly, manipulative old man who only used Harry as a tool for defeating Voldemort. But now I feel sorry for him since he's seen all of Harry's suffering. Good update! Please keep writing!

    Best regards,
    Jonathan
Title: Chapter 33 20 Sep 2007 9:34 am
Reviewer: Arualcopia (Signed) [Report This]
    I knew it would be Wednesday (see it's still wed. pst!) I was holding out, hoping for an update, and what did I find?! Well, anyway, to review:

    I enjoyed this chapter, it was a great wrap up to what occurred in the last one. Especially since Snape was all "snapy", being angry and snapping at everyone. But he is still lucid and able to respond quickly to the situation. (I say very in character Snape and most enjoyable to read...) Some stories go a little overboard with the angry Snape and have him overreact and make mistakes all the time. You balance out is anger/rashness with keeping Snape functional/cool. I'm rambling... hopefully you get what I'm trying to say.

    I also liked Harry's reaction. I'm glad he's all horrified at what he did (although I think Dumbledore got what he was asking for (sorta)... even though no one really deserves to suffer).

    Dumbledore's reaction was also good. I'm glad he's decided to give Harry and Snape some space. Minerva was good too... Hmmm that's all your characters right? Well the chapter was all around good, so that makes sense.

    Again, I can't wait for an update. But as I'm reading all your stories, I suppose I'll be okay. (And there's no crazy cliffy this time!) I hope you enjoyed this semi-long review, even if it's a bit rambly... and happy writing.
Title: Chapter 33 20 Sep 2007 9:14 am
Reviewer: LaToya_Snape (Anonymous) [Report This]
    wowo GREAT CHAPTER AWSOME,thats all i can say really good

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