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Reviews For Walk the Shadows
So how did Harry do all that without it being Leglimency? Or is he a natural or something? Or was it just that he used the link Albus had already created? Interesting. It's kind of starting to seem that Harry will not be ready to go back to school when it starts. Not that I'm surprised. I even think it could make an interesting story, having him still recover when school starts again. They shouldn't rush him, it will just make it harder in the long run. Thanks for the fast updates, love them! Hope you have fun writing the next one. See you then!
Best regards, Jonathan
I enjoyed this chapter, it was a great wrap up to what occurred in the last one. Especially since Snape was all "snapy", being angry and snapping at everyone. But he is still lucid and able to respond quickly to the situation. (I say very in character Snape and most enjoyable to read...) Some stories go a little overboard with the angry Snape and have him overreact and make mistakes all the time. You balance out is anger/rashness with keeping Snape functional/cool. I'm rambling... hopefully you get what I'm trying to say. I also liked Harry's reaction. I'm glad he's all horrified at what he did (although I think Dumbledore got what he was asking for (sorta)... even though no one really deserves to suffer). Dumbledore's reaction was also good. I'm glad he's decided to give Harry and Snape some space. Minerva was good too... Hmmm that's all your characters right? Well the chapter was all around good, so that makes sense. Again, I can't wait for an update. But as I'm reading all your stories, I suppose I'll be okay. (And there's no crazy cliffy this time!) I hope you enjoyed this semi-long review, even if it's a bit rambly... and happy writing.
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